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Topic11: Why some people chose not to carry a cell phone Topic 9: Why people keep pets TOPIC

23: WHY MANY VIETNAMESE PEOPLE NOT DO PHYSICAL EXERCISE Topic 30: Why some roommates do not get along Topic 25: The effect of stress on students in high school or college Topic 6: The effect of poverty on an individual Topic 45: It is better to save money for the future than enjoy it now? Topic 40: Universities should reduce tuition for those students be maintained an A average during the previous year Topic 14: Is competition good? Topic 13: Is child behavior better or worse than it was years ago? Topic11: Why some people chose not to carry a cell phone * INTRODUCTION - Hook: Nowadays, cell phone becomes a popular mean for communicating in our society. - Background information: Developing of cell phone had been marked a phantom leap in electronic field. - Thesis statement: Users like to own it for themselves by its conveniences; however, many people dislike cell phone, because it has some disadvantages. There are two small problems besides advantages: the effect of wave and causes of some diseases. *BODY Body Paragraph 1 - Topic sentence: According to research of scientist, wave of cell phone has been affecting to central nervous system. - Supporting details: + If we use regularly cell phone, it makes decrease our memory. + Influence of wave makes mental breakdown. ex: common symptom is insomnia. + wave of cell phone also affects the immune system. Body Paragraph 2: Topic sentence: Secondly, not only stop in harm for brain but also cause many serious diseases, which are difficult to treat. Supporting details:

+ It is difficult to grow the skull with children. Limiting developing of baby when women have pregnant. In addition, with men, delivering regular phone in pocket can affect the amount of sperms. + Increasing risk of allergy to user: phenomenon rash, red spots on the skin well, heart disease, care, etc. *CONCLUSION Overall, cell phone is necessary for us today, but it also has some issue if you do not know any way to use it carefully. Beside that, we should not put our phone close to our ear because that is harmful. In the other words, we should use message rather than phone call.

Topic 9: Why people keep pets *INTRODUCTION - Hook: Today, human life quality is improved more and more both physique and spirit. Background information: Many people like to have beautiful scenery and small animals in their house. - Thesis statement: People keep pets because they see pets as friends or housekeepers and joy that they bring on. * Body BODY PARAGRAPH 1 - Topic sentence: People keep pets because they as their friends. They love them. - Supporting details: + People want to relax in free time: taking dogs or cats go for a walk or sight-seeing with them, reduce stress of work by taking care of them... + People want their house become more beautiful, more alive: keeping bird cages, fish basins, cats and dogs.... BODY PARAGRAPH 2 - Topic sentence: People keep pets as pets like housekeepers or signs. - Supporting details: + In some East countries, Pets are as housekeepers when having guest or absenting host: dogs, cats, birds... + Pets can use their gestures, their sounds to give the signals. *CONCLUSION Restatement: Human life side by side animals shows union between human and nature.

They find fun and benefits that pets bring on. That thing is good way to relax and enjoy life. Besides that, human contributed to prevent animals. Advice: We should take care of pets carefully and choose one somewhat suitable for our self. TOPIC 23: WHY MANY VIETNAMESE PEOPLE NOT DO PHYSICAL EXERCISE *INTRODUCTION - HOOK: In Vietnam, almost everyone rarely takes part in club, which carries real benefit for each one person. - BACKGROUND INFORMATION: therefore, this lead to many problem about health such as various disease, however, only few people admit influence of avoiding physical exercise. - THESIS STATEMENT: There are three main reason that make many Vietnamese people do not physical exercise. *BODY PARAGRAPH 1: - Topic: Up to now, many people must try to work without taking a rest to support the needs and desires in life, so they have a little time to relax with a simple exercise. - Supporting details: + Almost time everyone spend in office, stay at home with his or her family. + They believed that exercise take much pleasure time. PARAGRAPH 2: - Topic: The most important reason is that needs of gym club is simple and not popular. - Supporting details: + The gym club only concentrates at key centre of city. + Furthermore, the cost of gym club is expensive. PARAGRAPH 3: - TOPIC: Finally few people pay attention health, even they ignore with improvement to own good health . - Supporting details: + Awareness of people is limited. + Effective of physical exercise is unknown by many people. *CONCLUSION Indeed Vietnamese people dislike physical exercise by visible reason, but that is the reason for bad health. In my opinion, we had mismanaged about positive of physical exercise. To preserve our health we should do regular exercise everyday. That is the best way to remain good health for you.

