Student Name: Jenny Hemsath Self-Evaluation

Performance Criteria Needs

Attention
(0)
Developing
(1)
On target
(2)
Comments

Identified which trait needs developing and provided
a rationale for the trait selection.
2 I completely agree with sentence
fluency as the trait that needs
developing, as well as
connectives. We were in total
sync on this.
Aligned an appropriate focus lesson topic that
provided tools for improvement.
2 We also agreed that the Which
is better is a great strategy to
teach this student about
sentence fluency. I think your
lesson is on point for this
student, teaching the necessary
skills to improve writing. Nice
work
Scaffolded the learning process throughout the focus
lesson and gradually released the skill application to
the students.
2 There is modeling and sample
writing, guided practice, and
independent (partner practice).
Your lesson scaffolds the learning
for students and gradually
releases application to students.
Designed a creative write-to-learn opportunity for
students synthesize content.

2 I think your lesson is a great way
for students to synthesize the
information. Your lesson plan is
extensive and shows examples of
each trait, again, very nice.
Provided coherent instruction for demonstrating a
new writing format
2 You provided instruction in
writing a new writing format.
Modeled a writing sample to demonstrate strong
voice and accurate organization of the writing format
2 You included an example and a
graphic organizer to model the
format and demonstrate what
should be included.
Student Name: Jenny Hemsath Self-Evaluation



Shared three diverse, engaging and powerful mentor
texts to demonstrate a examples of strong voice.
2 Great examples of Strong Voice,
and you included diverse
examples
Provided effective advice on how to transform the
president lesson through technology integration
2 Great examples of integrating
technology.
Suggested appropriate Web 2.0 tools that allow
students to communicate, collaborate, connect and
create.
1 Students connect and create,
perhaps you could consider one
more technology suggestion for
collaboration or communication
between students and/or teacher
Presented mini-portfolio in a professional, organized
format that was edited for accuracy
2 Very professional and engaging. I
am glad you included the
instructions, pictures, etc. Nice
work.
Overall comments:
I think you did great Jenny. I know that you said you required more revision, but I think you included all of
the necessary material, I think all you really need is to walk through for a final edit. The portfolio looks
perfect to me.