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04-20-07
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Ms. Thomas
“To an Athlete Dying Young” is one of A.E. Housman’s most popular poems from
his collection “A Shropshire Lad.” The Workings of this poem were reworked several
times, to the point where only three original stanzas remained recognizable in the finished
work of Housman’s beloved masterpiece (Haber 85). Housman uses elements from early
Greek poetry, and specifically makes a connection to Pindar’s Olympian Odes. “To an
Athlete Dying Young” finds beauty in the life and death of a young, successful athlete,
even suggesting that his death may have been the most beautiful part of his life (Martin
249).
Within A.E. Housman’s poem “To an Athlete Dying Young” There are two clear
processions in which the athlete partakes. The first is the athlete rising from a town hero
to an Olympic victor. The literary critic Nesca A. Robb compares these processions to the
procession of language:
The language of the opening stanzas has a suggestion of rustic speech that
vanishes completely as the poem mounts to its climax. The image before one’s
eyes at the beginning is that of a country lad, carried shoulder-high through the
streets of an English market town. At the end it is that of an Olympic victor, borne
The language change is paralleled with the changes in status of the athlete (Robb 250). As
seen, in the second procession the athlete proceeds to a young, yet honored death. The
death, since at such a young age is seen as unfulfilled potential. However, at the same
time Housman gives the athlete a type of immortality, and the athlete is a glamorous
Housman in his fifth stanza speaks to the athlete about the let downs of fame that
Housman is bestowing a figurative laurel (the laurel was a wreath given to the victorious
athlete) upon the athlete not for his accomplishments, but for his victory to the grave.
Death is made to be a refuge from the pain and expectations of an athlete. The athlete in
“To an Athlete Dying Young” has escaped these expectations, and did it before his fame
The most commonly agreed upon thing of A.E. Housman’s “To an Athlete Dying
Young” is that it is his most popular poem. Elements that create this popularity are seen
in other poems by Housman, but it is the way in which the poem speaks to the reader, and
draws on the emotions of the reader that make it memorable. Literary Critic Morton
Dauwen Zabel said it best in his 1940 Nation article “The Whole of Housman”
when he said, about Housman’s “To an Athlete Dying Young,” the following: “He
succeeds best of all when the repressed emotion becomes externalized…” Housman is
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using an elaborate word picture to exposes what he knew to be true, and that is that we all
Robert K. Martin says that “To an Athlete Dying Young” is the single most
famous poem written by Housman. He describes the poem as “one celebrating beauty and
grace.” He also attributes its success to Housman’s ability to allow reality to be connected
with the transitory. Martin goes further to compare this attribute of Housman’s to one
Another aspect of “To an Athlete Dying Young” that is agreed upon by a few
critics is Housman’s use of irony within his poetry. Gordon B. Lea explains that he
believes this to be the source of negative criticism among other critics. It creates a
seemingly inconsistent cycle within Housman’s poetry, but it is in fact Housman’s way of
taking a morbid thought and turning it into a delightful one. An example of irony given
by Lea is that of death. Housman makes death an emanate fate for the athlete, but it is
something that is made desirable to the reader. Rather than death being the curse upon
man, life is described as the curse, and the athlete has escaped the curse by dying (Lea
191-192).
Robert K. Martin, while he does not verbally mention irony within his criticism,
does still support the idea that death is the desirable outcome in “To an Athlete Dying
Young.” He in fact takes it further and explains that the early-laureled-head is a picture
showing that the athlete is indeed the victorious one for dying (Martin 249)
An interpretation of the poem that is unique to Robert K. Martin is his idea that
the poem preserves love. He presents his idea in the following quote, comparing the
theme in the poem with one found in the works of Shakespeare: “The idea that art
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preserves by transforming love from the transitory realm of the real into the eternal world
of the imagination…is one of his most persistent themes.” Martin states that this is a
reoccurring theme within all of Housman’s poetry, not just in “To an Athlete Dying
presents the idea that “To an Athlete Dying Young” was based upon early Greek poetry.
He specifically states that it is related to Pindar’s Olympian Odes. Pindar’s Odes focus on
the beauty and grace of an athlete when they reach a point of perfection. Once again
Martin compares the poem to Shakespeare’s sonnets in the aesthetic nature of both
(Martin 249).
Martin rather than seeing the death of the athlete as the final victory he claims that
the figure of the laurel bestows an eternal life to the athlete, by the means of his name
living forever. While the laurel is a key subject in “To an Athlete Dying Young” it is only
explained by Martin. Martin’s connection with the laurel is what allowed him to see the
connection between the poem and Pindar’s Odes. He ventures to say that the whole
meaning of the poem is based upon the understanding of such unstated references in the
poem, but chiefly that of the laurel. He then suggests that the poem is the laurel that
preserves the name of the athlete for an eternity. The Greek ideal of beauty was based
upon youth reaching its full potential. In the third stanza we see how quickly this peak
Housman is showing how short the beauty of the athlete is. This is emphasized in the
comparison with the rose, a flower with one of the shortest blooms. A peaking athlete and
I agree with the idea stated by Zabel that “To an Athlete Dying Young” is
Housman’s most popular poem because of the fact that it draws on the emotions of the
reader. I and many others understand the rigorous strains put upon an athlete, and the
short amount of time that one has to enjoy the glories of athletic competition. However,
one does not have to be an athlete to understand how short opportunities are in life. This
is an area of the poem that allows every person to form a connection with the poem,
Most of the major points of the poem were not disagreed upon by the critics, but
one that stood out to me is Martin’s connection with Pindar’s Olympian Odes. While I
believe that these may have been the main inspiration of “To an Athlete Dying Young” I
do not think that Housman wanted to model them completely. Housman included an
honored and desirable death by the athlete, contradicting the main theme within the Odes.
The Odes celebrate youth and beauty, while Housman celebrates death. While youthful
beauty is a present theme; it is not the main one. The most prominent victory of the
athlete is his death, and his procession to his grave is much greater than any after one of
his victories.
Finally, is the symbol of the laurel. I believe this to be a primary symbol of the
poem in that it praises the athlete one last time after his final victory. Martin would
suggest that the laurel gives the athlete an eternal life, but I think that it is a way for
Housman to glorify death. It is the death its self that makes the athlete’s name eternal.
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