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The rocket truck speeds over open
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LOGAN: I hate ocean runs! Nothing ever
happens!

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LOGAN: Uuuuuuuuu--

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Logan pushes his face into his hands.
Blue wanders aimlessly into the shot.

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Blue walks directly into the bulkhead
with a solid bonk. Logan pulls his face
down with his hands.

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LOGAN: --UUUUUUGHHHHH

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Logan continues to stretch his face.
Blue recovers and changes directions.

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DAD: Logan, why don't you just watch TV
like you always do?

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LOGAN: The only thing they're playing
is a marathon of that stupid reality
trucker show!

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Logan gestures violently towards the
screen. All look towards the screen.

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ANNOUNCER: Welcome back to ROAD TO
GLORY with Max Turbine!! The only show
bringing you the road!!

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LOGAN: They don't get anything right!

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Show appears on TV

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Logan folds his arms.

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Logan sinks into his seat, displeased.

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DAD: Oh look!

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DAD: Cortuna Bay! That's pretty close
to us!

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Dad perks up.

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Obnoxious motion graphics on the TV.

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Max Turbine winks, sending a star
careening towards the camera.

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The star grows larger.

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The star turns into a garish
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MAX TURBINE: Welcome to Cortuna Bay,
where we're bringing it--

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Max Turbine is now standing on a beach,
the back of his truck and a palm tree
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MAX TURBINE: To the MAX!! Yeah! We're
delivering--

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MAX TURBINE: --These tiny bikinis--

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MAX TURBINE: To these chicks!

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Max flexes, bulging everywhere.

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Max makes a pinching gesture.

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Max points behind the camera.

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The camera spins quickly, blurring the
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Chicks. In bikinis.

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One squawks.

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One falls over.

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A jet of water appears in the distance,
as the squawker produces squawk 2:
electric boogaloo

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MAX TURBINE: Whats that? Camera, zoom
in!

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The water jet grows larger.

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MAX TURBINE: A truck?

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The camera zooms in, revealing a truck
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LOGAN: Huh, that looks kinda like our
truck.

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The camera zooms in again, showing
Logan, Blue and Dad in the cabin
watching their screen.

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They all look up into the camera.

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BLUE: THAT IS OUR TRUCK!
LOGAN: BRAKE BRAKE BRAKE

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They freak out.

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The truck is shooting over the water.

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ALL: Continuous muffled screaming.

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The engines rotate forward and blast
hard to brake.

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The truck slows, moving backwards in
frame, but obviously still barrelling
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The chicks sit calmly on the sand.

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The truck blows by, barely missing the
chicks.

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The chicks remain unfazed.

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One of the chick's bikinis comes
untied--

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--and falls to the ground.

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Sadface.

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The truck continues its wild braking,
throwing up dust and sand.

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It sprays sand onto Max, but misses him
and his truck.

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It comes to a stop, lightly bumping the
palm tree--

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--Which rights itself--

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And then falls over, crushing the rear
of Max's truck.

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DAD: Yeeeeeaaaahhhhhhhh...

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MAX: My... My...

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MAX: My truck--

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The crew knows they done screwed up.

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Max's distraught, unbelieving face is
framed in the center of the shot.

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The camera zooms out, showing Max's
pleading gesture.

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MAX: My beautiful truck--

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MAX: It's been destroyed!

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DAD: Well, that's unfortunate.
MAX: Yuup.

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The camera continues to zoom out,
pulling away from Max.

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Max throws his head back, and huge
miyazaki tears stream forth.

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Dad and Max stand in front of the
wrecked section of Max's truck. Max
rubs his head with his hand.

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Dad: So, should we call insurance?

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Max: I guess we have to.

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DAD: I really hate those guys.
MAX: Me too, my man... me too.

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Max drops his arm.

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The camera cuts to outer space.
Floating above the planet is a space
station.

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The words "YakuzaCare Insurance
Headquarters" Types out next to the
station. The camera slowly zooms in.

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The camera continues to zoom in.

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YAKUZACARE BOSS: The time has come. Are
you ready, my child?

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YAKUZACARE REP: Yes, master.

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YAKUZACARE REP: I will not fail you!

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The YakuzaCare Boss sits robed in
darkness and shadow, his face poking
out from the pitch darkness under his
hat.

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A single figure kneels on the ground in
front of the YakuzaCare boss dressed in
a business powersuit.

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Cut to the figure's face, eager to
enact insurance justice.

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A drop pod is ejected from the space
station.

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It ignites its boosters.

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And blasts down towards the surface.

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The empty beach is calm, the waves
lapping against the shore.

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The silence is broken by the sound of a
loud rocket.
The drop pod slams into the beach,
throwing up sand and dust.

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The dust settles.

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The door pops open.

