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mildly
surge= rise moderately
soar=rise sharply
boom=rise gently
实义副词
绝对描述系统 verb(天龙八部)
A: rise sharply/maximally
D: rise gently/minimally
10,100,1000,
accrue=rise gradually and gently
leap=rise smoothly and sharply
起落同幅 rise and fall evenly
饼图的三句万能句型
1) 数据+抄题+导入宾语 Band 5
2) 主语+“占据”(先特征,后数据) Band 6
3) 剩余数据 Band 7(Combo)
“占据”的讲法:
a) constitute
b) make up
c) be the factor(s)/instrument(s) of 致成物
the remaining a.
the rest a./n.
the remainder n.
the remnant n.
in the charge of – sb
due to//owing to//attributed/ascribed to//for//oriented to—sth
2:极端数据及其周围(与之接近)数据
1:一般数据
3:落单数据
例 4:
Food and drink, Other items covered comparatively a majority of the Average weekly
expenditure, with 26% and 24% respectively.
Task 1 的时态:
1) 现在时——无时间
2) 过去时——过去时间
3) 将来时——将来时间
从过去到将来——现在时
两种禁忌时态:
1) 现在完成时(描述阶段)
Since 1970, there has been a large increase.
2) 现在进行时
On the other hand, Recreation and education, Clothing accounted for a small portion of the
expenditure, with 17% altogether.
“累加”的写法:
totaling 17%//amounting to 17%//adding up to 17%//with a total of 17%//equaling 17%
19% of the expenditure was shared by Housing and power. Furthermore, the remaining 14%
was due to Transport and communication.
两个图写作顺序:
1) 先写一个,另一个再比
2) 直接联动
红书 P78:
Coal occupied the maximal portion//was the biggest instrument of the sources of energy, with
47% while Nuclear accounted for a tiny share, with only 1%. Furthermore, 28% altogether of
the energy was shared by Oil and Hydro. The remaining 24% was due to Natural Gas.
There was a decrease of 4% in the percentage of Hydro. In addition, the year of 1980
witnessed a slump of 9% in Natural Gas. What is worth mentioning is Oil was almost morose
during the decade.
Through the charts, we can easily draw the conclusion that the new source of energy,
particularly Nuclear was given full play while the traditional ones, though still dominant,
reached their bottleneck/ceiling to some extent.
两个图的写作原则:3+5
第一张图——3 句万能句型
第二张图——涨/跌/平的比较,5 个数据
2 涨+2 跌+(1 平)
数据很多的时候:
第一张图分三种情况:
最大的——2 号句型
最小的——1 号句型
中间的——3 号句型
破纸 P2
Social…, ad, edu, sci cover comparatively a majority of their main fields of study, with …
respectively, while 2.24%, 1.84% and 2.10% are shared by... The remaining percentages are
in moderation, with 5.53% for , 7.4% and 9.35% respectively.
increase max:
min Social Science
三个以上图的写作原则
直接联动(曲线图写作模式)
line chart
连词、副词连接
顺接:furthermore, moreover, in addition, additionally, next, in the following, what is worth
mentioning(值得一提的是), what is interesting, what should not be neglected(不能忽略
的是), last, on the other hand, meanwhile
转折:while, on the other hand, conversely, on the contrary, what is so different is
Line Chart
形态划分法——最简单的图
点位划分法——较复杂的图
水平划分法——极其复杂的图
比较划分法——两根曲线
Para 2:总分句
All trends( 动 态 )/statistics( 静 态 )/charts( 多 图 ) can be categorized/classified into ____
stages(时间)/groups(无时间)/types(多图) with (“general” trends or characteristics).
general=junk words
2 groups with predominance of Humanities in 1990 and 1994 and predominance of Business
in 1996, 1998 and 2000.
Applied subjects
with fluctuating from Jan to June, rising sharply from June to Aug, falling sharply from Aug
to Oct and rising gently from Oct to Dec.
with fluctuating from Jan to Jun, rising from Jun to Aug, Oct to Dec, falling from Aug to Oct.
with fluctuating gently from Jan to Jun and fluctuating sharply from Jun to Dec.
点位划分法:
with fluctuating evenly and gently from Jan to Jun and fluctuating evenly and sharply from
Jun to Dec.
Specific Description:
用天龙八部和句式变换来描述
Version One:
It fluctuated within a small range from Jan to June. Then it soared, reaching a peak at 3000 in
Aug and slumped, bottoming out at about 1250 in Oct. Finally, there was a boom/rally till the
end of the year.
Version Two:
Harry’s annual sales of hamburgers were volatile slightly during the first half year, followed
by leaping till its zenith at 3000 in Aug. We can witness a sudden slump to Oct, echoed by
booming till Dec.
Creative Writing
“Band 9” Version
图表系统结合文字系统
图表:reach a peak in Aug
文字:The hamburger sold best in summer.
Few people would buy hamburgers in Autumn, esp, Oct.
Hamburger encountered a recession in Oct//a sales waterloo/catastrophe.
All trends can be categorized into 2 stages with rising and falling sharply (6-10, 16-20) and
rising and falling evenly (11-15, 20-22).
相似度:
1) 大起大落 sharply
2) 小起小落 (comparatively) gently
3) 起落同幅 evenly
单线分类法
Comparative Classification:
1) popularity of
2) predominance/prevalence of
3) preference to
All statistics can be categorized into 2 stages with the popularity of listening to radio from
about 6 am to 1 pm and the popularity of watching TV during the rest of the day.
单线描写
红书 P71
All statistics can be categorized into 2 stages with the popularity of cinema from 1957 to
1960 and the popularity of TV from 1960 to 1974.
As to/As for/In terms of/In respect of/In aspect of/In regard to/Concerning the curve of
cinema admissions, it dipped from 1957 to 1960, followed by subsiding in the following/next
6 years. We can witness a trend of ebbing till 1972. In the end, there was an abating to its
bottom at about 90 in 1974.
P72
All statistics can be categorized into 3 stages with the equilibrium 均势 of/in the birth and
death rates in the first decade of the 20th century, the predominance of birth rate in the
following two decades, and the predominance of death rate from 1930 to 1970(in the
consecutive 40 years).
As to the birth rate, stabilization in the first ten years was followed by leaping to its zenith at
60 per thousand in 1920. We can witness a clear slump to almost one-third of the zenith in
1940. The next 20 years reflected an even rise and fall. Finally it abated to the trough in 1970.
Contrary to the birth rate, the death one continued to creep down after the overlapping period
till 1930, when a rally was shown between 1930 and 1940. Fortunately, fewer people died in
the rest years, with ebbing to the nadir in 1970. What is worth mentioning is that both birth
and death rates reached the bottom level in 1970.
As to death rate, it abated from 1900 to 1930, followed by soaring to its peak at 5% in 1940.
We can see an ebbing till 1970.
In the respect of birth rate, the first decade witnessed stabilization, followed by leaping to its
peak/zenith at nearly 6% in 1920. It slumped to 2% in 1940 and rose and fell evenly in the
next two decades. Finally it had the similar trend with its counterpart, death rate.
Sample Topic 13
All charts can be categorized into 2 types with absoluteness type for Full-time males and
Part-time females and alternation type for Full-time females and Part-time males.
概括描写(不同趋势、句型导入)
The trend of 1973 fluctuated within a large range.
