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Youve heard it said that storytelling is an essential element to drawing the reader into
your content and driving more engagement.
So how can you add this element to the blogposts you write?
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Can you fit a captivating story into a social media update, even one thats 140 characters
long?
Heres the great news: Theres a formula for that. Many storytellers and copywriters have
tested out the best intros and segues to draw readers to a piece of content. Their
copywriting formulas just plain workin blogpost intros, in social updates, in emails, and
anywhere else you might happen to write online.
Here are 27 of the best ones Ive heard. Give them a try and see how they might make
storytelling a breeze for you.
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Attention
Why might you trot out a copywriting formula each time you need compelling copy?
I think one of my favorite perspectives on it, from someone who knows copywriting
better than anyone, comes from Copybloggers Demian Farnworth. His take: Copywriting
is the most productive way to get your writing done.
This is what it means to be an efcient writer: keeping your tools handy. You dont have
to recreate the wheel every time.
Finding a great formula that works for youwhether its a storytelling formula, a
headline formula, or any othercan be a big-time productivity boost.
Take a few of these for a spin and see how they might improve your social media posts
and content.
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Identify a problem
Agitate the problem
Solve the problem
Youre looking at one of the most popular copywriting formulas out there. Copyblogger
calls this formula the key to dominating social media. Its ever-present in copywriting lists
and tips.
Compared to the first copywriting formula in our list, its nearly an identical match with
only one difference: Instead of describing a life without the problem (the After part),
PAS describes life if the problem were to persist (the Agitate part).
Examples:
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You get thisand the product does thisso that you get this.
Examples:
4. The 4 Cs
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Clear
Concise
Compelling
Credible
Heres one of my favorite formulas because it reminds me to stay focused on the goals of
the copy and the benefits to the reader. Keep the writing clear, keep it concise, find a
compelling angle to write from, and write with credibility that what youre promising can
be trusted to happen.
Example:
5. The 4 Us
Useful Be useful to the reader
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7. A FOREST
A Alliteration
F Facts
O Opinions
R Repetition
E Examples
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S Statistics
T Threes (Repeat something three times to make it memorable.)
Phew! This is a big one. Youd be hard-pressed to fit this one into a social media update.
But a blogpost? A landing page? Sure thing.
And for those times when youre pinched for copy on social media, you can pull elements
out of A FOREST. Post with alliteration or facts or threes. Pick one, and see how it works.
Example:
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a great opportunity to deliver happiness to potential readers and customers! The PPPP
follows up this dream with specific ways that the product/service/idea can help, along
with proof that it actually does. The final stepcall to actionis crucial, and it can be as
simple as a short URL if youre trying to fit this formula into a tweet.
Example:
Open Loops in TV shows are the equivalent of that cliffhanger that keeps you up at
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night, consuming your mind with thinking about whats going to happen the next week,
or that story line that was never quite explained. Those arent just blips in a script.
They are put there so that its harder for people to get up off the couch than it is to stay
and watch just one more episode.
Example:
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On social media, the Readers Digest blueprint might look like this:
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answer: Why? Copybloggers Brian Clark has a neat way of summing all these
questions up into one big ask:
Why should I buy from you at all when I understand your competition better than you
do, and theres no difference?
Example:
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This formula doesnt necessarily need to be linear. You might tell your story and
introduce your star at the same time. And the star can be anythingyour
product/service/idea or even the reader.
Example:
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sample this one for its focus on
comprehension. Whereas other formulas describe the situation and tell stories, this one
acts more as a diagnosis: This is whats happening, and this is how it affects you. When
done right, the comprehension step should lead straight to conviction then action.
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19. So what?
Every time you state something, ask yourself, So what?
Helen Nesterenko, writing at the Eloqua blog, has a great way of spinning this one from a
features vs. benefits perspective.
One way that Ive looked at this with my Buffer writing is to ask so what in order to test
whether a tweet or paragraph or section adds any value to the reader. Why should
someone care about this particular thing Ive written? Typically, itll all come back to
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benefits.
Example:
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copywriting formula. If listicles dont fit your marketing strategy, you can go in a different
direction by stringing together testimonials or benefits or any stand-alone elements that,
when combined, make for an overwhelmingly persuasive pitch.
Examples:
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Make your call to action. Tell them to reply now and give a good, logical reason
why they should.
Steve Slaunwhite shared this useful formula in his book The Everything Guide to Writing
Copy. You could probably have guessed that the originator of this formula is Bob Stone.
The successful ad man came up with this formula for sales letters and direct response ads,
but its been used in a number of different ways since.
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4. The gap
5. Solution
6. Call to action
+1. Credibility
From Danny Iny of Smashing Magazine, the first six items in this copywriting formula
follow a similar path to the Before-After-Bridge formula, giving the reader a sense of what
life might be like with your product/service/idea. The key element that Danny has
added: credibility.
You can do all of the above and youll be well on your way to a sale, but you still wont
get it without one more ingredient, added along the way. That ingredient is credibility.
Example:
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Shakespeare, Othello
2. Chiasmus Reversal of Structure
Mankind must put an end to war or war will put an end to mankind.
John F. Kennedy
3. Epizeuxis Simple Repetion of Words and Phrases
Never give in never, never, never, never, in nothing great or small, large or petty,
never give in except to convictions of honour and good sense.
Winston Churchill
4. Anaphora Repetition at the Beginning
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What lies behind us and what lies before us are tiny compared to what lies within us.
Conclusion
The best copywriting formula: Yours!
Theres this great quote from David Ogilvy that I think sums up the matter of copywriting
formulas.
Repeat your winners. Scores of great advertisements have been pulled before theyve
begun to payoff. Readership can actually increase with repetition up to ve
repetitions.
