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Sample Question:
You have a present that was really memorable. It could have been given for an important occasion or
just for no reason at all. Tell us about the present and why it was memorable. Include the reason it was
given, a description of it, and how you felt when you got it.
The objective is to write a narrative essay about a present you were given
The TOPIC is a memorable present
The TASK is to tell about the present, why it was memorable
The three main subtopics are:
the reason it was given
a description of it
and how you felt when you got it
(NOTE: the subtopics are not always listed)
Outline your five paragraph essay; including introduction, body and closing:
2. Introductory Paragraph
introduce the general topic in two sentences: memorable present
end introduction with a strong thesis statement that hints at your three main subtopics:
1.
2.
3.
Transition
Transition
Transition
ORGANIZATION is key. Use a mind map, or brainstorming to find the main ideas, then put
them in a logical order in an outline.
o You will not have time to make a draft copy, so follow your outline as you write
Write in the active voice
o It is much more powerful.
o Unless you are writing a personal narrative, do not use the pronoun "I."
Varying sentence structure
o Review to avoid the same dull pattern of always starting with the subject of the
sentence. Avoid repetitious pronouns and lists
o Avoid beginning sentences the same way (subject + verb + direct object).
Brainstorm to find the best supporting ideas
o The best supporting ideas are the ones about which you have some knowledge. If you
do not know about them, you cannot do a good job writing about them.
o Don't weaken the essay with ineffective argument.
o Supporting ideas, examples, details must be specific to the sub-topic
Argument or Reason 1
Argument or Reason 2
Argument or Reason 3
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The Conclusion or Summary Paragraph
A good conclusion will
rephrase the question
summarize the main ideas
o The conclusion should leave your reader with no doubt as to your
position or conclusion of logic
o You can do this by paraphrasing the topic sentences of your body
paragraphs
give your opinion, if you haven't given it already,
look to the future (say what will happen if the situation continues or changes)
o make a prediction or give a solution
NEVER add new information
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Technical details
Adapted and revised with permission from: Kasper, J. The Five Paragraph Essay, 14 January, 1999,
http://www.geocities.com/SoHo/Atrium/1437/eval.html (9 June 2001) http://www.studygs.net/5paragraph_edit.htm
Editing Checklist
From Gear, J. & Gear, R. (2006) Cambridge Preparation for the TOEFL Test 4th ed.