So did the trend of 1993
作业:
1) 红书 P78 3+5
2) 破纸 P2 3+5
3) 破纸 P3 分线描写
4) 红书 P72 分线描写
5) 复习“天龙八部”
TABLE
表格的描述顺序是以时间(趋势)作为主线,非时间作为辅线(一句话)
五种技术举例方法:
极端数字举例法
范围法
平均值举例法
类比法
反比法
basically soar except in 1995
crept down to 1995 and rallied till 1998
All trends can be categorized into 2 groups with fluctuating in Holiday, Visits to friends and
relatives, Other reasons, TOTAL and rising in Business.
TABLE
23, 37, 41, 57, 63
47,53,42,46,58
4,7,11,16,23
45,56,60,76,86
Omnipotent 万能法①/②
Rare ③
Frequent ④/⑤
32,36,46,53,57
33,37,47,54,59
类比的四种句型:
This is the similar/identical case with…
This is true of …
So does…
This can be paralleled with …
反比的三种句型:
This is the opposite with…
This is converse/reverse with …
This is contrary to …
无序(无规律)数据用 1/2,甚至不举(看字数需要)
表格题的风格:
Technical Table (随意选取栏目)
Strategic Table (Screening 甄别 ;筛选)
红书 P73
一定要写的项目:√
说明公司:
Despite the increasing net sales of ABC Company, the rate of increase is deteriorating.
Furthermore, the Costs and expenses were not controlled properly, leading to the plain
increase of Net income with a decline after 1998.
表格题审题顺序:
1) 确定写作顺序(横?纵?)10 sec
2) 表格审题编号——先趋势,后数据
在表格左边空白区域标上 trend 编号 30 sec
写出 all trends 那句话(总分句)2 min
在表格右边空白区域进行数据方法的编号 2-3 min
进行数据的描写 10 min
Food always played a major part//accounted for comparatively a majority in the average
family expenditure in Britain.(纵向比较结果)
Sample Topic 6:
All trends can be categorized into 4 groups with falling in items such as Food, rising in items
including Housing, fluctuating in Household goods and services, and stabilizing in Other
items.
Transport and communications soared, reaching an apex at 16% in 1996 and hitting a trough
at 9% in 1967. Household goods and services was volatile dramatically with the vertex in
1996 and the nadir in 1977. Furthermore, there was a subsiding in Other goods and services,
ranging from 8% to 14%. Alcoholic drink plateaued at 7% from 1967 to 1977, followed by a
sudden slump to 4% in 1996, this was almost paralleled with the trend of Fuel, light and
power. (Food abated, averaging out at nearly 20%.) Similarly, the trend of Housing accrued
from 1967 to 1996 with an average of 14% in 1977. This was almost the similar case with the
trend of Recreation, entertainment and education, which was the opposite with that of
Tobacco.
What is worth mentioning is that Other items, not making its debut until 1977, remained
constant from 1977 to 1996.
All trends can be categorized into 3 groups with rising in Agriculture of Britain, Computer
Industry and Finance of China, fluctuating in Computer Industry, Finance, Manual Labour of
Britain and Manual Labour of China, and falling in Agriculture of China.
Britain
A CI F ML
3 2 1
China
A CI F ML
2 1 3
In terms of the industries of Britain, the percentage of Manual Labourers fluctuated within a
large range, reaching a peak at 61% in 1970 and bottoming out at 20% in 1990. This was the
opposite with the trend of employees in Computer Industry. People engaged in Finance
showed an undulation within a range of 10%. Agriculture witnessed a creeping-up of
employment, averaging out at nearly 20%.
表格题比较原则:
有可比点的比,没有可比点的不要比
“可比点”表示差异性(相反)
“没有可比点”表示同质性(similarity)或不相关性(irrelevancy)
横向比较结果:
In Britain, Manual Labour was the largest industry drawing employees, while most people in
China, were engaged in Agriculture.
纵向比较结果:
Agriculture witnessed a converse trend in aspect of employment for both countries. In China,
Computer Industry and Finance were prone to be booming industries.
红书 P74
All trends can be categorized into 3 groups with rising in income and the expenses of Food,
Housing, Medical, falling in the expenses of Others, and stabilizing of Entertainment and
Savings.
Generally speaking, we can witness a soar in the trend of income from 1980 t0 1985.
Focusing on the various expenses in 1980, Others and Housing accounted for the
comparatively a majority of the expenses, with 35% and 25% respectively. 28% altogether
was shared by Food and Medical. Furthermore, the remaining 12% was a tiny portion
occupied by Entertainment and Savings. In the aspect of 1985,
表格题的类型:
Dynamic Table(有趋势)
Static Table(无趋势)
纯比较——用多种语法形式来变换
BAR CHART
柱状图的本质——其它三种题型用柱子来表示。
Sample Topic 2
本质:
1) 三张饼图
2) 四根曲线图
All trends can be categorized into 3 groups with fluctuating in bus, rising in car and falling in
bike and foot.
3) 3X4 的表格题
This was the similar case with the trend of foot.
总结:
题型本质上分为两种——动态图和静态图
动态图最好用曲线图(All trends +天龙八部)的整体写作模式
静态图则是静态表格(纯比较)的写作模式
柱状图的要求:
1) 充分的比较(共性)和对比(差异),文字性的部分可以多一点,不必局限
在每一种题型的要求上。
2) 语法要求较高:对于主语的要求和句式的多样性(60%的柱状图为静态图)
柱状图是静态图比例最高的题型
静态图的分类:
一个饼图
表格题(30%)
柱状图(60%)
是
多/差…
倍数
3) 对于隐藏特征的开发(适用于所有类型的图)
Task 1 高分的关键:
变换多端的 wording 和句式、体系
清晰宏观的分类(ALL TRENDS)
有力得体的隐藏特征(HC)
隐藏特征:隐藏在数据背后的客观性事实。
隐藏——不明显,有别于主体段(body)的内容
客观性事实——有数据支持的现象,不同于个人观点
结尾段:
What is worth mentioning is that since (原因——数据支持), it indicates the fact that
(结论——文字总结)
avocations 副业 moonlight 兼职
Some people were engaged in several industries//Some people had their avocations while
others were engaged in other industries unmentioned.
2) “abnormal” statistics(图表文字中出现一/几组反义词)
compare and contrast to locate the facts contrary to social belief and common sense
Ordinary:
1. Men earn more than women
2. Graduates earn more than non-graduates
3. Different trends and peaks for different genders
1) Men: leap till the end of 40s and boom with the peak at £650 in 50s
2) Women: basically volatile slightly after a sharp increase after 24 years old. The peak
salary is nearly half of their counterpart
HC:
1. Men non-graduates basically earn more than those women graduates.
2. Since the gap of salary between graduates and non-graduates becomes wider
and wider upon age, it indicates the fact that qualifications are important for
people’s salary.
红书 P78:
The new source of energy, especially nuclear was given full play while the traditional ones,
though still dominant, reached the bottleneck/ceiling to some extent.
万能 Opening:
Opening 的四要素:
As is shown/displayed/revealed/ in the ( 1 ) 图 的 类 型 ( 图 与 图 之 间 没 有 联 系 的 加
respectively), the (2)图的单位(number/amount/percentage/figure) of 图的主题 (3)图
的主要趋势
1) fluctuate/rise/fall—趋势种类=1
2) vary—趋势种类〉=2(Table)
3) differ—静态图,无趋势
(4)(图的时间)
1) from…to…
2) during…and…
3) in …
不用写总分句的情况:
1) 所有饼图
2) 静态图(没有特征)
commuter
白书 P7:
All statistics can be categorized into 3 groups with majority, minority and moderation.
红书 P82
The number of employees with different degrees
the changes of educational backgrounds of the employees of a company
红书 P72
As is revealed in the line chart, the number of birth and death rates per thousand population in
a developing country varied dramatically from 1900 to 1970.