Topic 30: Why some roommates do not get along *Introduction _Hook: Some roommates are not compatible is a situation that can not avoid. _Background information: When being students, little students live alone in an apartment because it is very expensive. Three or four students live together to share money of bill. However, some of them get along, and others do not. _Thesis statement: There are many reasons for not get along. To me, two main reasons are difficult living style and jealousy. *Body Body paragraph 1: +Topic sentence: Although living in the apartment, each member has living style not the same others, especially student because they come from many different places, social positions. +Supporting details:

Each place has its own culture or language style misunderstand in communication Sometimes there have many arguments in their lives. Some roommates are dirty, others are not Poor roommates do not do housework because they were cherished from child.

Body paragraph 2: +Topic sentence: The second, they get jealous of their roommates about clothes, wearing style, love +Supporting details:

Living in the apartment, when a person has the happy love, other has an unhappy love they will have different concept about love it is easy that they do not get along. About clothes or wearing style, especially female roommates, sometimes a person wears a new or fashionable dress, others hate it they are jealous.

*Conclusion

_Restatement: If we, students, could avoid those problems when living together, our daily activities and life will be better. _Advices: Roommates should give in and help each other, so that they can live happily together. Topic 25: The effect of stress on students in high school or college I. INTRODUCTION The effect of stress on students in high school or college is so dangerous, this can make students tense, depressing, and fall down their study. II. BODY PARAGRAPH 1 Firstly, Students will be tense. Because they have to do a lot of exercises and assignment They feel unpleasant and they look to be endured much pressure Secondly, students will be depressing. They feel bored with everything. They do not want to talk to anyone. Thirdly, students study will be fallen down. Because of stress, they do not want to study. Students want to go out to find the recreation. III. CONCLUSION In short, students are miserable with the stress, the tense, depression and bad result are always threatening them. Students should arrange the suitable time for study and relax. Topic 6: The effect of poverty on an individual *Introduction - Hook: Although our life has been improved much better nowadays, there are still people who have to live in poor living conditions. - Background information: Poverty refers to the condition of not having the means to afford basic human needs such as clean water, nutrition, health care, education, clothing and shelter. - Thesis statement: An individual who lives in poverty is affected both material and mental aspects, and this can either make him great motivation or change him in negative ways. *Body Body paragraph 1: - Topic sentence: Firstly, poverty is an unexpected issue, which causes mental illness, homeless, poor health and lack of educational and professional opportunity for people. - Supporting details: + Feel complex and be despised

+ Envy of the rich + Live in hunger, disease and sadness + Less education + Find difficulties to have a stable job + May become criminal Every year, thousand of people die because of poverty in many countries. This problem is still the challenges for government and society, although we have tried to shorten the distance between the rich and the poor. Body paragraph 2: - Topic sentence: On the other hand, an individual can make a great change in their life with good perception and motivation despite of poverty. - Supporting details: + Accept their situation and desire to change it + Try their best to work and study hard + Have a specific goal and strong power; be able to deal with difficulties. + Be helpful and love people around them + Appreciate and save money, food, essential items. In the reality, many people have achieved wonderful success although they come from the lowest class in society. *Conclusion Actually, the effect of poverty may be good or bad depending on each person and his or her perception. People should improve their living conditions to approach a better life. GROUP MEMBERS: 1. TRN TH ANH O 2. NGUYN TH NGC DIP 3. V THY LINH 4. BI TH KIM LOAN 5. NG KIM YN

