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Names: Hung - Tuan - Son - Huy (Trouble boys) Class: IELST Preparation Semi

Academic writing task 2 There is an excessive number of cars on our roads today and this leads to many problems. Individuals and governments should ensure that public transport plays a more role in modern life in order to tackle these problems. To what extent do you agree with this statement? *** In recent years, the amount of transportation has been exp o!ing g oba y" Some peop e be ie#e, both citi$ens an! ea!ers shou ! be responsib e for this consi!erab e issue" %rom my point of #ie&, I part y agree &ith this statement for the fo o&ing reasons %irst y, pub ic transport shou ! be appreciate! more because it benefits the citi$ens in a number of &ay" Specifica y, it has the abi ity to ser#e numerous peop e at the same time, thus pre#ents traffic congestions significant y re!uce the number of #ehic es on roa!s" %urthermore, buses prices are reasonab e enough for near y a peop e" Therefore, ess money &ou ! be re'uire! to pro#i!e fue for in!i#i!ua #ehic es" (e#erthe ess, using pub ic transportation has its negati#e si!e" %or instance, pic) poc)eting, sexua harassment, &hich are re ati#e y common in *sian countries i)e +apan, ,hina" -esi!es, buses ten! to ta)e a ot of time. therefore, it/s ess efficient for commuting" ,onse'uent y, the !e#e opment of pub ic transportation ea!s to the !ramatic re!uction of the figure of #ehic es on streets" -y contrast, it a so creates ne& )in!s of crime, &orth ess time for &aiting as &e as incon#enience" Persona y, I recommen! that the go#ernment shou ! combine harmonious y bet&een pub ic transportation an! others" 0or!s count: 123

Names: Hung - Tuan - Son - Huy (Trouble boys) Class: IELST Preparation Semi

Academic writing task 2 There is an excessive number of cars on our roads today and this leads to many problems. Individuals and governments should ensure that public transport plays a more role in modern life in order to tackle these problems. To what extent do you agree with this statement? *** In recent years, the figure of transportations has been exp o!ing g oba y" Some peop e be ie#e, the go#ernments shou ! be enhancing the ro e of pub ic transport &ith the aim to so #e !ifficu t prob ems !ue to persona #ehic es" %rom my point of #ie&, I part y agree &ith this statement for the fo o&ing reasons" %irst y, pub ic transit shou ! be appreciate! more because it benefits the citi$ens in a number of &ays" Specifica y, it has the abi ity to ser#e numerous peop e at the same time, thus pre#ents traffic congestions, as &e as significant y o&ers the number of #ehic es on roa!s in or!er to re!uce fue consumption an! ha$ar!ous emission" %urthermore, the price of pub ic transport such as buses an! sub&ay are reasonab e enough for near y a peop e" Therefore, ess money &ou ! be re'uire! to pro#i!e fue for in!i#i!ua #ehic es" (e#erthe ess, the use of pub ic transportation a so has its !isa!#antages" %or instance, it faci itates a number of socia e#i s such as pic) poc)eting, sexua harassment, &hich are re ati#e y common in *sian countries" -esi!es, in a fe& oca ities, buses ten! to ta)e a ot of time. therefore, it is ess efficient for commuting an! inhibite! users" ,onse'uent y, the !e#e opment of pub ic transit ea!s to the !ramatic re!uction of the figure of #ehic es on streets" -y contrast, it a so creates se#era )in!s of crime, &orth ess time for &aiting as &e as incon#enience" Persona y, I recommen! that the go#ernment shou ! combine harmonious y bet&een pub ic transportation an! others" 0or!s count: 345

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