As is displayed in the table, the figure of Underground Railway Systems including Date
opened, Kilometers of route and Passengers per year in six cities differed.
不用写总分句的情况:
1) 所有饼图
2) 曲线既没有相交且趋势相同
3) 所有静态图且没有特征变化
主体段大致段落要求:
1) 一般有几个图写几段,不同类型一定要分段。
2) 流程图一张图写一段。
多图之间没有联系不用写总结段。
What is obvious is that
小作文段落数
Min=3
Max=4
1 week 5
1-2month 10 pieces
2-3months 15 pieces
>3 months 20 pieces。
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出题部分最后一句话为写作指令句
Rubrics:
1) Discursive 50%
2) Agree or Disagree 20%
3) PRR(Why + What) 25%
4) A&D 5%
5) Combo
What are the reasons for moonlight of teenagers? Is it a positive or negative trend?
What ways could mobile phone and the Internet be useful to old people? How do old people
be encouraged to use this new technology?
Discursive:
1) To what extent do you agree (or disagree)
2) How far do you agree (or disagree)
3) What’s your opinion towards the statement
4) Discuss both opinions/statements (and give your own one)
5) Do the advantages outweigh the disadvantages?
Discursive 的写法:
1. 单边同意一个观点
2. 单边反驳一个观点
3. 两个观点一起论述,在开始就给出自己支持的观点,支持观点可以多写一点(有倾
向性 7:3)。
4. 同时论证两个观点,表示中立。(无倾向性 5:5)
Discursive 段落数:
1+2(3)+1=4(5) 单边写法
1+2(A)+1(B)+1=5 双边写法(有侧重点)
*A 表示你支持的观点
*B 表示你不重点支持的观点
1+1(A)+1(B)+1=4 中立写法
Agree or Disagree
Which opinion do you prefer to?
段落数:
1+2(3)+1=4(5) 单边写法
Agree
Disagree
Impartial/ neutral towards
1)Argumentative 论证型
argument, logic, reasoning
Argumentation depth
A&D 中立文章的写法
1+2(A)+2(D)+1=6
A: Advantage
D: Disadvantage
Illustrative 说明型
detailization
paraphrasing supporting width
从句至少两句以上,词汇永远不重复
合情合理的情节加拿捏分寸的语气
清晰的格式再加上具体的解决方案,减少套话
Task 1x40% + Task 2x60%=6
5+6
6+5=5.5
6+7
7+7
7+6
6+8
8+6
1. Discursive/Agree or disagree
The progress of ______ is irresistible and irrefutable. What acts as the Pandora’s box is
whether ________________. From my point of view, _____________________.
educational proficiency.
2.PRR
The progress of ______ is irresistible and irrefutable. Despite the versatility 多 样 性 and
complexity 复 杂 性 of the reasons, I would pore over 分 析 the most significant ones and
(offer the alternatives 解决方案 in the following).
3. A&D
Since ______ is a double-edged sword 双刃剑, I would highlight 强调 the co-existence 共存
of the pros 好处 and cons 坏处 of _______. In my opinion, both sides can hold water 站得住
脚.
Remarking Criteria:评分标准
AIE 4 5 6
CQ 5 6 7
VSS 6 7 8
达到 6 分的基本条件:
1) 审题不偏题——观点必须切中细分主题(specific topic)
Idea:必须切中文章的 Specific Topic
Topic: 1st sentence
Specific Topic: 2nd sentence
Broad Topic:球
Topic—computer
Specific topic—personal communication, socializing
Broad topic—Science and Technology
Topic——television
Specific topic— education for children
Broad topic—Science and Technology & Education
Topic——Littering
Specific topic— Waste disposal
Broad topic—Infrastructure
如何做 OUTLINE?
solution 3 minutes
1) brainstorming 1.5min >5
2) combination 0.5 min
3) reorganization 0.5min
3)有论据和例子,论据比例略大于例子
8) making friends
9) higher studying efficiency
10) have life independence
11) help each other
12) living near studying place
Benefits of Sichuan Wenchuan Earthquake:
Benefits of watching TV
1) kill the time
2) get the latest information
3) family together
4) talking stuff between friends
5) learn knowledge
6) facilitate sleep
7) learn the foreign language
8) entertainment/relaxation
9) get the inspiration
10) shopping through TV
Demerits of Snowstorm
1) traffic congestion
2) power failure/blackout
3) financial loss
4) deteriorate Agriculture output
5) cause death
6) raise people’s awareness for mutual help and humanity
7) build up the consciousness for E.P and energy saving
Criteria:
1) From physical to mental
2) From broad to specific
3) From general to individual
4) From major to minor
Evidence 新变化:
1)experience 经历 or 经验?
cognition 认知;见解
2) example 位置的变化和 evidence 的消失
example<argument
example 广义化
1) 名人名事
2) 名人名言
3) 社会性事实 SARS
4) 细节化例子 detailization
低于 Band 5 的七种技术情况:
1) Unfulfilled
2) 格式错误
3) 字迹模糊,难以辨认
4) Task 1 和 Task 2 写反
5) 攻击考官
6) 题型判断错误
7) 没有切中 ST
CQ 的要求:
论证层次安排:(Body 层次安排)
English:演绎
China:归纳
1) Topic Sentence(simple and potent)
2) Supporting Sentences—Arguments (at least 2)
3) Minor Example(at most 2 sentences)
4) Flow-back Sentence—Explanation of Minor example
15X6=90
Opening 50
Body 180
Ending 30
论证质量——refer to TBT,
VSS
SS—Band 6 必须写从句 at least 3
Vocabulary—Band 7
Versatility (Variety)
Difficulty X
UCLES
large/high_____ expense
Band: 6
titanic
super
extreme
unbelievable
incredible
terrific
big
Band: 8
gigantic
immense enormous
costly dear extravagant extortionate
exorbitant
Enlarge mental edification and spiritual abundance by filling-up and cover-up and
appreciation of aesthetics.
陆谷孙《英汉大词典》
Task 2 的整体结构:
Opening: 3~4sentences (about 50-60 words)
1) General situation—Topic
2) Writing purpose—Specific Topic
3) Your opinion—Initial Solution
Body:
Structural Transition (架构过渡)
题型写法
1. Discursive/Agree or Disagree
It is important.
It is of critical/paramount/vital/ultimate importance.
unavoidable
irresistible
irreversible
irrefutable
unassailable=invulnerable
incontrovertible/indelible
*indispensable
Paraphrase 的方法:
1) 改同义词
2) 改词性
3) 改句型
4) 用典故
www.economist.com
www.time.com
controversial
debatable/discussable/arguable
thorny 荆棘的
argumentation
debate
controversial
arguable
thorny
荆棘
There c r o p s u p / arises a social dilemma/ambivalence/ambiguity over the
issue/hot potato of _________.
Pandora's box
Judas kiss
Roghet’s 韦氏 罗热同义词词典
辽宁教育出版社 RMB68
feasibility
sensibility/reasonability/logicality/
soundness
2. PRR
1st sentence=discursive 1st sentence
第一句话导入文章的问题(P)
The issue of __(P)__ , though inevitable and undeniable, can be alleviated.
Simple Version:
过渡句(情感让步)
(Although) diverse contributing factors can be identified,
Though there exist various reasons/instruments of this problem,
观点句
I would like to analyze some of the obvious ones and offer the solutions in the following.
