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Ingo Maierbrugger
Ingo Maierbrugger
Nevertheless, this combination is not a merging of equally important parts. The overall
purpose of this text as well as the overt context remains to be a letter to shareowners,
as this text is also clearly titled this way in the heading. Therefore the rhetorical
organization of a typical letter to the shareholders serves as the basic structure of this
innovative text in which the advertisement elements were inserted into the general
framework of a classical letter to the shareholders.
The text prototypically begins with the salutation of the shareholders, and ends
with the traditional signature of the chairman. Also in between, the letter follows
generally the moves put forward by Skulstad. For example, after an atypical beginning,
already under the first heading of profit, we can find a classic summary statement that
provides both step B: an background for the present scene and step 1: a summary
statement, as stated in Skulstads model:
Profit. Despite lingering economic headwinds, we achieved strong, balanced
results in 2012, meeting or exceeding our long-term volume, revenue and
profit targets as we did in both previous years of our 2020 Vision.
Ingo Maierbrugger
because of the reintroduction of Coca- Cola had supposedly faces- shining and hopeful,
with a special spark in their eyes.
All over the entire letter the author inserts via his personal style and various
statements messages that follow an additional advertising purpose. Sometimes these
insertions are made to show the ethical side of Coca-Cola, when the author for example
speaks about the Coca-Cola people who made a difference in our communities,
volunteering to support worthy causes, creating the image of a carrying Coca-Cola
community. At a different point the author tries to portray the Coca-Cola Company as
ecofriendly business, as we can see in the planet section. And finally introduced in very
informal and personal way the author chooses to talk about obesity: Before I close, I
want to mention a complex societal issue that touches us all: obesity.
Here, like in all the other examples before, the author breaks with his personal
style through the conventions of a classical letter to the shareholders to talk about
something completely different than sales figures and increase of profit. The Coca-Cola
attempts to fight obesity might be of little interest to traditional shareholders. However,
to critics and possible new costumers a supposedly caring Coca-Cola Company charges
the brand with a positive image that shows a company that is not only highly successful
but also ethically clean and embodies all that is good in life.
The last paragraph of the letter brings finally everything we have discussed once
again together: a standardized thank you toward the shareowners, that follows the
purpose and moves of a traditional letter to the shareholders and very personal final
statement that conveys no classic information but the depiction of a Coca-Cola Company
as more than an ordinary firm that merely produces a refreshing beverages, but as a
collection of wonderful people who refresh the world, inspire moments of optimism
and happiness, create value and make a difference.
In conclusion, it is safe to say that the author of this text really has made a
difference. At least he has produced a different type of a letter to the shareholder, as
Muthar Kent, if it was really the CEO himself, who has written this letter, did not only try
to maintain the confidence of his fellow shareowners, but also used this format, and his
personal experiences to do a little bit of brand building, trying to establish the
uniqueness of the Coca-Cola Company, because in the end this extra free advertisement
might make a difference.