Many magazines have pictures of famous people on holiday or with their families.

Is it acceptable for famous people to have less privacy than other people? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge and experience. Many Journals publish photographs of celebrity while they are on pleasure trip or when spending time with their families. Whether it is apposite to deny these personalities of their privacy when compared to the masses is a subject of debate as will be discussed in the following paragraphs. Firstly, the life of well known personalities are commonly in public domain due to their personal achievement in life. Naturally they generate a lot of curiosity as more and more people try to emulate their success. For instance, Hollywood actors have a lot of fan followers and are very keen to know about the personal life of their idols. In addition, to obtain popularity , many people try to hog limelight by being controversial. As a result, their private life also comes under constant attention and scrutiny. Evidence can be found in many artists interpretation of contentious subject in the form of cartoon or documentary. However, there is also a school of thought that believes privacy is the fundamental right of any individual and therefore should be respected. Every persons would like relax after their professional hours and it is their right. In many countries , there are laws to protect privacy of an individual. Moreover, people such as Industrialist, politicians have earned their place by dint of hard work unlike some personalities, such as actors who have reached stardom due to media attention. To conclude, it is but natural that celebrities may have to compromise their privacy to a certain extent, which could considered as a price for being popular figures. However, it is necessary to draw line on the extent to which individuals private details are bought to public view. It sometimes may have cataclysmic consequence on personal life.

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