Complicated Version:
Despite the variety/versatility/multifariousness/polypolarity and
difficulty/complexity/intricacy of the instruments/factors, I would put forward/ pose/ pore
over/ demonstrate/ analyze/ excavate/undercover/specify/ponder over/bring
up/moot/mirror/voice/meditate on some of the most
important/striking/significant/potent/brief/ superficial/in-depth/penetrating/piercing/thorough
ones (and offer the alternatives/therapy/remedy afterwards.)
My Version:
3. A&D—impartial discursive
neutral
impartial
Simple Version:
There arises a social dilemma over the issue of ______. For me, I highlight the co-existence
of the pros and cons of _______.
1) soft/indirect tone
I am impartial toward _____.
*Both opinions are reasonable.
can hold water//are water-proof.
Neither opinion has loopholes.
*reasonable
2) hard/direct tone
I advocate/assert/maintain/affirm/
reiterate/attest/aver/avow/highlight/air/stick to/adhere to/uphold the co-existence of and
of _______.
*secondly
On second thoughts 《《 《 《《
As a (two-sided thing)
Feedback 《《《《
Concession 《《
Although [the opposite opinion] seems reasonable to some extent, the feasibility 《《《 of
my opinion outweighs 《 … 《 《 that of [the opposite one]. 《 《《 《 《 《 《 《 《 《 《 Flow-back
sentence.
get the upper hand//prevail over the opposite one
Requirement:
3 Opening
1 Structural Transition
1 Ending
Professionalism
4. Popularization 《《《《
5. Parallelism 《《
Impossible is nothing
Everything is possible.
Possible is everything
《《《《《《《《《《《《《_______.
Heroes create the times and times produce the Heroes.
Pride and Prejudice
Price and Prejudice
When you feel hope is gone, look inside and be strong. And finally came to know, that hero
lies in you, which is the music.
CAREER DEVELOPMENT
1) Specific Education—the functions of teacher/education Medium-
importance
task: Supporting Sentences 3x3
2) Knowledge Vs Experience 2+2 1para《10 sentences
Strategic Writing
www.answers.com stress
《《——professionals
《《《——versatile people
2) In order to make sustainable and enduring development in the society, people have
to enlarge their scope of knowledge《《 《《《《to save it for a rainy day.《《 《《
Knowledge entails 《 《 《《 《 《 《 innovation(updating and upgrading), lack of which your
“cheese” (Current achievements) will be moved easily and for all. Once you are satisfied
with your current situation or achievements, you, on the verge of collapse, are bound to
lose enthusiasm/zeal/drive/motive for further development, thus
encaged/imprisoned/bogged down in the pyramids of stagnancy//bury your head in the
sand until the goldmine you are sitting on turns into an active volcano and bursts you up.
(save it for a rainy day)《《《《 sustainability 《《 《《
Broadening scope of knowledge is the instrument of your enlarging perspective.
Versatility can help the talents to frame more foundations for his career
development, which will consolidate the sustainability of his career prosperity.
sit on the goldmine 《《《《
Endurance
《《《《 《《《《《《《
Comprehensive development is the key to sustainable development
T
scope of knowledge
adaptability
T module
《《《 《 《《
1) Experience is the mirror/criteria of checking the
accuracy/validity/practicality/feasibility of knowledge and
2) poses the counter-effect on knowledge.
《《《 《《《 《《《《 《《《《 《《 《《《《《《《
《《《《
1) clear purpose of learning
Only after acquiring certain experience can you know clearly which aspect of knowledge you
are in urgent need of. After all, people’s energy is limited. We cannot really wander in the
world of knowledge without knowing where the entrance is. Thus, having a clear purpose of
absorbing knowledge is like a GPS system, which can help you find a definite objective
without much effort.
Intelligence
Endurance=persistence
Laboriousness
Tactfulness
Adaptability to fit in with 《《 the local community
3) Super capabilities:
1) enlarge your personal network 《《 through socializing with your peers and build up
alumni your image
alumni
Orientation
2) locate and orientate your character for career planning by SWOT analysis
introvert- sales
extrovert-clerk
When you come to a new and strange environment, you will be more exposed to your true
self and more clear about your potentiality, discarding the hidden artificiality beneath the
genuine one. Thus, the true image will be clearer for you to decide which path you will take,
saving the unnecessary trouble to locate the personality and character in career development.
Flexibility reaches its peak when people just graduate from university and join in the
workplace fresh and new. However, it deteriorates once you become accustomed to the work
pattern and fit in the working environment. Thus, achievement of practice and expertise is, to
some extent, at the cost of flexibility and ingenuity.
When you are not a fish in the pool, you have become sort of sophisticated 《《, well informed
of general principles of dealing with workmates and priority principles of coping with
business affairs, simplicity, inborn character from the genuine, are “yesterday no more” ,
blank in your memory.
《《《《《《《《
《《《《《《《
What’s lost can never be regained.
Ethic
It is difficult for you to get harmonious with the new environment and community
pre-homo culture
identity
1) enlarge and enhance your personal network by socializing with your classmates and
workmates.
2) Character orientation and location by more exposure to yourself in a strange
environment SWOT
introvert
extrovert
introvert
extrovert
Since character has a say in choosing career, the fate rests upon the situation of career
development
What is even worse, some of the young adults may commit crimes, leading to the high rate of
juvenile delinquency
sophisticated.
naive
What is lost can never be regained.
opportunity cost
High
INFRASTRUCTURE=1/3 IELTS
1) solid infrastructure 《《 《(natural or social issues)
2) soft infrastructure 《《 《
(social evils)
PR®
Traffic congestion
E.P. (environmental protection)
City development (urban planning)
Moving factories to suburban area
Establishing satellite city
Abolition of old but historical building/architecture
Lawn establishment
Water resource
Family planning (birth control)
Gap between the poor and rich (countries)
Good relationships between countries
Green house effect/Global warming
Popularization of world language
Paying the education fee
Employment of students
Increasing population of younger generation (<15 years)
……
Women crimes
Juvenile delinquency
Littering
Noise
Theft
Killing or eating wild animals
Physical punishment to children
Watching violent films for children
Public insecurity
Plagiarism 《《 《《
Selfishness or greed among people
Policeman carrying the gun
Capital punishment
… …
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1《 《《《《 《《《《《《《《《 《《
《《/《 《《《 /《《 《《
《《 /《 《
《 《/《《
《《/《《/《《《 《《
eg.《《 《《《《《《《
2《 《《《《《 《《《《 《《 “《《 ”supervision
3《 《《《《《 《《《《《《《《《《
legal system/mechanism (laws and regulations)
4) 《《/《《/《《《《《《(A&C)
2 《《《《 《《 《《《+《《
《《 《《 《《 《 《《 《 《+《《
《 《《《 《《 《《 《《《 《
《《 《《 ———《 《《 《《
1) gov should create more channels for employment with internship system for university
students
2) entrepreneurship
3) preferential studying policies
4) the value of experience or practice for students
Government
Individual
GOV=Authorities 《《 《 《
Infrastructure construction (solid)
The government does not attach much importance to the reconstruction of _____, leading to
the chaos or turmoil in this situation due to lack of social responsibility.
《《《《《 《《《《
Littering
E.P. facilities
sorting//recycling facilities
1) recyclable
2) other waste
3) harmful waste
4) bottle & glass
non-degradable
Individual
A&C=awareness and consciousness
*sense of responsibility/ morals consciousness/
1) Traffic security
2) E.P.
3) Self-discipline/self-control/self-judgment 《《
4) Sustainable development
《《 《《《《《《《
equilibrium/balance between the long-term ecological benefits and the short-term economic
benefits/profitability
《《《《 《《《 《《 《《
preserving the cultural/historical heritage and relics//popularizing the traditional
culture//meditation on the history and the past
《 《《 《《《
Frugality
sustainable utilization//economical use of water resource
eco-balance
eco-chain
2 《《《《 《《《
Back-ups—wording and paraphrasing
Characteristic paragraph—content
improvise 《ingenuity《
shuttle bus/unlicensed vehicles
careless road killers
Solution:
Authorities:
1) increase investment and allocate/allot 《《 fund/revenue for infra-construction 《
《
2) improve legal system by issuing some relevant laws and regulations for
prevention//to save it for a rainy day. Prevention is better than cure. nip it in
the bud
3) impose severe//launch the toughest penalty on the frequent law-breakers 《《《《
《 《《《《
Individual:
4) increase people’s A&C through propaganda (promotion and social campaign)
awareness and consciousness
Omnipotent examples:
1) establish some festivals or anniversaries to remind people of the importance of
_______
WORLD Animal’s DAY
2) do some voluntary work
3) set up a museum/preservation for visiting
2 《《《《《《
Gap between the poor and rich:
《《 《《《《《《《《《《《《《
1) AUTHORITIES
The underprivileged / underdeveloped/poverty-striken 《 《《 《《《 countries lack necessities and
prerequisites for development such as convenient transportation and communication network,
sophisticated 《 《 《 technology, profuse/abundant investment and capital, and high-leveled
talents and elites, which hampers them from rapid and sustainable development.
2) INDIVIDUAL
The underprivileged/developing countries lack awareness and consciousness (A&C) for a
sustainable and comprehensive development. Most developing countries progress and
“prosper” at the cost of natural resources, ecological loss, even instability of financial
maneuver, thus slowing the pace of development in the long run.
Characteristic reason《
Historical perspective
The happiness of the developed countries is based on the misery of developing countries. So
they develop at different starting levels.
Economic perspective:
Since the essence of globalization is centralization, which means wealth is in the hands of a
few groups/minorities, this shows that as long as globalization exists, it will widen the gap
between the minorities and the mass.
Political/military perspective:
VIP (Superpower) imposes hegemony/sanctions on the small and middle powers, curding//
intervening their development with unfair treatment.
《《 《《 《《《 《《《《《
A&C for international cooperation
Kyoto Climate Change Treaty
for globalized E.P.
Sustainable E.P.
strategic planning
coordination/coalition/deployment
the environmentally friendly nations can provide experience and facilities to the
environmentally hostile nations while learning lessons from the latter.
Political perspective
Hegemony sanctions
Plagiarism
Authorities:
1) University
studying resources
supervision of students
lenient with students’ misconduct
2) Society
Practicality
3) Students
A&C for self-discipline= disrespect for canons/classics
Present and future effects of increasing population of younger generation (<15 years)
What is present?
What is future?
Baby boom
Aging society (adulthood)
Physical:
1) increase expenditure/GDP
Education
Entertainment
Cosmetics and Body care
2) more burden to nuclear family
3) inclination to aging society
i. more burden to social welfare system; revenue tightened
ii. lack of labor force
iii. consume more resources(living materials, medical resources, etc.)
iv. stimulate the pharmaceuticals and medical services
Mental:
3) traditions/social value may be negated
4) more social issues(baby boom)
e.g. juvenile delinquency
fierce competition in university enrollment and job application
Positive:
a) a warning to//deter the possible criminals; a sense of relief to the citizens
b) protect the citizens concerned and the police staff to avoid more severe consequence
c) raise their sense of social responsibility
Negative:
1) The government should first improve the police staff’s proficiency in handling the
on-the-spot crimes and emergencies by allocating more revenue to the social
security agency, equipping them with more sophisticated weapons or
communicational facilities and giving them a better training or moral education.
Without preliminary consolidation of police’s abilities, policemen with gun would
rather be a social threat to society. In USA, crimes conducted by police is an
existing thorny problem.
2) Prevention is better than cure. Gun is just the ultimate symbol of punishment.
Polishing the legal mechanism is the key to guaranteeing the social security.
Furthermore, more severe punishment such as lengthening sentences will be a
warning to the frequent law-breakers.
3) Raising the citizens’ A&C for supervising the social security altogether is a routine
task for all levels of government. Only by collective and coordinative force can the
crimes be utterly alleviated.
《《 《《《 《《《《《 NO
1) The university should give students better requirement for study such as
more studying resources and better tutoring system
2) The university should be careful on punishing students with more sensible
rules and opportunity for students to correct mistakes.
3) The students should raise their A&C for respect for canons and intellectual
property.
ABSTRACT—ideology 《 《《 《
Stress
Happiness
Fashion
Character
Attitude
Shopping
Selfishness
Advertising
Equal treatment of salary
Changing jobs
Gender issue (women joining army)
Fatherhood-parenthood
Frequent report/coverage of disasters and violence
Future or Presence of nation
……
Writing Principle:
From physical to mental
body
material
Physical Reason:
Physical deficiency(feeble/frail/fragile)//Immunity deterioration due to malnutrition 《《《《 or
insomnia 《《 can cause body dysfunction 《《《《 for stress.(Physiology)
Unhealthy life styles such as smoking, alcoholism, staying-up, unbalanced diet, lack of
physical exercise are detrimental to your physical health, thus leading to your physical
deficiency and body dysfunction, which makes you vulnerable/subject to stress.
List some example
Solutions:
Physical:
1) Build up body function through more nutrition intake and body exercising
2) Cultivate some wholesome hobbies
Vitamin:
Any of various fat-soluble or water-soluble organic substances essential in minute amounts
for normal growth and activity of the body and obtained naturally from plant and animal
foods.
Body building-up through nutrition intake, body exercising and polishing your healthy life
style.
Nutrition fact-example
body exercise=work out
restlessness
tension
encyclopedia
save it for a rainy day 《《《《
perfect
polish=《《
work therapy
《 《《《《
filling-up:《 《《 《《《《《
cover-up:《 《《 《《 《《《
《《《《《《diversion of attention
mental edification: 《《《《
spiritual abundance/elevation: 《《
appreciation of aesthetics: (《《)
HAPPINESS
Everyone has his own definition/criteria of happiness.
1) accumulation of wealth
*Maslow’s theory
Value of money
2) health
3) mental edification 《《《《/spiritual abundance 《《/appreciation of aesthetics 《《
hobby-example lofty
4) characteristic paragraph
By combining all the factors I have mentioned can people live a really happy life.
CHARACTER
family
friends/lover=company
society
Nowadays, more and more people go shopping. What are the reasons for the popularity
of shopping?
Mental:
release their pressure
a sense of satisfaction
keep up with the Joneses conformism 《 《《《
seasonal concession
Physical:
accumulation of material and wealth; income increasing
hierarchy of needs multiplied
Mental:
show off one’s status- a sense of satisfaction
keep up with the Joneses
attract people’s eye
Selfishness=Attitude
In some definite requirement such as the transitional period of social development or in the
underprivileged society, people attach more importance to the physiological needs or
materialism rather than morality, which physically accounts for the appearance of selfishness.
《《《《《《《《 《《《PRR
Gov:
1. lack supervision of EP and social security
2. lack mechanism (laws and regulations) for prevention
Media:
Physical: to attract the readers’ attention for its volume of publication
Mental:
1. to satisfy the curiosity of the readers
2. clarify the authenticity of the events to let the masses know the truth, avoiding social
chaos/turmoil.
3. to appeal//raise people’s A&C for public concern/humanity and symphasy through
donation, grants or subsidy.
4. disclose the current social problems for betterment of the government
Presence—Economic construction
Physiological needs//social security system//living standard improved//people’s
livelihood
Future:
1) sustainable development
E.P equilibrium—Economic reconstruction
Education (Who moved my cheese)
2) Beyond material construction, mentality (spirit) is also a cornerstone of social
frame, which entails cultivation of people’s morals and mental
edification/pacification.
Fashion
1) release their pressure
2) keep up with the Joneses
3) seasonal concession
4) stimulated by ads
Present and future effects of increasing population of younger generation (<15 years)
Baby boom
Aging society
……
Physical:
1) increase expenditure/GDP
i. Education
ii. Entertainment
iii. Cosmetics and beauty salon
2) more burden to nuclear family
3) inclination to aging society, causing more pressure to social security system
medical services
natural and social resources
4) more fierce competition in college entrance examination and job application, leading
to higher unemployment rate because of labor redundancy
Mental:
1) traditions(social value/custom/practice) may be negated
2) more social issues such as juvenile delinquency//puppy love//studying abroad, etc.
Pros:
1) promote the products for the benefits of the advertisers
2) enlarge/maintain the market share of the products
3) let the consumers keep up with the Joneses
4) fashion trends/fads
5) approve the aesthetical capability of the viewers
6) offer the information to the possible buyers
7) offer sponsorship to those magazines, newspapers, TV channels, etc
Cons:
1) misguide the consumers by boasting the effects and benefits of the advertised
goods, thus doing harm to the audiences, especially children who cannot tell
the truth from the myth.
2) distract you from TV serials or programs
3) lower the intelligence quotient of the audiences and blaspheme their taste by
some freak and abnormal way of ads
4) there emerges an inflated sense of self-importance and overconfidence in the
sold products. Too much investment in ads will lead to collapse/loopholes of
capital chain, even bankruptcy of the company.
《《《 《《《《《《 《《
The unpaid community service should be a necessary part in high college programs (such as
helping your neighbor or teaching the children sports or working for the charity).To what
extent do you agree or disagree?
《《《《《 selfishness 《《 《
《《《《
1) 《《 《《《《《《《 《《 《《《《《 《《《 《《《《《 《《 《《 selfishness 《《 《《《《《《《《《《《《《 《《《《 《《《《《《《《《《《
《《 《《《
2) teach the students the importance/hardship of making a living/earning money
through charged service, which is conducive for their career development and social
value(A&C)
3) set a valve for community work load; some more sophisticated community work
should be done by the government through allocating part of the revenue to the
relevant communities or agencies.
《《《《《
1) raise people’s A&C for public concern/humanity and symphasy through offering unpaid
community service
philanthropy/benevolence
Saving money:
1) beneficial for retirement life
2) good for children
3) conducive in case of emergency
4) form the habit of financing and wealth management
5) interest gained
2) _____ can push back the frontier of science and technology (airline/aviation business)
through innovation and ingenuity as an avant-garde 《 《《 . Each generation of product acts as
the stereotype 《《 /milestone/by-product for their later innovations-- descendents.
Computer-based library:
Cons:
1) inconvenient for computer-illiterates especially the aged
2) cyber security and piracy once attacked by hackers
Pros:
1) convenient for the management of library
2) labor-saving for the borrowers
3) push back the frontier of library industry
4) high-tech media(Multi-media)
Pros:
1) Convenient (money-saving, labor saving, time-saving) for the consumers since
we save the trouble of importing and transplanting the natural food from their
places of origin. Local processing is also conducive to the locals through
adapted taste or flavor.
2) Eating some kinds of processed food with limited amount pushes back the
frontier of innovative food research, since we may consume all natural food in
one day due to environmental degradation and ecological deterioration. Raising
people’s A&C for extinction of natural food through researching is really a
must, which promotes the research of alternatives to natural food.
Pros:
1) Comparatively speaking, live animals are more easily available/accessible than human
beings (their superlative counterpart). Though it is contrary to ethics, research with live
animals helps promote S&T materially.
2) After all, history proves many tremendous findings and scientific accomplishments are
really the outcome of research using live animals, which pushes the back of the frontier of
innovation in all fields of S&T, esp. in pharmaceuticals, biology, genetics and medical
services.
Motorized flight
1) Pros
a) fastest and most efficient way of transportation esp. for business travel, which can
yield profits due to time-saving
b) release travel stress
c) push back the frontier of aviation/space technology
More and more people use the mobile phone or computer to communicate, and no longer
write letters to each other. Some people think the skills of letter writing will soon disappear
completely. Do you agree or disagree? How important do you think letter-writing is?
Importance of Letter-writing:
i. more emotional and personal way of communication with the receiver.
ii. avoid direct and instant response/feedback as a formal way such as declination of
university application or business invitation letter.
iii. display and popularize the Chinese traditional culture through letter-writing.
Nowadays, some people claim that public museums and art galleries will not be needed
because people can see historical objects and works by using computer. Do you agree or
disagree?
Pros of public museum
1) real beauty rather than artificial beauty—the value of arts and museum
2) place for preserving cultural relics and heritage
3) raise people’s A&C for art appreciation and historical experience
replica
meditation on
With technology speeding up, more and more young people begin to use mobile phones and
the Internet, but old people have little chance to be exposed to them. What ways could mobile
phone and the Internet be useful to old people? How do old people be encouraged to use this
new technology?
1) convenient and labor-saving for them to communicate with their family, relatives and
children
2) enrich their life esp. after-retirement
3) narrow the generation gap with young adults, thus the society
4) stimulate national GDP
Solution:
1《 Government allocate special fund for eliminating aged computer-illiterates
2《 Family/Children
3《 The aged raise their A&C for using modern technology
MASLOW’S THEORY
Should (government) support/ subsidize/ give grants to/develop ______?
Is it necessary to develop ______?
1) space technology
2) weapon
3) musician or artist
4) sports professional
5) artistic projects
6) costume and beauty salon
7) theatre, museum//medical center and education
《《 《《《《《《
1《 《《 《《《《《《
2《 《《 《《《《《《
*Hierarchy of Needs
As for the Small and Middle powers: the first priority is
The importance of physiological needs and the necessity of improving people’s living
standard
As for these less-developed and developing countries, settlement of physiological needs for
survival is more significant than spending extravagant money on ________ according to
Maslow’s Theory.
Superpower:
Convert 《《
With the burgeoning 《《 of superpowers, the original purpose of ____ has been converted into
“real” purpose of seeking economic or political profitability/benefits for the sake of group
interest, which is contrary to the original purpose of __________.
e.g. Global Defence System
O.P.=Original Purpose—Positive
C.P.=Current Purpose—Negative
Weapon
O.P. national defense and security
C.P. 1) military deal for huge profits
2) armament/arms threat
Hegemony (superpower)
Ask for equal treatment//call for international attention (small and middle powers)
Musician//sports professional
Past: Simple, devoted, conscientious
Present: With the commercialization of society, some musicians pay a lot of attention to
profitability rather than art itself. They spend less time in improving their artistic technique.
On the contrary, they hire sophisticated agents for their commercial performance. Nowadays,
some musicians or sports professional are really a big shot. They earn utterly more than
ordinary people. Even the superstars have their own sponsors. Thus, there is no need to
subsidize this group of persons due to market economy.
Beauty salon
Most profitable industry
Profuse, abundant
Artificial beauty
《 《《《《《《
1《Since most countries have settled the physiological needs, it is natural and indispensable
for them to seek higher needs such as ______.
