I was presented with the job from ConnextCast of making an advert
about how teenager in-between 13-18 can stay safe online. This can be in any form from Anti-Bullying to how to keep their devices safe from hacker, bugs and other things that may harm. The brief stated to me that the advert had to have a positive outcome for the viewers watching. To be able to successfully make my advert and allow it to appeal to my audience and feel connected to it I had to think about many different qualities. One of the main qualities I had to consider was the structure of the advert. The structure is the foundation of the whole advert and allows me to successfully communicate the message that I would like to convey to the audience. The structure of the advertisement is a young teenage girl (the main actress) is the first thing the audience is presented with and she is just calmly walking into her room. During the progression of the advert we see that she receives a hateful message from bullies who are trying to provoke her despair and they accomplish that goal. Once we see that the main character is in despair we are then presented with the actress looking at her phone again however receiving positive message of encouragement from hope contradicting what the previous bullies had said to her. The use of having a structure like this was in order to persuade the audience that bullying is never the right things to do. I had hoped to urge the audience not to do as the bullies did in the video and had hoped to allow the audience to feel what the actress had felt when she received those messages. This was done through the use of her facial expression, the music and the actress herself. This would fit the concept of the advert due to the fact that the style of the advert is dramatic. The advert is dramatic in tone due to the fact that it is a serious topic. The form of the advert is stand alone and realistic narrative. This is due to the fact that it isnt a chain of anti-bullying adverts from this company and its the only one as well as the fact that the narrative is something that may happen in a real life situation. The effectiveness and finishing product of the advert is done to a high standard as well as qualities due to the reason that there were various things that needed to be considered when making it. This would include things such as the purpose, the technical qualities and the overall look that the advert possesses. The first thing I decided to think about was the purpose of the advert and if the advert was fit for that purpose. The advert that I produced was meant to be educational the audience about the effects of bullying and the consequences that it may possess. I was able to successfully portray that, during the production of the advert and through the use of the actress. The next thing that I had to consider was the clarity of communication. I was able to show the communication and message of the advert successfully through the 1 Khrystlyn Wilson
storyline and actress. I was also able to commutate the message
clearly due to the answers and reaction that I was able to get whilst doing the focus group. To be able to successfully target my audience and get the correct information that was needed to evoke their emotions and feelings during the advert I asked various questions such as if they thought there were enough help for teens about bullying, if they felt like they needed help from peers as well as parents and what they know about being safe online. By asking these questions I was able to incorporate what they said to me in the advert to make it successful. I also think that the direct message from the actress addressing the subject of anti-bullying would be useful because it would have allowed them to remember if it was directly targeted towards them. Once I had thought about the communication aspect of the advert I also had to think about the effectiveness of content. These were all the qualities that were exhibited in the advert. I was able to successfully portray this due to the use of the actress and the storyline of the advert and was able to put across the context and message of what I was trying to portray. One of the important things that I had to consider was the technical quality of the advert- this is the editing and how the finishing product may look successful. The technical qualities in my advert is finished to a good standard due to the high quality/definition of the footage as well as how smoothly the transitions are in between each video. The last thing I had to think about was the aesthetic of the video. In order for my advert to appeal to my audience I had to think about how I would present it to them. This meant that I had to put in qualities that would allow my audience to enjoy the advert such as the music and the settings that its in. The music that I used was a remix from an original and well-known song that has been made upbeat and fast in pace. This was effective to appeal to my audience to the fact that my audience likes this type and genre of music. However there were some aspects that I had to change in order for the finishing product to be presentable as well as successful. During the process of the advertisement there were some qualities that had to be changed for my audience to successfully enjoy and understand the advert and appeal to my audience. In order for my advert to appeal to my audience of 13-18 year olds I had to change a few scenes and choices made in the advert in order for it to make it a bit more relatable to my audience. This meant things like changing the music as well as the storyline of the advert. These choices were made to make the advert successful towards my audience. The first thing I had decided to change was the music for the
advertisement. I had originally decided to use Christina Perris
Human for the soundtrack of my advert in order for the emotions and feelings to be portrayed a bit better but I found a music that was able to portray the same emotions in a better way than my original decision. Whilst I did like using the Christina Perri- Human I just thought it gave the advert a slow and boring atmosphere thus not making it appealing to the audience to watch because the tempo was too slow and not progressing anywhere. I then thought about looking for a better song with the same emotions the song did as well as a bit of a faster pace, and that's how I thought to do a remix song. This was how I found Ben Cock So Cold (Al Bear RMX). I thought that this song will appeal to my audience a bit more than the previous one due to the tempo, the fact that its a remix, and the song adapts to the advert. Allowing the music to be a remix would appeal to the audience because they would find it audibly appealing and would give them a reason to watch the advert. As well as the music I had decided to change a few scenes in the advertisement to ensure that it appeals to my audience and it doesn't seem childish and uninteresting. The other thing that I changed was the storyline of the advert. I thought that changing the advert would be a better choice than what I originally had due to the fact that the concept and technical editing were too profound for me and would confuse the audience as to what is really happening within the advert. At first I had the idea of having someone at the centre of the world and universe however as they get bullied the bubble gradually became smaller and smaller and that they felt suffocated and isolated from the outside world. I changed this concept due to the fact that the editing for this would be too hard for me to do because if the editing software that I had. In order to allow my advert to be able to target my audience I decided to get information about them and about the kind of things they enjoy such as: the programmes they watch as well as their interests and their favourite genre of music. I gathered this information through the use of questionnaires and voxpox questions. Once I had gathered this information I then incorporated it in the advert through the use of the costume, props, settings, actor and music. However I think that there could have been more that I could have done in order to target my audience in a more proficient way such as what the actor may say during the advert. During the thought process about what I wanted to include in my advert I thought about adding the use of slang. I thought about adding slang order to appeal to my audience and that its something that they are able to relate to due to the fact that they would probably be able to better understand the context of whats happening. However I thought that it might also make the
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advert look a bit unprofessional and may make it look uncompleted
and untidy. In terms of the various different projects that I have done in terms of moving image work I think that the social message campaign that has been recently done has been a huge improvement in terms of editing, concept and filming. The first work that I did which was the ident wasnt to the best that it could have been due to the fact I was unaware of the variables that it would have taken to make it look successful and professional. Due to the fact that it was my first image work there were no special effects or anything that stood out from any other. The only thing that was incorporated was music however this was only due to the fact that it made the ident interesting and it was a technique that that was needed. However due to the fact that we had then been given the chance to do little projects I then learnt what it took to make any moving image successful no matter the concept. I then incorporated this into the music video that I produced. The music video had various different effects as well as different camera shots due to the style and techniques that I wanted to add to the video. The fact that I had watched other music videos and was able to practise by making a test music video before allowed me to play around with the editing and be able to learn a few things as I was doing that. Doing all these allowed me to learn the skills that were needed to put into the social message campaign. Watching other videos like mine in terms of same storyline and same aspects allowed me fully understand what needed to be done and gave me a clear understanding of what I had wished for it to look like. However due to the fact that it was social message campaign I thought that there shouldnt be any special effects because it may distract the audience from the message that was trying to be portrayed. It would have been better to keep it plain and simple for the audience to stay focused and know what they true picture was.