ARGUMENTATIVE ESSAYS Topic 45: It is better to save money for the future than enjoy it now? *INTRODUCTION Hook: In modern society nowadays, money is one among conditions to have a full life. Background information: It is really necessary for lifelong human. Thesis statement: So in my opinion, you should save money for the future than enjoy it now. *BODY Body paragraph 1: Topic sentence: When you save money for the future you can take care of yourself and your family better. Supporting details: - At old age, you do not have to worry about healthcare of your family. - Your children will have full life and good education. Body paragraph 2: Topic sentence: Money is really necessary when you have in bad situations which you do not predict in your life. Supporting details: - Accidents in life or works.... - Ills: cancer, dangerous diseases, old ills.... - Unemployment. *CONCLUSION Restatement: Money is really important for human life nowadays, especially when you was old age. So it is better to save money for the future than enjoy it now. Prediction, warning, or broader context: When you always have a number of wealth that will help you avoid problems and have stable life. Topic 40: Universities should reduce tuition for those students be maintained an A average during the previous year *Introduction _Hook: Most students want to receive an A average during studying years, but it is difficult for them. _Background information: Tuition is a problem with students, especially poor students. Some of students have to give up study because of having no money pay for tuition. _Thesis statement: To me, universities should reduce tuition for those students who got an A average during last year because they effort to study, and encourage other students.

*Body _Body paragraph 1: +Topic sentence: To get an A average during year, it is sure that those students have to effort very much, hard-study +Supporting details:

Students spent much time, physical energy to study in order to get an A average. Students have to be rewarded for hard-studying Helping those students, especially poor students to have large money to buy school equipment

_Body paragraph 2: +Topic sentence: Those students accomplishment will urge others try to study. +Supporting details:

Many students feel jealous with their friends who maintained an A average they also want so Quality of school will increase. Poor students can continue to learn if they try to get an A average. Finance problem of their house can be reduced when universities cut down tuition.

*Conclusion _Restatement: It is important to reduce tuition for those students who maintained an A average during previous year. _Prediction, warning, or issue in broader context: .. Topic 14: Is competition good? I. INTRODUCTION Nowadays, competition should be set in a lot of environment because of its advantages. It makes people learn knowledge more, more confident. II. BODY PARAGRAPH 1 The first, competition make people enrich knowledge. People will catch the gap of knowledge in competing They have more motivation to learn and work well

The second, competition help people to be more confident This makes people become more popular People will be brave to argue or contribute the good ideas III. CONCLUSION In general, competition is good for all of us. It makes us ensure the knowledge and makes us more confident. Indeed, competing environment should be happened everywhere. Topic 13: Is child behavior better or worse than it was years ago?

*Introduction
- Hook: The development of society affected people behavior obviously. - Background Information: + Parents have tried to supply for their children many things in need. + Sometimes, children are pleased excessively. - Thesis statement: Child behavior is definitely becoming worse than it was years ago.

* Body
Body paragraph 1: - Topic sentence: Children today are considered as tyrants because of their disorder and bad behavior. - Supporting details: + Contradict their parents, tyrannize their teachers and gobble their food + Less respectful of elders + Make people in public places such as restaurants, stores or supermarkets annoyed (Children are often screaming, running around or playing with the toys, etc.) + Damage or destroy property in their houses + Frequent tantrums and arguments + Their violence These kids are brats and their parents are incompetent. Body paragraph 2: - Topic sentence: In comparison to the youth generation of years ago, children in our age have various conditions to develop themselves, but they abused modern technologies and invention to enjoy their life. - Supporting details: + Not doing well at school, skipping school + Early smoking, drinking and drug use. + Become lazy, passive and dependent on their parents. + Lying or stealing. In the past, children were very hard working and patient. They had to work early and study well although they often lived in poor conditions and lack of food or materials. Body paragraph 3: - Topic sentence: There are, actually, not all children becoming worse, because we still recognize a part of them have good characteristics. - Supporting details: + Their talent and creation

+ Some are taught how to behave well (help many people, study hard, respect the elders, etc.) + More active and likely to discover new things Parents should spend more time to communicate and teach their children what is right and wrong, and child education is the responsibility of whole society.

*Conclusion
The behavior is mostly formed by surrounding, so we, the adults, should create a healthy environment for children development. This generation is very important for our future. Prediction: Child behavior may be much better if we know how to guide them.

GROUP MEMBERS: 6. TRN TH ANH O 7. NGUYN TH NGC DIP 8. V THY LINH 9. BI TH KIM LOAN 10. NG KIM YN 10 outlines = +2

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