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The paper included multiple foci, making it difficult to find the central ideal or thesis. Yes, but it could have been much clearer and more precise
No
Did the author work closely with the text, present exactly what was said, explain the texts larger context, and include appropriate citation? (3 points) Did the author take a stance and provide reasons for his or her argument? (3 points) Was the paper well-organized with a thoughtful introduction and conclusion? (2 points)
Yes, and very well. Good use of supportive evidence and ideas were cohesive. Yes. It had a clearly stated and developed thesis. Structure aids comprehension of the paper. Yes
Yes, but the reasons could have been explained and developed It needs more revision
No. The student should see me or the academic advising center for help on writing
Were the mechanics of the paper, including grammar and punctuation, appropriate for college-level work?