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The YakuzaCare Rep pops out.

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YakuzaCare Rep: Ok... Truck, Tree,
clearly an act of nature--

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The rep points to everything with her
pen as she speaks.

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Their conversation gets cut off by a
loud engine sound.

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The engine sound continues.

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A second pod drops onto the beach.

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The dust settles.

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The pod doors open.

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MYSTERIOUS REP: Stop right there!

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And out pops another insurance rep!

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MYSTERIOUS REP: Act of nature... I
didn't think you'd stoop that low...
Angela.

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Camera zooms into the Rep's face.

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ANGELA: You dare challenge me... Donny?

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DONNY: The honor of MafiaGroup
insurance corp demands it.

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Donny raises his fist, revealing s a
set of brass knuckles.

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ANGELA: Then we shall do battle. TO
FIND WHO IS AT FAULT!

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[OC] ANGELA: You will fall before my
might!

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[OC] DONNY: Nothing will stand between
me and your end!

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Blue and Logan look on.

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They look at each other.

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LOGAN: Blue, do you want to just fix
his truck ourselves?

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BLUE: Yeah that sounds more interesting
than this.

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The insurance reps stand on the beach
in front of the crashing waves, a blood
red sun setting in the background.

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DONNY: I've got an offer for you
Angela...

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DONNY: ...On some casualty insurance.

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ANGELA: HA! My rates are awesome
already!

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Donny tightens his grip on his brass
knuckles.

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Red fire erupts from his hands.

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Angela settles into a fighting stance.

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ANGELA: Are you interested in some life
coverage!?

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Cue montage music.
Logan is measuring the top of the
damage. Blue works on moving the tree.

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Blue Plasma shoots forth from her
hands.

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Blue shoves the tree, toppling Logan
off of it.

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Logan is drawing on a tablet.

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He shows it to Blue.

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They smile.

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Plans for fixing the truck.

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Logan is holding a piece of sheet
metal.

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Blue punches it, bending it into an
angle, and directly into Logan's
stomach.

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Logan keels over.

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The reps are now surrounded by their
power. Rocks and debris fly up around
them.

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Battling intensifies.

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Logan is welding. Blue paints the new
side of the truck with some flames.

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They eat lunch. Blue gets knocked over
by a bird landing on her head.

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Dad and Max a ways away from the
battle, as the Reps continue to charge
their power.

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LOGAN: Hey Dad, we fixed everything!

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LOGAN: See?

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Logan and Blue enter.

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Logan gestures off screen.

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Dad whaps Max on the shoulder.

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And then points off screen. Max turns
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LOGAN: All fixed!

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Cut to the truck. It's now been
repaired Blue and Logan style.

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LOGAN: With 100% more rockets!
BLUE: I found the lady on the internet.

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The rocket engine ignites and rumbles.

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They look expectantly towards Max.

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Max looks...

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..And starts to twitch and tear up...

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Blue and Logan make worried noises.

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MAX: It's just how I always imagined it
should be.

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Max cries tears of joy.

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Logan lets out his baited breath in
relief.

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ANGELA: FALL TO MY FAMILY'S SECRET
TECHNIQUE SACRED LIGHTNING CUT!

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DONNY: IT IS YOU WHO WILL FALL TO MY
HIDDEN FISTS OF FIRE!

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Lightning arcs wildly around Angela's
hands, mixing with the flow of power
all around her.

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Donny's fists burst with fire, a
maelstrom of fury enveloping him.

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A cell phone tone goes off from Donny's
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DONNY: Hold on, call from the client.

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DONNY: They settled it internally? OK.
Mhmmm.

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Donny raises his hand, gesturing for
Angela to give him a moment.

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Donny brings out his phone.

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DONNY: Looks like we're not needed here
anymore.

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DONNY: I'm goin' home.

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DONNY: We still on for Tuesday?
ANGELA: You bet! I'll call you tonight.

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Donny and Angela release their power
and Donny hangs up his phone.

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They start walking off. Angela puts her
hair back into a bun.

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They get back into their respective
pods.

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The pod hatches close.

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The engines rumble and then ignite.

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Blasting them off...

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...and out of screen.

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Leaving the beach a little charred, but
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LOGAN: Aahhhh, this day was much better
than I expected.

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Logan and Blue watching the pods take
off.

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Logan looks to his left.

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LOGAN: Hey Max! You want to do this
again sometime?

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MAX: Not on your life.

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Logan shouts over his shoulder.

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Max stands, petting the chick that lost
its bikini. Bikini now back in place.

Blue rolls her eyes.

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LOGAN: Fair enough... Fair enough.

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Logan turns back to the sky.

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LOGAN: You ready to roll Blue?

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BLUE: Let's go.

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The truck rumbles into the screen and
Dad honks the horn.

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