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Poem 2:
Structure to use.
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Bayonet Charge
Speaker: From a viewpoint of a solider who is running in an attack
Compare with: The Charge of the Light Brigade - The description of action in war.
Mametz Wood - Contrast between war and its aftermath
Belfast Confetti - Language chosen to depict violence
Chosen key points: Metaphors, similes, onomatopia, imagery and personification used.
Chosen quotes: 'The patriotic tear that had brimmed in his eye Sweating like molten iron from the
centre of his chest' - painful burning in his chest, fighting with fear, tear of honour/pride then turns
to no patriotism....just wants to get out of it.
'King, honour [....]' All patriotism lost. 'His terror's touchy dynamite' He's so scared he could explode.
Running to get out of it.
Chosen key quotes: 'no armistice' - no end, no solution, no peace, conflict carries on.'[....] turned
up his face [....]' enjambment - carries on nothing stop
Chosen key points: Repetition, metaphor, double meanings, enjambment, description with use of
senses, child innocence
Futility - last stanza
Belfast Confetti - conflict in the city streets
Poppies - war affects on ordinary people
Compare with: The Right Word - repeated patterns to emphasise meaning and theme
Speaker: 'Narrator's walk down Palestine Street in Baghdad reveals different terrible images
Belfast Confetti
Speaker: 1st person in explosion
Compare with: The Yellow Palm - violence in a city
Bayonet Charge - images that leap from one to another to describe confusion
The Right Word - the theme of violence and those who might bring it
Out of the Blue - building
Chosen key points: No structure (enjambment to show explosion), irregular, to achieve an eractic
and fragmented feel within this poem. - confusion + explosion. Stilled effected now.
Chosen quotes: 'A fusillade of question - marks' - police/soliders, himself - confusion. turmoil,
panic, nationality, future.
Chosen quotes: Majority emphasise power/arrogant(ce). creater (capitals) thinks he's in charge.
Chosen key points: interpretations - political leaders (power) - dictatorship, metaphorical, literal.
Yellow Palm - violent imagery
Compare with: The Falling Leaves - a quiet mood of grief. Natural + metaphors
Speaker: Hawk
Hawk Roosting
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Flag
Speaker: Poet - considers the power of a simple piece of cloth, a flag.
Compare with: The Charge of the Light Brigade - blindly following orders in battle which lead to
death
next to of course god america i - an ironic voice
Poppies - a symbol of remembrance of those who diesw in war
Chosen key points: connotations of flag, semantic fields, form all the same except the last stanza,
altnerative interpretation of knees, personification
Chosen quotes: 'just' repeat + could be sarcasm/ last stanza - emphasing it has a bigger meaning
(trying to make a point) 'cloth' repeated throughout except last stanza - emphase power of the cloth.
Chosen key quotes: 'split second' - shows turning point, poem changes. 'leaned' emotional pain
she cant stand up - link to wishbone. 'spasms' - metaphor shows excitement - pride/duty for his
country.
Chosen key points: semantic fields, free verse + enjambment (no regular rhyme scheme or rhythm
+ run on lines), metaphor simile
The Yellow Palm - a natural symbol of peace
The Charge of the Light Brigade - personal grief + public celebration + how 1
thing can change peoples lifes.
Compare with:The Falling Leaves - a quiet mood of grief
Speaker: A mother recalls an incident
Poppies
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Futility
Speaker: Owen himself talking about 1st person experience of life on the front. (how futile the
waste of life was)
Compare with: The Falling Leaves: written from a woman 3rd perso, pacifist (concerned about
the effect) like Owen thinks its futile + understated comment on the waste of young life.
Come on, Come back: the death of an individual soldier in war (diff: imaginery)
Mametz Wood: the First World War and the mood of quiet regret
Chosen key points: personification to sun, v.vocab on pointlessness, use of questions
Chosen quotes: ' kind old sun' - desperate, sun is only hope.
'Move' - command
Mametz Wood
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Chosen quotes: 'by jingo [....]' - american slang, not serious. Speaks hastily so he mispronounced
'golly' -> 'gorry'
Chosen key points: mockery (sytrical), starts patriotic then starts mocking. Short last sentence doesn't care/no meaning
Flag - the call to patriotism
Belfast Confetti - deliberate confused syntax (order) for effect
Compare with: The Right Word - language and its meanings
Speaker: imaginary patriotic speach
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Unseen Poetry
Use song - Who, what, how, why
Plan x2
Who:
What: (purpose)
What: (feelings)
How:
Why: