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17/03/13 21:58
# Cheers, # Karen
De: Ip Sae Lee (ip.lee@uqconnect.edu.au) Enviado: domingo, 17 de marzo de 2013 11:41:54 Para: Nelson Granja (nelsongt_27@hotmail.com) CC: Paul McInnes (paul.mcinnes@exemail.com.au); Shaden Aldakheel (shaden.aldakheel@uq.net.au); Ms Shahrzad Saremi (shahrzad.saremi@uq.net.au); anthropaul@gmail.com; 502216347@qq.com; Karen Optus (kcaunt@optusnet.com.au)
Hey#Nelson,# Do#you#think#you#can#also#upload#the#editing#process#of#our#title#page#and#introduction?#I#think#the#highlight and#memos#can#also#represent#our#teamwork.#Any#thoughts? Diilan
De: Nelson Granja (nelsongt_27@hotmail.com) Enviado: domingo, 17 de marzo de 2013 10:10:59 Para: Ip Sae Lee (ip.lee@uqconnect.edu.au)
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Paul McInnes (paul.mcinnes@exemail.com.au); Shaden Aldakheel (shaden.aldakheel@uq.net.au); Ms Shahrzad Saremi (shahrzad.saremi@uq.net.au); anthropaul@gmail.com; 502216347@qq.com; Karen Optus (kcaunt@optusnet.com.au)
De: Ip Sae Lee (ip.lee@uqconnect.edu.au) Has movido este mensaje a su ubicacin actual. Enviado: domingo, 17 de marzo de 2013 9:17:14 Para: Paul McInnes (paul.mcinnes@exemail.com.au); Shaden Aldakheel (shaden.aldakheel@uq.net.au) CC: Nelson Ricardo Granja Toledo (nelsongt_27@hotmail.com); Ms Shahrzad Saremi (shahrzad.saremi@uq.net.au); anthropaul@gmail.com; 502216347@qq.com; Karen Optus (kcaunt@optusnet.com.au); shaden.aldakheel@uq.net.au
Dear#Paul,# I#can#relate#to#how#you#feel.#I#spent#an#average#3#to#4#hours#on#the#computer#for#the#past#week#and#I#dread sitting#in#front#of#the#computer.#All#the#words,#corrections,#and#edits#seem#to#look#all#the#same#after#a#while. Your#efforts#are#greatly#appreciated. If#everyone#would#email#me#after#8pm,#just#to#notify#me#that#there#will#be#no#further#changes#made,#I#will#have a#read#through#the#whole#text#to#review#and#edit. Also,#any#ideas#on#other#information#or#texts#to#add#on#to#our#blog?#As#Paul#mentioned,#our#blog#is#worth#20%. How#about#copy#and#passing#some#emails#like#a#collage#to#show#that#we#have#constantly#kept#in#touch#to disscuss#the#progression#of#our#project#and#individual#roles? Cheers,# Diilan
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Enviado: domingo, 17 de marzo de 2013 9:00:19 Para: Shaden Aldakheel (shaden.aldakheel@uq.net.au) CC: Miss Ip Sae Lee (ip.lee@uq.net.au); Nelson Ricardo Granja Toledo (nelsongt_27@hotmail.com); Ms Shahrzad Saremi (shahrzad.saremi@uq.net.au); anthropaul@gmail.com (anthropaul@gmail.com); 502216347@qq.com (502216347@qq.com); Karen Optus (kcaunt@optusnet.com.au)
Hi, I#am#just#about#to#upload#version#5#of#the#document#and#PDF#to#dropbox.#Diilan&is&taking&over&as&editor&for&the final&push.#After#almost#10#hours#straight#my#brain#is#fried#and#I#am#making#silly#mistakes.#As#always,#it#needs fresh#eyes#to#get#it#over#the#line. Things#done: Lots#of#tidying#of#formatting#for#portraits/personas/extreme#characters Small#typos#fixed#here#and#there A#"References"#section#added#at#the#end#of#every#portraits/personas/extreme#character.#I#have#added my#references#for#Smythe,#Geoffrey#Robertson#and#Jack#Lewis#K#note#how#I#referred#to#our#own#portraits for#Jack#Lewis.#This#needs#to#be#filled#in#for#every#one#of#these#pages! Added#are#"Who#are#the#Crew"#page#at#the#end#and#move#4#bits#of#bio#text#into#the#page.#Three#people missing#(or#I#just#can't#find#their#text#in#dropbox) Added#frame#analyses#added.#I#haven't#tried#to#check#them#at#all,#that#needs#fresh#eyes#but#they#are there#in#glorious#black#and#white Added#student#numbers#added#to#title#page Made#requested#changes#from#Shaden#and#Diilan#although#I#don't#think#I#caught#the#formatting#changes that#Diilan#made,#and#she#might#need#to#redo#them,#or#ignore#them Things#to#do: Anything#in#yellow#K#all&yellow&must&die! All#references#at#the#end#need#to#be#checked#K#I#may#have#mucked#up#the#formatting#on#a#few I#started#adding#in#some#references#into#the#portraits/personas/extreme#characters#but#ran#out#of#puff#K you#will#all#need#to#work#with#Diilan#to#get#your#references#added Proofreading#K#this#beast#needs#extra#eyes#to#pick#up#errors.#I#would#recommend#against#making#major changes#to#the#text#at#this#point#but#fix#errors#and#expand#sections#if#they#are#vague#or#confusing.#Note that#some#of#the#pages#don't#have#room#for#major#changes#so#every#work#you#add#will#require#another word#to#die...#other#have#heaps#of#room#to#add#more#stuff Biographical#text#for#Diilan,#Karen#and#Bob Any#new#links#to#add#to#the#blog#K#saw#that#Karen#added#some#awesome#stuff#recently.#Remeber#the blog#is#worth#20#marks. It's#been#a#huge#push#from#everyone.#I#will#check#my#email#around#9:30#in#case#something#is#needed#from#me personally#K#you#can#always#ring#me#on#38932105#if#it#is#urgent,#but#otherwise#the#master#document#is#now Diilan's#to#perfect.#Let's#get#the#last#bits#done.
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Cheers#and#fond#regards, Paul
Version 4 up for review - can everyone please check their tasks in this email?
De: Nelson Granja (nelsongt_27@hotmail.com) Enviado: domingo, 17 de marzo de 2013 8:57:48 Para: Paul McInnes (paul.mcinnes@exemail.com.au) CC: Shaden Aldakheel (shaden.aldakheel@uq.net.au); Miss Ip Sae Lee (ip.lee@uq.net.au); Ms Shahrzad Saremi (shahrzad.saremi@uq.net.au); anthropaul@gmail.com (anthropaul@gmail.com); 502216347@qq.com (502216347@qq.com); Karen Optus (kcaunt@optusnet.com.au)
Hi#Paul, My#part#is#done.#It#is#in#the#same#compilation#edited.docx#file.#Let#me#know#if#thats#ok#and#how#else#can#I#help you.. cheers, KK# Nelson#Granja Sent#with#Sparrow
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Very#true.#I#will#add#a#page#for#it#at#the#end.# Well#spotted! Paul
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Enviado: domingo, 17 de marzo de 2013 8:10:04 Para: Miss Ip Sae Lee (ip.lee@uq.net.au); Paul McInnes (paul.mcinnes@exemail.com.au) CC: Nelson Ricardo Granja Toledo (nelsongt_27@hotmail.com); Ms Shahrzad Saremi (shahrzad.saremi@uq.net.au); anthropaul@gmail.com (anthropaul@gmail.com); 502216347@qq.com (502216347@qq.com); Karen Optus (kcaunt@optusnet.com.au)
Hello Paul, I think we are missing the page that has our characters and the summery about ourselves.
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Paul McInnes (paul.mcinnes@exemail.com.au) Has movido este mensaje a su ubicacin actual. Enviado: domingo, 17 de marzo de 2013 7:48:19 Para: Ip Sae Lee (ip.lee@uqconnect.edu.au) CC: Shaden Aldakheel (shaden.aldakheel@uq.net.au); Nelson Ricardo Granja Toledo (nelsongt_27@hotmail.com); Ms Shahrzad Saremi (shahrzad.saremi@uq.net.au); Miss Ip Sae Lee (ip.lee@uq.net.au); anthropaul@gmail.com; 502216347@qq.com; Karen Optus (kcaunt@optusnet.com.au)
Diilan,#that#sounds#perfect#K#we#won;t#have#a#complete#first#draft#until#then#anyway,#and#it#definitely#needs fresh#eyes.#I#will#hand#over#the#editorship#around#8:00#and#then#you#can#handle#any#changes#thereafter?# Sound#ok? Paul
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Hey#Paul,# I#didnt#see#my#name#in#the#to#do#list.#Im#not#doing#anything#wrong#am#I?#I#would#love#to#read#through#the#final master#copy#and#edit#the#writing#but#i#wont#have#time#to#start#until#after#eight. Diilan
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De: Nelson Ricardo Granja Toledo (nelsongt_27@hotmail.com) Enviado: domingo, 17 de marzo de 2013 7:42:02 Para: Paul McInnes (paul.mcinnes@exemail.com.au)
Hi#Paul..#I#will#start#to#work#on#that,,just#give#me#some#time. Sent#from#my#iPad
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Paul McInnes (paul.mcinnes@exemail.com.au) Has movido este mensaje a su ubicacin actual. Enviado: domingo, 17 de marzo de 2013 7:01:33 Para: Shaden Aldakheel (shaden.aldakheel@uq.net.au) CC: Nelson Ricardo Granja Toledo (nelsongt_27@hotmail.com); Ms Shahrzad Saremi (shahrzad.saremi@uq.net.au); Miss Ip Sae Lee (ip.lee@uq.net.au); anthropaul@gmail.com (anthropaul@gmail.com); 502216347@qq.com (502216347@qq.com); Karen Optus (kcaunt@optusnet.com.au)
Hi, I#have#uploaded#version#4#of#the#PDF#and#word#doc.# Done: corrected#Fabian#details#based#on#requests#from#Shaden converted#all#of#the#photos#to#greyscale#at#Shaden's#request#K#looks#more#consistent#and#professional now added#a#couple#of#"quotes"#to#the#personas#and#the#extreme#characters#to#try#and#distill#the#"soul"#of the#character#into#a#single#line.#Seems#to#help#but#feel#free#to#come#up#with#something#better! Changed#the#order#of#the#names#on#the#title#page#to#alphabetical#order Added#placeholder#text#in#ugly#yellow#highlighting#to#remind#us#of#bits#that#need#to#be#done To#be#done: NELSON#K#need#a#bit#of#text#explaining#why#the#particular#extreme#characters#were#created#K#what#are they#meant#to#achieve#from#the#point#of#view#of#helping#us#think#about#the#profession? NELSON#K#a#bit#of#text#explaining#why#we#chose#our#particular#bits#of#text#to#do#the#frame#analysis#on?#I can#bash#something#out#if#you#don't#have#time? SHADEN/SHAHRZAD#K#a#small#paragraph#explaining#why#the#first#storyboard#scenario#was#chosen#and what#we#hope#it#reveals#about#being#a#barrister,#have#a#look#at#the#paragraph#I#added#in#the#PDF#for#the second#storyboard#to#get#an#idea#of#what#we#need KAREN#K#a#quote#for#the#Dorothy#Law,#capturing#the#fear#and#hardship#of#a#young#barrister? PAUL#K#Add#Bob's#frame#analysis#once#it#becomes#available
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BOB#K#Add#in#some#text#explaining#how#the#traditionalist#portrait#was#created#K#look#at#the#examples#in the#PDF BOB#K#write#the#missing#frame#analysis PAUL#K#Add#student#numbers#to#the#title#page#K#can#you#please#send#me#your#student#number#if#it#is missing? PAUL#K#Tidy#the#reference#list#K#needs#to#be#in#an#order#based#on#the#author's#names,#based#on#the#MLA rules#K#we#need#to#do#this#so#we#can#refer#to#these#references#in#our#text#in#a#consistent#way.#e.g.#the James#Smythe#interview#will#be#called#out#in#the#main#text#as#(Smythe) EVERYONE#K#Add#explicit#named#references#to#the#text#including#portraits#etc,#will#be#easier#once#I've fixed#the#reference#list#a#bit#more.#This#should#happen#last#but#please#make#sure#that#every#reference that#you#used#is#in#the#references#list#at#the#end#of#the#PDF.## Shout&out&if&you&can't&get&this&done&by&8:00&this&evening.& Cheers, Paul
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On#17/03/2013#4:55#PM,#Miss#Ip#Sae#Lee#wrote:
Hi everyone, I was wondering if someone could give me a quick update on the current progress of the project because I couldn't keep with the emails. So far, I've updated and uploaded he reference file in dropbox under the name Diilan (17.03.2013 EDITED) Group Project Reference, according to the information Karen pointed out. Also, I've noticed that a graph was missing from my Mary Gaudron portrait. I wanted to add it but didn't know if Paul or someone else was in the process of editing the master version, so I've added a JPEG file under the name Diilan (17.03.2013 EDITED) Mary Gaudron graph in drop box. Cheers, Diilan.
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Hi everyone, I was wondering if someone could give me a quick update on the current progress of the project because I couldn't keep with the emails. So far, I've updated and uploaded he reference file in dropbox under the name Diilan (17.03.2013 EDITED) Group Project Reference, according to the information Karen pointed out. Also, I've noticed that a graph was missing from my Mary Gaudron portrait. I wanted to add it but didn't know if Paul or someone else was in the process of editing the master version, so I've added a JPEG file under the name Diilan (17.03.2013 EDITED) Mary Gaudron graph in drop box.
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Cheers, Diilan.
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Hello all, I have one info about my barrister needs to be fixed. and the colour of the courser i've attached the images that I want to replace them. Kind Regards Shaden
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Nelson Ricardo Granja Toledo Ms Shahrzad Saremi; Miss Ip Sae Lee; anthropaul@gmail.com; 502216347@qq.com; Shaden Aldakheel; Karen Optus
Nelson, I found it and I am adding it to the master document right now, along with Bob's persona. I'll upload a new version of the master document in 30 mins for further checking with those elements included. I have had to push the font size quite small (10) to make it fit, but with two columns of text it isn't too bad. I have kept the Portrait of Geoffrey Robertson sin so we have eight. Still waiting on final text for the frame analyses. Is anyone finished with their frame analysis? If so, it might be good to get extra eyes on each one - the first draft is rarely the best draft for that kind of thing. Getting there! Paul
De: Nelson Ricardo Granja Toledo (nelsongt_27@hotmail.com) Enviado: domingo, 17 de marzo de 2013 4:49:02 Para: Paul McInnes (paul.mcinnes@exemail.com.au) CC: Ms Shahrzad Saremi (shahrzad.saremi@uq.net.au); Miss Ip Sae Lee (ip.lee@uq.net.au); anthropaul@gmail.com (anthropaul@gmail.com); 502216347@qq.com (502216347@qq.com); Shaden Aldakheel (shaden.aldakheel@uq.net.au); Karen Optus (kcaunt@optusnet.com.au)
My#frame#analysis#is#in#the#framing#folder.#And#the#introd#paragraph#in#the#compilation#edited#file.#Would#you like#me#to#add#that?#I#just#don't#want#to#overwrite#while#you#are#still#working#on#it. Nelson Sent#from#my#iPad
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On#17/03/2013#1:45#PM,#Paul#McInnes#wrote:
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Done: Storyboards#added. To#be#done Introduction#text#to#each#section Bill#Potts#added#back#in Frame#analyses#to#be#added
Regarding Portraits
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Hello all,
It's taken me 2 hours, but I've changed the format of all our portraits into Microsoft Office Word file, named Collated Group Portrait. Bob can add his portrait onto it, I've made space. Also, Bill Potts' information does not fit in one page. As I mentioned earlier, Bill Potts portrait needs to be paraphrased and filtered for information. I will try to change the format for the persona and extreme characters too.
Diilan
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danger of clobbering each others work. I will get the storyboards in next because the is the fiddliest work then start rolling in the frame analyses and Nelson's introductory text. All comments on formatting, wording, layout etc are very welcome. Cheers, Paul
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OK,#I#am#starting#work#on#the#master#document#in#word.#So#far#I#have#done#the#title#page#and#incorporated#the#wonderful#work of#Diilan#on#our#portraits,#extreme#characters#and#personas. I#will#put#up#a#draft#document#in#the#next#30#mins.# Because#there#is#always#a#risk#of#two#people#changing#stuff#at#the#same#time#it#is#usually#safer#if#all#changes#go#through#an editor. If#you#see#changes#that#you#want#to#make#to#the#portraits/personas/extreme#characters#you#can#email#me#the#request#or#you can#wait#until#the#master#document#goes#up#and#add#comments#to#the#master#doc.#I#haven't#started#on#the#introductory#pages for#each#section#yet,#or#the#frame#analysis,#or#storyboard,#so#feel#free#to#edit#those#documents#that#you#are#working#one#and then#let#me#know#when#they#are#ready#to#go#into#the#main#document. Cheers, Paul
De: Karen Optus (kcaunt@optusnet.com.au) Has movido este mensaje a su ubicacin actual. Enviado: domingo, 17 de marzo de 2013 0:01:41 Para: Paul McInnes (paul.mcinnes@exemail.com.au) CC: Miss Ip Sae Lee (ip.lee@uq.net.au); anthropaul@gmail.com; nelsongt_27@hotmail.com; 502216347@qq.com; Shaden Aldakheel (shaden.aldakheel@uq.net.au); Ms Shahrzad Saremi (shahrzad.saremi@uq.net.au) Hi#Paul, # Yes#that#would#be#great!#Thanks!! # Karen
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Awesome#work.#
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I#am#reworking#the#intro#text#now.#Shall#I#do#up#a#proper#title#page#with#pretty#formatting?
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De: Karen Optus (kcaunt@optusnet.com.au) Has movido este mensaje a su ubicacin actual. Enviado: sbado, 16 de marzo de 2013 23:30:43 Para: Miss Ip Sae Lee (ip.lee@uq.net.au); paul.mcinnes@exemail.com.au; anthropaul@gmail.com; nelsongt_27@hotmail.com; 502216347@qq.com; Shaden Aldakheel (shaden.aldakheel@uq.net.au); Ms Shahrzad Saremi (shahrzad.saremi@uq.net.au) Hi#all#I#read#through#the#Title#Page#Intro#doc#and#realised#that#we#dont#have#everyones#student number#for#the#title#page.##We#also#need#to#make#sure#we#provide#the#web#address#for#our#blog deco7110crew.wordpress.com # Cheers, Karen
De: Karen Optus (kcaunt@optusnet.com.au) Has movido este mensaje a su ubicacin actual. Enviado: sbado, 16 de marzo de 2013 22:46:53 Para: Miss Ip Sae Lee (ip.lee@uq.net.au); paul.mcinnes@exemail.com.au; anthropaul@gmail.com; nelsongt_27@hotmail.com; 502216347@qq.com; Shaden Aldakheel (shaden.aldakheel@uq.net.au); Ms Shahrzad Saremi (shahrzad.saremi@uq.net.au) Hi#Dillan, # Thanks#for#spending#the#time#converting#the#files#over#to#Word.##I#was#just#looking#at#the#Collated#Group PortraitKPersonaKExtremeKReference.doc#and#noticed#that#Jack#Lewis#was#in#twice,#so#I#deleted#the#2nd one.##I#also#noticed#that#not#all#of#the#references#have#been#added,##I#know#I#had#entered#3#references for#each#of#the#ones#I#did#(Melissa#Grainger,#Jenni#Justice,#Dorothy#Law).##I#think#as#there#were#multiple files#for#References#to#be#filled#in#that#perhaps#some#of#the#files#were#left#out.###The#file#I#added#my references#to#was#called#REFERENCE#LIST#COLLECTION#(please#fillKin)PM.doc##in#the#reference#folder.# Would#you#be#able#to#check#all#the#files#to#make#sure#the#references#have#all#been#added? # Kind#Regards, # Karen
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Hello, I guess everyone is in bed now. I apologise if I woke anyone up. I just wanted to tell everyone that I've just completed re-creating all our portraits, personas, extreme characters, and reference files into one complete Microsoft Office Word file. You can find it in drop box. Please edit or add information as you please. Also, I am not familiar with the concept of adding footnotes as a writing style; therefore, I've deleted all the footnotes previously while making the publisher version, but I'm sure I've added them on the reference page. I anyone is uncomfortable with this idea, please feel free to change it. Well I'm off to bed now. Cheers, Diilan
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De: Nelson Granja (nelsongt_27@hotmail.com) Enviado: sbado, 16 de marzo de 2013 11:56:08 Para: Ms Shahrzad Saremi (shahrzad.saremi@uq.net.au)
Probably something we were editing it at the same time. I restored the file, check it out again
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hi I couldn't find your comment.. would you tell me where did you write?
De: nelsongt_27@hotmail.com Enviado: sbado, 16 de marzo de 2013 11:32:56 Para: Ms Shahrzad Saremi
Hi Shahrzad, I added a comment on the file you added. It is in the explanatory folder. Have a look at Paul description or mine as well in the compilation file. The idea is to describe. how your own portraits were researched rather than describe this
person, because what I guess Ben wants is to know the process we followed to build up the portraits. I hope this clarifies your question. Nelson
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De: Karen Optus (kcaunt@optusnet.com.au) Has movido este mensaje a su ubicacin actual. Enviado: sbado, 16 de marzo de 2013 11:30:14 Para: Nelson Granja (nelsongt_27@hotmail.com) CC: Paul McInnes (paul.mcinnes@exemail.com.au); Ip Sae Lee (ip.lee@uqconnect.edu.au); Miss Ip Sae Lee (ip.lee@uq.net.au); anthropaul@gmail.com; 502216347@qq.com; Shaden Aldakheel (shaden.aldakheel@uq.net.au); Ms Shahrzad Saremi (shahrzad.saremi@uq.net.au) Hi#Nelson, # Sorry#I#have#just#uploaded#my#explanatory#paragraphs#for#the#portrait#and#2#personas#I#did.##It#is#called Explanatory#paragraphs#KC.doc#and#is#in#the#explanatory#folder. Cheers, # Karen
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hi nelson about your comment for my intro... I have mentioned how I reached to this portrait.. do you think, I should add more?
De: Nelson Granja (nelsongt_27@hotmail.com) Enviado: sbado, 16 de marzo de 2013 11:01:33 Para: Ip Sae Lee (ip.lee@uqconnect.edu.au)
Sorry for so many mails I just updated the REFERENCE LIST COLLECTION (please fill-in) group.docx file with the references for my portrait and extreme character. For the introductory paragraph and the frame analysis I used endnote and the references are inside those documents, is that ok? or do you want me to fill in the table with those references? Nelson
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Paul McInnes (paul.mcinnes@exemail.com.au) Has movido este mensaje a su ubicacin actual. Enviado: sbado, 16 de marzo de 2013 10:46:04 Para: Nelson Granja (nelsongt_27@hotmail.com)
Positive,#with#a#fallback#plan# ;) P.
De: Nelson Granja (nelsongt_27@hotmail.com) Enviado: sbado, 16 de marzo de 2013 10:43:11 Para: Paul McInnes (paul.mcinnes@exemail.com.au)
Ok, great thats good news. Hopefully he will send it, lets be positive then. Cheers, Nelson
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De: Nelson Granja (nelsongt_27@hotmail.com) Enviado: sbado, 16 de marzo de 2013 10:31:20 Para: Ip Sae Lee (ip.lee@uqconnect.edu.au)
sorry I just found you said you already did your portrait description. With so many mails going through, I didn't read that part. But i cannot find the file, can you tell me which one is? If it is with a pub format I cannot find it. Nelson
De: Nelson Granja (nelsongt_27@hotmail.com) Enviado: sbado, 16 de marzo de 2013 10:15:33 Para: Karen Optus (kcaunt@optusnet.com.au) CC: Paul McInnes (paul.mcinnes@exemail.com.au); Ip Sae Lee (ip.lee@uqconnect.edu.au); Miss Ip Sae Lee (ip.lee@uq.net.au); anthropaul@gmail.com; 502216347@qq.com; Shaden Aldakheel (shaden.aldakheel@uq.net.au); Ms Shahrzad Saremi (shahrzad.saremi@uq.net.au)
Hi#all, About#the#portraits,#mine#is#Geoff#Kelly.#I#agree#with#Karen#about#Publisher,#we#could#use#Word#instead,#so everybody#can#help#and#check#how#the#final#version#is#going.#I#already#uploaded#my#frame#analysis.#Feel#free#to check#it#and#comment. About#the#introd#paragraphs#about#the#portraits,#I#need#each#of#you#answer#this#question,#so#I#can#come#up with#the#final#paragraph.#how#your#own#portraits#were#researched? Paul#uploaded#his#description#and#is#a#very#good#example.# Shahrzad#and#Shaden:#your#description#presents#more#characteristics#about#your#barristers#rather#than#how you#did#your#research.#Again,#have#a#look#at#Paul's#description.# Karen#and#Diilan:#is#still#missing#or#if#you#already#did#or#sent#it#by#email#and#I#did#not#notice,#let#me#know.# Diilan:#I#could#not#find#the#installers#for#MAC.#I#read#that#Microsoft#Publiser#is#not#available#for#Mac.#
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De: Ip Sae Lee (ip.lee@uqconnect.edu.au) Has movido este mensaje a su ubicacin actual. Enviado: sbado, 16 de marzo de 2013 10:07:33 Para: Paul McInnes (paul.mcinnes@exemail.com.au) CC: Karen Optus (kcaunt@optusnet.com.au); anthropaul@gmail.com; nelsongt_27@hotmail.com; 502216347@qq.com; Shaden Aldakheel (shaden.aldakheel@uq.net.au); Ms Shahrzad Saremi (shahrzad.saremi@uq.net.au)
Hey#everyone, Just#a#few#answers, #Nelson:#ive#added#the#introduction#for#my#extreme#character#and#portrait#wih#my#profile.#They#are#in#the same#file. Paul:#I#think#we're#missing#Bob's#portrait?#But#Im#not#entirely#sure. Paul#and#Shaden:#i#have#the#product#key#for#microsoft#office,#so#if#you'd#like#to#authorise#your#samole version#of#the#publisher#program#just#let#me#know#I'll#email#you#the#key.#Im#not#sure#if#it#will#work#because#as far#as#I#know,#the#key#as#limits.#Nelson,#did#the#product#key#work#for#you? Cheers, Diilan,
De: Nelson Granja (nelsongt_27@hotmail.com) Enviado: sbado, 16 de marzo de 2013 10:04:32 Para: Paul McInnes (paul.mcinnes@exemail.com.au)
Paul, Do you have Bob's number because Im afraid he drops the course because I think he hasn't uploaded any information so far. In that case, I think it would be better to focus in developing the frame analysis missing rather than the persona. This because, we are supposed to do half of the number of integrants, so 3 would be fine. Let me know if you hear something from him. Nelson
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De: Karen Optus (kcaunt@optusnet.com.au) Has movido este mensaje a su ubicacin actual. Enviado: sbado, 16 de marzo de 2013 9:58:43 Para: Paul McInnes (paul.mcinnes@exemail.com.au); Ip Sae Lee (ip.lee@uqconnect.edu.au) CC: Miss Ip Sae Lee (ip.lee@uq.net.au); anthropaul@gmail.com; nelsongt_27@hotmail.com; 502216347@qq.com; Shaden Aldakheel (shaden.aldakheel@uq.net.au); Ms Shahrzad Saremi (shahrzad.saremi@uq.net.au) Hi#Paul, I#believe#Melissa#Grainger#is#still#a#Barrister#but#she#is#the#other#type##a#consultant#legal#adviser. QLD#Bar#Association:
Barristers are lawyers who provide specialist services as advocates before Courts and Tribunals. They are also consultant legal advisers.
De: Nelson Granja (nelsongt_27@hotmail.com) Enviado: sbado, 16 de marzo de 2013 9:24:28 Para: Paul McInnes (paul.mcinnes@exemail.com.au)
I think Bob's Portrait is missing. The frame analysis is also missing. I already uploaded mine and the introductory paragraphs are almost done. The portrait and extreme characters are still missing. Im working on that right now. Regarding to the references, I used endnote with MLA as we agreed, but I just noticed there is a reference table. How are we supposed to do this? Do i have to fill in that table or endnote is fine? Nelson
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Miss Ip Sae Lee (ip.lee@uq.net.au); Karen Optus (kcaunt@optusnet.com.au); anthropaul@gmail.com; nelsongt_27@hotmail.com; 502216347@qq.com; Shaden Aldakheel (shaden.aldakheel@uq.net.au); Ms Shahrzad Saremi (shahrzad.saremi@uq.net.au)
Hi,#the#PDF#file#has#six#rather#than#seven#barristers#listed.#Who#are#we#missing?# Mary#Gaudron Geoff#Kelly Fabian#Dixson#SC James#Smythe Melissa#Grainger#K#exKbarrister#(i.e.#not#currently#at#the#bar) Bill#Potts#K#is#he#a#barrister#or#a#solicitor?#If#he#is#a#partner#in#a#firm#he#is#almost#certainly#a#solicitor? If#we#need#an#extra#portrait#I#can#probably#create#something#for#Geoffrey#Robertson#tonight. Thoughts? Paul
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Paul McInnes (paul.mcinnes@exemail.com.au) Has movido este mensaje a su ubicacin actual. Enviado: sbado, 16 de marzo de 2013 10:13:49 Para: Nelson Granja (nelsongt_27@hotmail.com) CC: Miss Ip Sae Lee (ip.lee@uq.net.au); Karen Optus (kcaunt@optusnet.com.au); anthropaul@gmail.com (anthropaul@gmail.com); 502216347@qq.com (502216347@qq.com); Shaden Aldakheel (shaden.aldakheel@uq.net.au); Ms Shahrzad Saremi (shahrzad.saremi@uq.net.au)
Hi#once#again, I#have#added#a#very#quickKandKdirty#example#of#what#the#collated#document#might#look#like#to#get#the#ball rolling.#Is#this#what#people#were#imagining?#It#is#called#"sample#master#layout"#and#it#is#in#the#PDF#director.#I have#publisher#running#on#my#laptop.#Working#with#publisher#doesn't#seem#too#bad#although#my#tiny#screen makes#for#some#"fun"#user#experiences.# It#has#a#title#page,#an#introductory#page#for#the#"Portraits"#section#(text#is#just#a#brain#dump,#to#be#replaced#by Nelson's#text),#the#individual#portraits#and#the#the#next#section#intro#page,#and#I#added#page#numbering#to make#it#easier#to#navigate.# My#experiments#in#trying#to#move#stuff#from#publisher#back#to#word#were#not#very#successful#at#all#so#it#might be#safer#to#stick#with#publisher#at#this#late#stage. So#steps#could#be: 1.# Final#content#gets#uploaded#to#dropbox#by#10:00#tomorrow,#including#references.# 2.# Someone#volunteers#as#"editor"#and#collates#it#all#into#a#single#document#in#publisher.#If#someone#else#is keen#to#do#this#then#great,#otherwise#I'll#muddle#along#on#the#laptop#because#I#have#finished#my#text. Having#a#single#person#as#the#editor#makes#things#a#lot#easier.# 3.# The#first#draft#goes#out#as#a#PFD#to#everyone#for#proofKreading#and#corrections#come#back#to#the#editor.# 4.# A#second#draft#goes#out#for#proofKreading#and#corrections#go#back#to#the#editor. 5.# Final#draft#is#produced.# The#editor#can#probably#figure#out#which#sources#to#reference#for#each#of#the#portraits/personas/extreme characters#but#we#need#to#make#sure#that#every#direct#quote#is#referenced#e.g.#look#at#James#Smythe,#his quote#is#in#italics#and#is#called#out#as#(Smythe).#Note#that&any&verbatim&text&from#any#source#counts#as#a#direct quote#and#must#have#suitable#referencing.#Beware#the#perils#of#cut#and#paste#;) Thoughts?# Paul
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Paul McInnes (paul.mcinnes@exemail.com.au) Has movido este mensaje a su ubicacin actual. Enviado: sbado, 16 de marzo de 2013 0:55:47 Para: Miss Ip Sae Lee (ip.lee@uq.net.au) CC: anthropaul@gmail.com (anthropaul@gmail.com); nelsongt_27@hotmail.com (nelsongt_27@hotmail.com); 502216347@qq.com (502216347@qq.com); Shaden Aldakheel (shaden.aldakheel@uq.net.au); Ms Shahrzad Saremi (shahrzad.saremi@uq.net.au); kcaunt@optusnet.com.au (kcaunt@optusnet.com.au) 1 archivo adjunto Highflier.JPG (34,0 kB)
And yet more spam... I have uploaded an image from the microsoft office images library to use for the Highflier persona. I don't want to add it to the powerpoint file if the content has already been moved into a publisher file. Would it be possible to have it added to the persona? There is already a reference to the image source in the references list.
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I also note that we have three of the four personas in the dropbox directory. Bob - how are you going with the "traditionalist" persona? Cheers and fond regards, Paul
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Hi#everyone,#sorry#for#the#spam. I#have#just#uploaded#my#explanatory#paragraphs#for#how#I#generated#my#portrait#and#persona.#This#is#raw material#for#Nelson#to#work#into#the#introductory#page#for#these#sections.#We#will#definitely#need#some#kind#of statement#in#each#introductory#section#explaining#our#strategy#for#picking#portraits#and#personas.#Perhaps something#to#do#with#capturing#the#diversity#of#the#profession#for#portraits,#and#something#about#capturing common#"types"#of#barrister#for#the#personas?# Cheers, Paul
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Hi#everyone, sorry#for#not#providing#feedback#before#now.# I#have#decided#to#leave#the#Highflier#persona#unchanged#K#I#was#tempted#to#remove#the#references#to#family
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members#in#the#law#but#the#reality#is#that#family#contacts#and#the#like#KdoK#open#doors#for#budding#barristers e.g.#to#get#access#to#article#clerkships.#If#he#came#from#a#less#privileged#background#then#he#will#just#sound#like a#Mary#Gaudron#and#I#don't#want#to#duplicate#her#in#the#persona#too#literally.# I#notice#that#I#have#some#unnecessary#text#in#the#James#Smythe#portrait#K#(Smythe),#(McInnes)#K#this#should#just be#removed#K#I#need#to#make#sure#that#my#brother's#name#does#not#appear#anywhere#in#our#submission. I#will#be#submitting#my#paragraphs#explaining#how#the#portrait#(James#Smythe)#and#persona#(Highflier)#were derived#in#the#next#30#minutes.# I#am#having#no#luck#viewing#the#Microsoft#Publisher#files#so#if#a#PDF#version#could#be#uploaded#I#would#be#very grateful. Cheers, Paul
De: Karen Optus (kcaunt@optusnet.com.au) Has movido este mensaje a su ubicacin actual. Enviado: viernes, 15 de marzo de 2013 22:55:14 Para: Miss Ip Sae Lee (ip.lee@uq.net.au); paul.mcinnes@exemail.com.au; anthropaul@gmail.com; nelsongt_27@hotmail.com; 502216347@qq.com; Shaden Aldakheel (shaden.aldakheel@uq.net.au); Ms Shahrzad Saremi (shahrzad.saremi@uq.net.au) Hi#Dillan, # Paul,#Shahrzad,#Shaden,#Nelson#and#Myself#were#at#the#meeting#yesterday.##We#talked#about#where each#person#is#and#what#we#have#left#to#do.# Karen##Uploaded#Newbie#Persona,#need#to#finish#references,#update#blog#as#to#how#I#made#Portrait and#Personas#and#write#explanatory#paragraph#for#that#as#well. Paul##Has#put#together#a#Title#page,#wants#to#put#some#finishing#touches#on#Highflyer#Persona#and needs#to#finish#references#and#write#explanatory Shahrzad#and#Shaden##Were#finishing#the#storyboard#having#completed#drawings.#They#have#a#frame analysis#left#to#do#and#maybe#references.#(Sorry#I#cant#remember#for#sure) Nelson##showed#us#his#frame#analysis#and#we#discussed#it#a#little#so#he#was#going#to#finish#that#up.##He still#needs#info#from#everyone#so#he#can#write#the#explanatory#paragraphs#for#the#personas#and portraits. # Hopefully#all#the#finals#of#everything#will#be#finished#by#today#so#that#you#can#put#the#final#document together.# # I#looked#at#the#portraits#and#the#personas#and#they#look#good.##I#added#some#more#to#the#Mother Persona#as#I#had#incorporated#some#of#the#comments#from#the#group#session.##I#think#we#need#to#put#in a#photo#for#the#Jack#Lewis#character.##I#just#got#the#photo#for#the#personas#I#did#from#Microsoft#Office
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clipart.##I#dont#know#if#Paul#would#like#to#choose#a#guy#from#there#or#somewhere#else?# # I#also#had#a#look#at#the#explanatory#paragraphs#and#they#look#good.##I#would#go#with#the#red#versions#for most.##Perhaps#we#would#want#to#add#to#the#Persona#description#that,#We#discussed#the#profession Barrister#and#identified#some#stereotypical#characters#that#can#be#found#in#the#profession.##These#were then#developed#into#our#Personas##Working#Mother,#Highflyer,#Traditionalist,#Newbie.? # I#had#a#look#at#the#extreme#character#Sherry#Lou.##Great#combination.##It#might#be#good#to#add#a#few more#sentences#to#her#About#section#so#that#her#character#really#comes#across#more#to#the#reader.# Does#she#have#trouble#getting#to#court#on#time#after#nights#out#singing?###Does#she#have#to#sleep between?##The#stress#of#leading#a#double#life#can#be#overwhelming#at#times.##The#comments#from#the group#session#suggested#that#we#need#to#develop#the#character#as#a#real#person#more#so#that#the reader#feels#like#they#are#meeting#them. #
We#were#hoping#that##a#PDF#version#of#the#complete#document#could#be#out#maybe#today#so#that#everyone#can#have#a#review to#make#sure#we#havent#missed#anything.##I#know#that#depends#on#getting#the#input#from#everyone.# # Thanks#everyone#it#is#really#starting#to#come#together.##Thanks#Dillan#I#know#you#have#the#difficult#job#of#putting#it#all#together.# Hopefully#that#catches#you#up#a#bit#and#provides#some#feedback.##Ill#get#back#to#doing#the#references#now.## all! # Cheers, # Karen ##Thanks#again
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Hello all, Can someone give me some updates on today's group meeting? It would also be nice if I could get some feedback on: The formatting of the the portraits, persona, and extreme character. The extreme character I've created. My ideas, opinions, and feedback regarding the portraits, persona, and extreme characters. Below is a list of all the things I've managed to do. I've made a complete list of everyone's references, hope you all have a look.
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I've uploaded an edited version of the 'compilation' word file in the explanatory folder. My editing is in red. Please don't be offended and you don't need to use the edited version. I will upload my profile and commentary of my portrait and extreme character very soon. By Saturday morning. Kind regards, Diilan
One last bit of work for now - bonus frame analysis uploaded
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Hi, I have uploaded a "bonus" frame analysis I did as a quick exercise, looking at the storyboard for the legal aid barrister dilemma. It is pretty crude stuff, but I figured it might spark ideas for people who are doing the frame analysis - the more concrete examples the better methinks! It is lurking in the Storyboard directory in dropbox if anyone wants to have a look. Cheers, Paul
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Project One
De: Paul McInnes (paul.mcinnes@exemail.com.au) Has movido este mensaje a su ubicacin actual. Enviado: viernes, 15 de marzo de 2013 9:14:52 Para: Nelson Granja (nelsongt_27@hotmail.com) CC: Ms Shahrzad Saremi (shahrzad.saremi@uq.net.au); Karen Optus (kcaunt@optusnet.com.au); Miss Ip Sae Lee (ip.lee@uq.net.au); anthropaul@gmail.com (anthropaul@gmail.com); 502216347@qq.com (502216347@qq.com); Shaden Aldakheel (shaden.aldakheel@uq.net.au)
Hi#everyone, I#have#updated#the#word#doc#with#the#references#that#I#used#for#the#Portrait#(James#Smythe)#and#the#persona (Highflier).#I#will#be#putting#up#some#text#for#the#introductory#page#pretty#soon.# Does#anyone#have#suggestions#for#finding#a#good#public#domain#image#I#can#use#for#the#highflier#persona? Cheers, Paul
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Para: CC:
Ms Shahrzad Saremi (shahrzad.saremi@uq.net.au) Karen Optus (kcaunt@optusnet.com.au); Miss Ip Sae Lee (ip.lee@uq.net.au); paul.mcinnes@exemail.com.au (paul.mcinnes@exemail.com.au); anthropaul@gmail.com (anthropaul@gmail.com); 502216347@qq.com (502216347@qq.com); Shaden Aldakheel (shaden.aldakheel@uq.net.au)
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Explain how your personas were constructed from your portraits and are based on your investigation.
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Briefly describe the breadth of the professional dilemmas you uncovered and discussed in this project. Thanks.
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Hey guys me and shaden uploaded our work in drop-box:)
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Hello all I put my complete portrait in drop-box:)
De: Karen Optus (kcaunt@optusnet.com.au) Has movido este mensaje a su ubicacin actual. Enviado: jueves, 14 de marzo de 2013 13:24:40 Para: Miss Ip Sae Lee; paul.mcinnes@exemail.com.au; anthropaul@gmail.com; nelsongt_27@hotmail.com; 502216347@qq.com; Shaden Aldakheel; Ms Shahrzad Saremi Hi#All, # Ive#uploaded#a#Publisher#file#for#the#Newbie#Persona#to#the#drop#box.##Dillan#do#I#need#to#insert#it#into#a different#file?##It#is#called#Newbie#Barrister#Persona.pub##I#will#work#on#putting#together#the#details#of how#I#made#each#of#the#ones#I#did#tomorrow#for#the#blog#and#explanatory#paragraphs. # Cheers, # Karen
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Hello all, Hope everybody is doing okay with their part of the project, I've managed make a publisher file with all of everyone's portraits, persona, and extreme characters (I'm still in the process of creating my extreme character). I've added all three files yesterday in drop box under the file name: group portraits (portraits folder)
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group persona (personas folder) group extreme character (extreme character folder) Please have a look at your portrait and compare it with the portraits done by other members, so you can add, edit or make changed to your own portrait before handing it in. In addition, while going through all the portraits, persona, and extreme character I've made some notes which are listed below: Portraits - Bill Potts: most of Bill Potts information on personality needs to be filtered and paraphrased. Persona (our persona's seemed to lack in detail compared to our researched persona) - Jack Lewis: needs more specific information on what kind of: * 'numerous other postgraduate diploma/degree he has achieved (e.g. language? commerce? business?) * volunteer work he did/does (e.g. help the senior citizens? fundraising?), and where he did/does it? - Jenni Justice: needs more specific detail on: * her age * number of children and their age (we need these details to build on her 'working mother' character) * what areas she is 'well-organised' in (e.g. time management? document file? arranging appointments?) * examples that support the attitude of 'knows what she wants' (state what she desires or believes is important) * what she is 'dedicated' in (e.g. role as mother? job? housework? fighting for her eithical beliefs?) * what 'drives' her (e.g. passion driven? motivation driven?) Also, I will be making a reference file which will be used to collect everyone's research details from books, article, websites etc. It will be divided into 5 sections (portrait, extreme character, persona, storyboard dilemma, and frame analysis. Please fill in the necessary sections according to the research you have done so I can rewrite it to follow the MLA referencing style. Diilan
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Hello, I feel like In annoying everyone with endless emails. Sorry :( Just wanted to tell everyone that I've uploaded my extreme character's portrait in dropbox. Everyone's portraits, persona, and extreme characters are all uploaded as one complete publisher file, separated according to their category. Also, I would like to emphasis the importance of filling out the reference list. Your cooperation will be greatly appreciated. Diilan
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Im having trouble starting my commentary/explanatory paragraph for my portrait and extreme character. i'm not sure what kind of information i need to add and how I need to set it out. Has anyone started or finished their commentary/explanatory paragraph and is okay about sharing it so I can use it as an exemplar to write mine? In addition, I've just uploaded the 'reference list collection' file and updated the newbie barrister persona. Also, how many extreme character portraits do we need? I'm not familiar with with the use of footnotes, so I was thinking of making a separate page for all references, deleting all the footnotes and references on each page of the portraits, persona, and extreme characters. Any opinions or thoughts regarding the referencing idea? Diilan
Re: upload
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Sorry, I didnt tell you where I uploaded the files. They're all up on drop box.
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An animated picture of our faces and a little intro (e.g. name, field of study, goal, reason for enrolling DECO7110) There is an app, only available for iphones and ipads (Apple), called Imadeface. Diilan
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Hello all, I've uploaded the 2nd dilemma scenario frame break-down (word file) and the publisher format of all the up-loaded
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portraits. I haven't added the 'Portrait' title assuming we decided on making a title page for all the project categories. For those who haven't uploaded their portraits, the publisher file has your portrait spot inside. Just fill it out according to the template (you can add or delete categories). I also have a question regarding the portraits, are we required to write our names on our individual portraits? Diilan
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Cheers#and#fond#regards, Paul
Primarily#based#on#the#Mary#Gaudron#portrait#and#research,#Geoffrey#Robertson#as#a QC#with#a#very#large#public#profile,#and#the#interview#listed#on#the#blog,#and#the interview#with#James#Smythe All#of#the#research#into#the#profession#shows#that#it#is#a#sinkKorKswim#type#of#trade, and#people#have#to#survive#largely#on#their#own#abilities.#It#also#shows#just#how fiercely#competitive#it#is#at#the#top,#with#a#small#number#of#opportunities#and competition#from#hundreds#of#highly#capable#people.#To#even#contemplate#getting to#the#top#requires#a#moreKthanKgenerous#self#belief. http://www.careerplayer.com/graduateKjobs/lawKandKrelated/law/barrister/geoffK kellyKfamilydivorceKbarrister/#K#an#excellent#resource#for#understanding#the peculiar#life#of#being#a#barrister#in#general,#the#questions#on#income#are#quite revealing#if#you#read#between#the#lines##question#14,#and#question#15#but#there are#useful#insights#throughout http://www.legallawyers.com.au/legalKtopics/litigation/whatKdoesKitKmeanKtoKbeKaK qcKbarrister/#K#a#good#basic#introduction#to#what#a#SC/QC#is#and#the#reasons#for#the historical#changes#in#title#from#QC#to#SC http://www.bcl.net.au/chambers/vacancies#K#a#glimpse#into#the#costs#and#therefore pressures#of#getting#a#room#in#chambers,#reinforces#a#lot#of#the#information#from the#two#interviews#about#the#challenges#and#uncertainties#of#making#a#living#at#the bar http://www.geoffreyrobertson.com/#K#the#starting#point#for#my#thinking#about#the type#of#mind#required#to#make#it#as#a#highflier,#and#setting#the#public#style#and courtroom#manners#of#our#persona.#This#is#reinforced#by#my#personal#encounters with#Mary#Gaudron##there#are#a#lot#of#similarities#between#the#two,#based#on genuine#brilliance#of#mind#and#plenty#of#selfKbelief.
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Enviado: mircoles, 13 de marzo de 2013 0:12:47 Para: CC: Karen Optus (kcaunt@optusnet.com.au) Miss Ip Sae Lee (ip.lee@uq.net.au); anthropaul@gmail.com; Shaden Aldakheel (shaden.aldakheel@uq.net.au); Ms Shahrzad Saremi (shahrzad.saremi@uq.net.au); nelsongt_27@hotmail.com; 502216347@qq.com
Primarily#based#on#the#Mary#Gaudron#portrait#and#research,#Geoffrey#Robertson#as#a#QC with#a#very#large#public#profile,#and#the#interview#listed#on#the#blog,#and#the#interview with#James#Smythe All#of#the#research#into#the#profession#shows#that#it#is#a#sinkKorKswim#type#of#trade,#and people#have#to#survive#largely#on#their#own#abilities.#It#also#shows#just#how#fiercely competitive#it#is#at#the#top,#with#a#small#number#of#opportunities#and#competition#from hundreds#of#highly#capable#people.#To#even#contemplate#getting#to#the#top#requires#a moreKthanKgenerous#self#belief. http://www.careerplayer.com/graduateKjobs/lawKandKrelated/law/barrister/geoffKkellyK familydivorceKbarrister/#K#an#excellent#resource#for#understanding#the#peculiar#life#of being#a#barrister#in#general,#the#questions#on#income#are#quite#revealing#if#you#read between#the#lines##question#14,#and#question#15#but#there#are#useful#insights throughout http://www.legallawyers.com.au/legalKtopics/litigation/whatKdoesKitKmeanKtoKbeKaKqcK barrister/#K#a#good#basic#introduction#to#what#a#SC/QC#is#and#the#reasons#for#the historical#changes#in#title#from#QC#to#SC http://www.bcl.net.au/chambers/vacancies#K#a#glimpse#into#the#costs#and#therefore pressures#of#getting#a#room#in#chambers,#reinforces#a#lot#of#the#information#from#the two#interviews#about#the#challenges#and#uncertainties#of#making#a#living#at#the#bar
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Updated legal aid scenario and storyboard - can everyone have a quick look?
De: Karen Optus (kcaunt@optusnet.com.au) Has movido este mensaje a su ubicacin actual. Enviado: mircoles, 13 de marzo de 2013 0:01:30 Para: Paul McInnes (paul.mcinnes@exemail.com.au); Miss Ip Sae Lee (ip.lee@uq.net.au) CC: anthropaul@gmail.com; Shaden Aldakheel (shaden.aldakheel@uq.net.au); Ms Shahrzad Saremi (shahrzad.saremi@uq.net.au); nelsongt_27@hotmail.com; 502216347@qq.com
Hi everyone, I added some comments to the scenario/storyboard that Paul put up. :) Hope all is going well. Cheers, Karen -----Original Message----From: Paul McInnes Sent: Tuesday, March 12, 2013 8:07 PM To: Miss Ip Sae Lee Cc: kcaunt@optusnet.com.au ; anthropaul@gmail.com ; Shaden Aldakheel ; Ms Shahrzad Saremi ; nelsongt_27@hotmail.com ; 502216347@qq.com Subject: Updated legal aid scenario and storyboard - can everyone have a quick look?
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Hi everyone, I have uploaded an updated breakdown of the legal aid scenario (Legal Aid Barrister Dilemma v2), and a crude initial sketch for how the action could be storyboarded (DECO7110 Legal Aid Storyboard.jpg). This is just something to spark our artists to make something better so feel free to mutate it in any way you like, and to generate feedback. One of my golden rules is people give much better feedback when confronted with something tangible! Note that I have reduced the 16 original "moments" into a more manageable 9 shots, combining some shots, removing an unnecessary character and moving some of the action into the titles on the images. Now would be a good time for everyone to have a peek and throw in some constructive criticism - the text is pretty bland and the "shots" that I have set out would make a cinematographer weep. ;) Cheers and find regards, Paul
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but we can discuss that this afternoon. On that point, I would like to suggest that each of our items (portraits, personas, storyboards etc) should have at least three different sources/references supporting our claims? Cheers, Paul
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Hi Everyone, I've scanned in the documents with feedback from today's class. It is a file called Scanned Feedback.PDF in dropbox. See you all tomorrow. Cheers, Karen -----Original Message----From: Paul McInnes Sent: Monday, March 11, 2013 8:03 PM To: Miss Ip Sae Lee Cc: kcaunt@optusnet.com.au ; anthropaul@gmail.com ; Shaden Aldakheel ; Ms Shahrzad Saremi ; nelsongt_27@hotmail.com ; 502216347@qq.com Subject: Interview transcript is up on dropbox
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The 95% complete transcript is now uploaded. The file is called " DECO7110 Legal Aid Barrister Interview". If you have time it is certainly worth a skim. Cheers, and I'll see you all tomorrow. Paul
My barrister portrait
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Looks good to me. I'm sure once we start comparing our portraits we will figure out some extra headings and sets of info we want for them as a whole. We should also ask Ben how he wants us to document the sources that we used for each portrait. Footnotes? End notes? Something else? Go deco7110crew! ;) P.
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Yours faithfully Shahrzad Saremi MSc Interaction design University of Queensland ________________________________________ From: Paul McInnes [paul.mcinnes@exemail.com.au] Sent: Friday, 8 March 2013 1:41 PM To: Miss Ip Sae Lee Cc: kcaunt@optusnet.com.au; anthropaul@gmail.com; Shaden Aldakheel; Ms Shahrzad Saremi; nelsongt_27@hotmail.com; 502216347@qq.com Subject: First draft of the interview questions on the blog Hi, I will be doing the interview with my brother over lunch tomorrow. I have done a very quick collation of the questions so far, hopefully I haven't missed anything but please holler if I have. If people want to have a look at the list and then throw in ideas into the comments section for the post I will refine the list accordingly. He might be my brother but he is -our- informant, so don't be shy about adding more to the mix - ideally we want to some out with a really good picture of life as a legal aid barrister, but also we want to be able to profile his personality and attitudes much the way that the portrait of Mary Gaudron did. Cheers, Paul
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e.g.#an#idealistic#barrister#trying#to#defend#a#member#of#an#extreme#racist#group? So#we#go#from#idea#(ethical#dilemma)#to#a#more#specific#idea#(defending#extreme#racist)#then#ask#ourselves what#details#we#need#to#research#or#invent#to#flesh#it#out.#Name#and#basic#details#of#the#defendant,#the#crime he#is#charged#with,#the#reasons#why#the#barrister#got#the#case,#the#situation#of#the#work#K#is#this#before#the case#has#gone#to#trial?#PartKway#through#the#trial#e.g.#the#client#originally#claimed#to#be#only#slightly#involved with#the#racist#group#but#during#crossKexamination#by#the#prosecutor#has#admitted#that#he#was#actively involved#in#instigating#bullying#of#some#community.#Now#our#barrister#is#in#a#pickle.#To#make#it#juicier,#maybe this#case#is#the#one#that#will#help#make#the#barrister's#name#if#they#are#successful#so#personal#advancement versus#following#own#morals#versus#the#expectations#of#the#profession#in#this#ethical#situation.# OK,#so#that's#one#dilemma#50%#fleshed#out,#we#then#need#to#make#sure#it#is#valid#in#terms#of#the#law#etc,#but you#get#the#idea. I've#put#up#some#useful#links#and#this#text#on#the#blog.#Have#a#look#and#feel#free#to#add#comments#to#keep discussion/brainstorming#going. Cheers, Paul
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Hi, I'm all in about doing the portrait and expanding ideas on a scenario, but I have a question about the portrait. Does this mean I have to do 2 portraits all together? 1. individual portrait 2. the group portrait Kind regards, Diilan
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kcaunt@optusnet.com.au (kcaunt@optusnet.com.au); anthropaul@gmail.com (anthropaul@gmail.com); nelsongt_27@hotmail.com (nelsongt_27@hotmail.com); 502216347@qq.com (502216347@qq.com); Miss Ip Sae Lee (ip.lee@uq.net.au) 2 archivos adjuntos storyboards.pptx (63,9 kB) , portrait.pptx (52,6 kB)
Hello all, These are some templates to use. Please feel free to give some advise. Kind Regards Shade
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Hi, excellent#questions.#I#should#have#put#them#onto#the#blog.#Doing#that#now.#How#do#you#feel#about#doing#a rough#draft#of#a#portrait#and#expanding#on#one#of#the#dilemmas#(see#below)? Cheers, Paul Portraits The#plan#is#for#everyone#to#have#a#go#at#a#portrait,#but#make#sure#that#two#are#in#a#decent#state#for#Monday. One#of#these#will#be#my#brother#which#will#happen#on#Sunday.#It#doesn't#matter#if#we#doubleKup#on#portraits#at this#point#K#we#are#really#trying#to#get#an#idea#of#what#goes#into#a#portrait#at#this#point#and#will#get#feedback from#the#tutors#on#Monday#to#refine#our#work. Extreme#Character,#Persona We#have#volunteers#to#do#the#extreme#character#and#persona.#I#have#attached#some#images#of#slides#from deco7140#(web#design)#that#discuss#personas#and#might#be#useful#for#our#profiles#and#extreme#characters#as well.
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Hi all,
Sorry I couldn't make it to the group meeting today. I saw the notes posted on the group blog and they were wonderful. For Moday's homework, correct me if i'm wrong, we need 2 1 1 3 portraits extreme character persona dilemma scenarios
which need to be complete for hand-in. Can somebody update me on what was discussed during the group meeting? Have you already decided on who will be doing what? Also, does anybody mind me doing my portrait on Mary Gaudron? I looked her up after Paul's post and I was intrigued. I've left comments on our group blog, but I don't think anyone noticed them.
Regards, Diilan
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