2《Advantages of _______
GLOBALIZATION
《 《《 /《《 《《
《《《/《《《《
《 《《《/《 《《《 《《《《 《
1) 《《《 《《《《 《《《《
Since globalization, whose essence is centralization and commercialization, is inevitable and
undeniable, it is bound to lead to the popularity of some predominant languages and culture
due to convenience in communication and exchange, which deteriorates the minor ones.
According to the principle of Superiority of the senior and inferiority of the junior, the minor
ones will be watered down/deteriorated with the doom of dying out.
2《《《/《《《《《《《《《《
With the bourgeoning of superpowers, emigrants, attractive to the comparative advantages
such as the sound social security system and benefits, have been swarming into these
“dreamland of fantasy”. If they were confronted with the dilemma of cultural shock, they
would not be hesitated to discard and betray their native languages and cultures, which brings
disaster to the minor languages and cultures due to subjective deterioration.
cultural intrusion
Solution:
Infrastructure
polypolarity
carnival
Government
1) emigration/immigration
melt pot
2) allocate funds to maintain the function of minor languages
《《《《《《《《《《
2 《《
1《《 《《
mechanism
laws
2) 《《《
Life is no respecter of genius
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function of education/teachers
advantage of knowledge
advantage of experiences
pros/cons of studying abroad
leaving home for study or work
traffic congestion
reason and effect of environmental pollution
city development
government responsibility
body building-up
materialism
Hierarchy of needs Maslow
physiological needs
nutrition fact
edification, aesthetics
reasons for shopping
advantage of science
disadvantage of science
globalization
cultural loss
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Task 1 (G)
Types of Letter
1. Complaint
2. Enquiry
3. Request
4. Apology
5. Acknowledgement
6. Suggestion
7. Job application
8. Recommendation
9. Self-introduction
10. Invitation
Format of a letter
Dear …
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(Regards )
Closure
Signature
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To an organization: Formal
Dear Sir or Madam
Dear Mr. / Mrs./Miss/Ms. + surname
To those who are concerned/ To whom it may concern
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To an individual/friend: Formal or semi-formal
Dear Professor + Surname
Dear John (Given name)
Regards Closure
Best wishes Yours sincerely,
Best regards Yours truly,
With lots of love Yours faithfully,
Take care Cordially yours,
formal
Yours sincerely
(English name)
Emotion Words
Writing task 1
You live in a room in college which you share with another student. You
find it very difficult to work there because he or she always has friends
visiting. They have parties in the room and sometimes borrow your
things without asking you.
Write a letter to the Accommodation Office at the college and ask for a
new room next term. You would prefer a single room. Explain your
reasons.
I am writing to inform you that I wish to move into a new room next term. I would
prefer a single room, as I find the present sharing arrangement inconvenient.
I must explain that the reason for my dissatisfaction is my roommate’s inconsiderate
behavior. For one thing, his friends are constantly visiting him; for another, he
regularly holds noisy parties. In addition, he sometimes borrows my things without
asking me. In these circumstances, I find it difficult to concentrate on my students,
and I am falling behind in my assignments.
I am sure you will agree that the only solution is for me to move into a room of my
own, where I will be free from such distractions. Therefore, I would be grateful if you
could find a single room for me, preferably not in the same building but as near to the
college campus as possible.
Yours sincerely,
Janice Kennedy
Writing task 1
You have received your pay for your summer holiday part-time job, but your
pay is less than you were promised. Please write a letter to the manager of the
unit, clearly stating what work you have done and how long your work took.
While explaining your case, put forward your demand and suggestion.
Dear Manager,
I have received the $800 cheque which you pay to me as a part-time software
loss why the amount is $ 100 less than you promised to pay me.
signed the contract with you and consequently worked in your company for a total of
3 weeks. In the period, I went to and from work on time and to your satisfaction, I
Also, no blame about me was ever heard in any aspect. So my total income should
be $ 900, which is $ 100 more than that I gained from you. I firmly insist on your kind
Yours sincerely
Janet Smith
Enquiry –目的+具体问题+(急切心情+感激+联系方式)
1. I am writing for information about…
2. I am writing to see if it is possible for you to provide me with information
regarding…
3. I would be most grateful if you could supply me with the following information.
Writing task 1
As part of a student social survey project, you are organizing a group to
visit a historical exhibition in a small town.
Write a letter asking for information regarding such things as the
contents of the exhibition, and the dates of its opening and closing, and if
there are any discounts available.
Dear Sir,
First of all, what are the dates between which the exhibition will be held, and what
are the daily opening hours? Secondly, what is the size of the exhibition, what is its
theme and what objects are on display? Thirdly, are there any other activities being
held in connection with the exhibition?
I must point out that I hope to bring over students to the exhibition. So I would like to
inquire if there is any discount available on entrance tickets for students. If so, how
much is the discount and what is the minimum number of students necessary to
qualify for it?
Yours sincerely,
George Moore
Writing task 1
One of your pen pals will shortly be visiting your city. For some reasons,
you cannot manage to meet her at the airport on time.
Write a letter asking her to wait for you at the airport and tell her how to
identify you.
Dear Mary,
I am very much looking forward to your visit to my city. Just think: after all these
years of writing to each other, we will finally have the chance to meet! However, I
regret to inform you that I will not be able to meet you at the airport as soon as you
arrive.
The reason is that your flight will arrive early in the morning, and the quickest I can
get to the airport will be about an hour after you land. Please wait for me in the arrival
lounge. You should be able to have breakfast there while you wait.
By the way, as we have never met I must tell you how to recognize me: I am medium
height and have a small mustache. In addition, I will be carrying a copy of the
morning newspaper tucked under my left arm.
Yours sincerely,
Harry
Writing task 1
You want to invite some friends to a party. Write an invitation letter to them
individually, elaborating on the reason why such a party should be held and
what activities will be arranged for them.
Dear Susan,
I will hold a dinner party at my house on June 23, 2000(Saturday) to celebrate my
father’s being awarded the Pulitzer Prize for journalism this year. As you are a close
friend of our family, my parents and I would very much like you to participate in the
celebration and share our joy.
The occasion will star at five o’clock in the afternoon, with the showing of the
documentary film of the 1999 Kosovo war produced by my father, which secured the
prize for him. This will be followed by a dinner party. At around eight o’clock, we will
hold a small musical soiree, at which a band will perform some works by Bach and
Strauss.
If you do not have any prior appointment on June 23, my family and I look forward to
the pleasure of your company.
Cordially yours,
Jessica Louis
Acknowledgement –目的+原因+再次感谢
1. I am writing to extend/convey my heart-felt thanks/sincere
appreciation/gratitude to you for…
Writing task 1
After being involved in an accident, you were looked after by another person.
Write a special letter to express your thanks.
Dear John,
The doctor says that my broken leg is healing well, and the bruises and cuts I
suffered will soon be completely better. In addition, the taxi company has agreed to
pay my hospital bills. Everyone agrees that it was your quick-witted response in that
emergency that has led to this satisfactory outcome.
Although nowadays many people talk about the need to be unselfish to help others,
we see very few people practicing what they preach. But you showed by your
selfless action that you are an exception. If there were more people like you, this
world would be a much nicer place.
Yours sincerely,
Ted
Writing task 1
You have just arrived in the city where you are going to spend two years for
your master’s degree. You have a lot preparation to do before the new term
starts, but you do not know how to go round the city. A friend you have newly
acquainted offered you guidance and helped you through difficulties. Write a
Dear Mary,
I am writing this letter to thank you for the guidance you gave me. I was a perfect
stranger when arriving at this city. Once I lost myself for not knowing the way in a
downtown street, although I stopped to ask some people for direction. As you know
I bought a guidebook, but there were still difficulties in going round the city. The
streets and shops puzzled me so much that I would rather stay indoors. It is your
valuable guidance that has enabled me to go about the city without losing myself. I
thank you very much for your kink help. Now I begin to know how to take the proper
trolley buses. Yesterday I went downtown with some of my schoolmates to buy some
stationery.
