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i 1) Nowadays, I sometimes watch. Actually, I like to watch on sports especially soccer and NBA ii basketball. When I was in high school, I used to frequently watch it nearly every week, but, to be honest, I dont have enough time these days. I wish I had more free times from my work. iii iv 2) Im afraid I hardly ever do it. To be honest, I know its very good and everybody should have enough aerobic exercise., I mean, it should not be less than 20 minutes per day and 5 days per week. I used to play football, basketball, and so on everyday when I was in high school and I wish I could do it nowadays. 3) I suppose I should like it if I can do it, but I have hardly ever done it. To be honest, my wife cant cook also, I mean, we have to go out for dinner or pay for cooked food everyday. I think cooking food together is interesting and I hope we will do it in the future. 4) To be honest, I dont know much about kinds of clothes. Actually, I hardly ever buy clothes v myself and my wife is the one who buys it for me mostly these days.

4b 1) I enjoy watching many kinds of sport including football, basketball, tennis, and so on, but, to be honest, I have never bet because I have seen many people going broke because of vi gambling gamble . 2) I prefer to play than watch because playing sport makes me feel fresh. Its said that this is vii because aerobic exercise causes endorphin release releasing. However, watching sport is not totally useless. I mean, it could make people feel be fun and I think its better than viii watching a series on TV which has a its plot that is usually insane and violent. 3) I remembered I did many things. Actually my school assigned all students to play one to two kinds of sports each year such as table-tennis, tennis, swimming, basketball, and so on. ix That that meant all students had a physical activities at school. Moreover, some students x liked to play sport very much and played it in an extra-time such as in the early morning or late evening which was before and after class, respectively. 4) Im afraid I really dont know which sport is most popular in my country. I guess it might be xi xii football and I think it has not been changed in the last 10 years. I guess it is like this because nearly all schools here have football yards that give more chances for children to xiii play football. Beside this, I suppose there it might be have a difference between each part xiv xv of Thailand. For example , a Thai ball game is the most popular in the South of Thailand.

Comments Your ideas are well expressed using all the concepts from the lesson. Well done! There are a few grammar errors that are similar to some of your grammar errors in your writing assessment text.
i

No on after watch. We watch something on TV.

ii

There are two frequency expressions with similar meanings in this sentence. Therefore, delete one. Full expression= Im afraid The adv of frequency is hardly ever

iii iv v

The who clause must describe a preceding noun the one. Gamble is a verb; gambling is a noun. The noun is release. Incorrect formation of a relative clause.

vi

vii

viii ix x

Use that as a referent rather than a relative pronoun.

Full expression is such as.

xi

This verb phrase is active not passive voice because the it (football) is considered to do the action of not changing.

xii

Missing subject in the clause. Use there + (be) rather than have to indicate something exists. Full expression is for example.

xiii xiv xv

Use the in a superlative adjective phrase.

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