Student number _________________________________ Name and Surname of Student__________________________________________________________
Mark according to the rubric and motivate the mark that you give in the comments section. You will be penalised if you mark to leniently or too harshly. Your lecturer will also look at the comments to judge your marking ability. You may make additional comments or correction on the assignment. 4 3 2 CRITERIA ADVANCED PROFICIENT BASIC Comments OCCASION FOR REFLECTION A thing experienced
Responses show that the writer meets all the criteria listed
o memorably presents the experience for the reflection. o uses extended detail like a writer. o uses language to be convincing. o shows great depth of thought. o is creative and original. o reveals ideas through use of comparison and imagery. o Responses show that the writer presents the experience through use of concrete, sensory language, quotations, and narrative accounts that effectively use dialogue, action, and pacing. o effectively focuses on a single subject including related experiences and observations. o Responses show that the writer does not go deeply enough into the reflection. o talks too much about himself/herself instead of the experience. o uses concrete detail.
REFLECTION exploring analyzing o implicitly reveals feelings and thoughts through presentation of the experience. o makes the reader understand the abstract ideas underlying the reflection through use of specific detail.
o is thoughtful, convincing, insightful, and exploratory. o Is firmly grounded in the subject. o reveals a strong connection between the subject and the experience(s). o analyzes the experience by looking at more than one angle. o explores the subject in personal and general reflections. o is limited to flimsy generalizations. WRITING STRATEGIES - using specific, concrete details - comparing, contrasting - naming, describing - reporting conversation - reviewing the history - explaining possibilities - creating a scenario o effectively uses writing strategies to enhance reflection. o uses a variety of writing strategies. o uses specific, concrete details to make the reflection clear to the reader.
o uses few purposeful writing strategies. o uses some details and sensory language.
COHERENCE AND STYLE o consistently uses appropriate language. o shows deep insight through a natural flow of ideas and an effective conclusion. o achieves unity through a natural progression of ideas. o uses precise language.
o uses only simple, generic language. o has lapses in coherence. o has the tendency to digress.
Blog post o The comments clearly demonstrates that the author understood the blog o The authors position is clearly stated o The blog comments contributes to the conversation
o The comments demonstrates that the author understood the blog o The authors position is stated o The blog comments contributes to the conversation o o The comments vaguely demonstrates that the author understood the blog o The authors position is somewhat stated
-1 if all 3 blog posts are not present
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