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Introduction --Explain some quote that you believe you follow and also how it correlates with your life. --Recalling some past challenges or experiences that have made you aware of what you wish to do in your life and how you would accomplish a particular goal that you have set for yourself. --What/where do you see yourself 10 years down the lane? II. Personal Life --Beginnings. --Some person who has highly inspired you. --Background(Family and School). --Describe your academic life(rising from the ranks or something alike). III. Social Life/Extras --Your hobbies and extra-curricular activities. --Something extra-ordinary that you've done. IV. Your dreams/Motivations. --Your ability to make a mark of yourself on this world. --What you wish to be known as/ known for after you leave this world.

You could do that by avoiding overtly subjective and uncritical statements. For instance, "I love the chirping of birds because..." can be written as "For me, the chirping of birds is..." or something like that...

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