His advice is for advertisement specifically, yet it rings true for the way that we write for
the web, for blogs, and for social media. Find a formula that works for you and your
audience, and continue to go back to it as often as you can.
Which formulas do you use in your writing? Did you have a favorite one from this
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a month ago
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Kevan
Haha, excellent! I feel you deserve co-credit for writing this one! So many
great examples from you and the Copyblogger team. :)
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Courtney Seiter
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Tegan @ AdSpruce
a month ago
Awesome post! It's definitely made me realise how much I still don't know about
copy writing. Nightmare!
I'll be trying some of these formulas today.
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Kevan
Excellent! I'd love to know which ones work for you, Tegan!
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Julia
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a month ago
Thank you for such a well-written resource Kevan! I love articles like this that I
can come back to again and again. A tip for you? I'd put your screen captures to
work for you by linking them to the tweets they represent. Some of those tweets
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work for you by linking them to the tweets they represent. Some of those tweets
are interesting. Bet you'd get click-throughs....
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Kevan
Hi Julia! Thanks so much for the comment! That's a great idea to link to
those tweets. :) Glad you found some of them to be interesting!
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ChristaWojciechowski
a month ago
This article is amazing! Thank you, Kevan. It will be my tweet cheat sheet for life.
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a month ago
Kevan
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Darin L. Hammond
3 days ago
I just tweeted to you, Kevan, and this is the kind of excellent, in-depth posts I
referred to as being excellent. I am an Idaho man too - Rexburg. I have taught
university level advanced writing for 11 years, and I wish I would have just had
this to use as my text book.
The whole list is so sharp and seems so complete until I read the next one. I am
going to find a way to compress this as a cheat sheet.
I blog over at ZipMinis: Science of Blogging and Writing
http://www.zipminis.com. I'd love to connect with you.
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Mandy
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3 days ago
You and Demian Farnworth, man. You both write articles and essays that, as a
writer and marketer, leave me in love with words. I regularly check Buffer and
Copyblogger to see if there's a position I could sneak into - I'd bring you coffee
and cronuts every day if it meant I could learn from you.
All that to say: thank you for this!
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Nicholas Mann
22 days ago
I just want to say this was beautiful post, Kevan. Don Draper would be proud.
Neri
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23 days ago
This is a stroke of genius. I'm a storyteller, and I love the conciseness and
immediate utility of your content.
Ollie
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25 days ago
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Kevan
Hi Ollie! Thanks for the comment! Glad you found some takeaways from
this one!
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25 days ago
My goodness, this post packed a lot of punches! Excellent advice here that I
shared with my blogging group today. Thanks!
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Kevan
Thanks so much, Joy! Such an honor you'd share this one with your
peers. Incredible!
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Bram Berkhout
25 days ago
Writing heroes! Writing like heroes. You guys are my heroes @demianfarnworth
@kevanlee
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Kevan
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ELIA SANTIAGO
25 days ago
Great Article this has opened my eyes i will be using this in my Blog thanks for
the tips.
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Kevan
Thanks, Elia!
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Krissanawat Kaewsanmuang
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CuCo Creative
25 days ago
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Kevan
Thanks!
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Andrew McIntosh
a month ago
Very nice and comprehensive list of formulas. Definitely a lot to remember but I'll
be using this post as a reference for a long while to come. I'm a web designer
who's just starting to blog and learning more about internet marketing and
copywriting, so this is invaluable. Thank you!
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Agnes Dadura
a month ago
wow Kevan! Awesome list! But I've actually went to the buff.ly/1nncKjl and it
wasn't concierge music service :D then I've figured out why ;)
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Kevan
Oh, haha! Yes, I probably should have mentioned those aren't real
tweets! Funny, the concierge one is the tweet I most wished were real,
too!
Robyn Willmore
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Thanks Kevan. My job involves a lot of copy writing everyday, and sometimes I
too become jaded and run out of fresh ideas so to speak, but this post has
definitely shown me and reminded me of simple formulas to keep it fresh. I have
saved this post in order to come back to later.
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Kevan
Awesome stuff, Robyn! Hope there are one or two that prove helpful for
you!
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Bryan Collins
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Dylan Goldman
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be devoting an entire blog to social media and how it has changed the ways in
which we communicate (in both professional and personal situations and
circles).
Your article is so thorough and well organized that I plan to use it as a reference
tool within either a future blog post itself or within a "Helpful Links"-type page.
Thanks! Great work.
-Dylan
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Kevan
Hi Dylan! Wow, such an honor you'd consider our Buffer blog for that.
Congrats on finishing up your M.A. Where are you attending? We Buffer
bloggers have a heart for journalism, so it's always neat to make these
kinds of connections. :)
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a month ago
Kevan,
I am doing a fast-track online program through Full Sail University.
At first, I was trepidatious about the stigma associated with
"online education", but after scouring every medium for every
possible resource I could find on the school, I was impressed.
Imagine that...a journalist conducting exhaustive research! Never!
With the way journalism has evolved, I consider a blog as reliable
of a source as an academic journal, provided the research is
thorough, cited, linked and most of all, valid. What can I say, you
met my criteria!
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Iyea Brandy
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Iyea Brandy
a month ago
Really useful list. I am learning more about copy writing and this list contained
everything I could need. Thanks
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Kevan
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Steve Hedstrom
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Kevan
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Kevan
Thanks so much!
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a month ago
These are great, but now I need tips on how to remember them all! LOL I'll pick
my top 5 and save for future use. Thanks for these!
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Kevan
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Michelle Brammer
a month ago
You need to publish a book with all these great tips! Your posts are one of the
very few I print out for future reference. Thanks for these great tips.
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Kevan
Hi Michelle! Thanks for the comment! Glad you enjoyed the tips!
Reinvolve
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a month ago
Great information in this article! Definitely something we can come back to!
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