Lesson will begin in a few days. I will come over to see you some day next week and
Sincerely yours
Julia Noel
Request –目的+解释原因+重申并表达感谢
1. I am writing to request to do something
2. I am writing in the hope that …
End of a request letter
1. By the way, if you think it is possible …, I would like to …. I am sorry for the
inconvenience this may cause you.
2. I am looking forward to your reply.
Writing task 1
You stayed with a local family when you attended a training program in New
Zealand. You returned to your home country in a hurry and found that you had
left your laptop computer in the family. Write a letter to the family, thanking
them for their hospitality. Describe your computer and where it is and ask the
I’m writing to express my gratitude for your entertainment during my stay in your
However, due to my rashness, I left my laptop computer in the guest room that you
had arranged for me, which causes many inconveniences both in my work and my
life.
The above mentioned laptop computer is Model IBM 500 with gray appearance, half-
new. I vaguely remember that I put it on the desk by the fireplace of the guest room.
The laptop computer contains all the important data related to my job. I cannot live
without it.
I really appreciate if you can find it out and send it to me by EMS as soon as
possible. Enclosed with the letter is the return envelope with address, and a cheque
of post.
Sincerely yours
Suggestion–目的+建议(2~3 点)
1. I got to know from … that …. I am writing to give you some advice about it.
2. I am writing in response to … to suggest ways in which …
Writing task 1
A friend who lives abroad will shortly be visiting your university and has asked
you to make arrangements for his stay. Write a letter informing him of what you
have done.
I have received your letter dated April 5, 1996 in which you have asked me to make
arrangements for your stay here. I am glad to tell you that all relevant things have
First of all, I will meet you at the airport when you arrive here. Then I will take you to
our university reception where I have booked a room for you. On the second day of
your arrival, you will be invited to attend our teaching activity in a small group. In the
afternoon, I will take you to visit our students’ design work of architecture. On the
third day, I have arranged a lecture at which I hope you could give us an introduction
small party for you at which you will have more chance to communicate with our
student as well as our staff. On the last day I will see you off at the airport.
If there is anything inconvenient for you in this schedule, please let me know as soon
as possible.
Yours respectfully
Robert Kennedy
Application –目的+个人陈述(2~3 点)
1. I am writing to apply for the position of … you advertised in … on …
2. I am writing to express my interest in your recently advertised position for …
Writing task 1
From an advertisement you learn that a company has the position vacant in an
just arrived in the United States and you want to have the job. You’ll enclose
your resume with details of academic courses in your letter. You should ask to
have an appointment.
Dear Sir,
From your advertisement on New York Times, March 24, I have learned that you
University in June 1995. Since September 1997 I have been participating, through
Yours sincerely
Mary Jones
Recommendation–目的+解释原因+重申
1. I have learned from your advertisement … that you are looking for …. I am
writing to you to recommend …
2. As…, I earnestly recommend … for the position that you advertised …
End of a recommendation letter
1. Therefore, I do not hesitate to recommend … as an ideal candidate for the
post. I am sure you will make a wise decision in hiring her.
最新雅思写作题目集锦
普通培训类小作文(书信类)
1. You are going to London for a visit, and you would like to spend two days in visiting a
library as you are doing a research project. Write a letter to the library assistant,
2. When you were painting your rented apartment, you accidentally damaged
something in one of the rooms. Write to your landlord, explaining the reason for
writing the letter and how the whole thing happened. Finally, you should suggest how
Write to the manager of a sports club nearby, inquiring about what procedures are
4. During your travel overseas, you left a handbag on the passenger plane. Write a
letter to the airline company, explaining the situation and describing the handbag.
Also, indicate the way they can possibly solve the problem.
5. You bought a CD player from a local store a few days ago, but now it doesn’t work.
Write a letter to the manufacturer, asking them what the problems are and
complaining about the attitude of the shop assistant. Also tell them how they can
6. You are a local student who has moved to a new neighborhood where there is an
extremely large tree just in front of your doorway. Write a letter to the local authority,
complaining about the problems the big tree has brought to your life.
7. Write a letter to invite one of your friends to attend a large celebration at your home.
State the reasons why the celebration is held and all the details about the
8. One of the pen friends overseas is going to visit you. However, for some reason, you
cannot meet him/her as previously arranged. Write about your reason, the place
where you want him to wait for you, and how he/she can recognize you.
9. You are a college student taking part in a research project. Write a letter to a local
museum, asking them to provide essential materials. Give the details of your project
10.During your business trip to another city, you met an attendant on the train who
treated you with very impolite manners. Write a letter to the railway authority,
complaining about the bad attitude and poor service of that attendant.
11.You have just received good news related with your family. Write a letter to one of
your friends, explain the reason for writing. Also, tell him/her the details of the good
12.You are in international student who has been arranged by your university to live
with a local family. However, for some reason, you are not satisfied with the
accommodation. Write a letter to your university, explaining about the situation and
13.One of the pen friends overseas is going to visit you. However, for some reason, you
cannot meet him/her as previously arranged. Write about your reason, the place
where you want him to wait for you, and how he/she can recognize you.
14.You are organizing a business meeting, and you should write to people from other
companies and tell them the changes of the meeting (time, location, etc.). You can
(1) explain why you have to make changes, (2) tell them the changes, and (3)
15.You are going to London for a visit, and you would like to spend two days in visiting a
library as you are doing a research project. Write a letter to the library assistant,
16.Someone wrote an article in the newspaper criticizing a new movie. Write a letter to
the author to express your disapproval, explaining why you disagree with his or her
opinion.
17.You have a friend who will go on holiday to a town which you know very well. Please
write a letter to him/her including these contents: (1) recommend a place to live (2)
what things he/she can do there (3) the weather conditions there.
18.You want to ask a friend of yours to visit you for the first time and live at your home
for a short period. Write a letter of invitation, suggesting him to bring essential things
19.You are an international student who has rented an apartment on campus. Recently
you damaged something in one of your rooms. Write to the school authorities,
explaining how the damage was caused, offering some solution and apologizing for
the inconvenience.
20.Your company is going to have a working weekend in a hotel. Write a letter to the
hotel staff about what you need. You need to introduce yourself, tell them your plan
21.You have been working for a company for several years. However, you are
dissatisfied and disappointed with it. Write a letter of resignation, explaining the
reason why you want to leave and making some requests or suggestions.
22.One of your neighbours wrote you a letter, complaining about the annoying noise
you made in the neighbourhood. Write a letter to him/her in which you should
explain the situation, apologize for the noise you made and tell him/her about the
23.For some reason, you cannot attend a course you have already paid for. Write a
letter to the professor, indicating the reason and tell him/her what you plan to do.
24.A company is organizing a trip abroad for language training to a number of limited
places. Please write a letter, expressing that you want to join, why you think you
campus. Write a letter to the college authorities, introducing yourself, explaining why
you are unhappy, asking for on-campus accommodation, and telling them why it is
26.You went to computer shop last week to have your broken computer repaired.
However, you are not satisfied with their service. Write a letter of complaint to their
manager, explaining the situation and the reason why you were unhappy, and telling
27.Last weekend, your watch was lost in an English-speaking friend’s home during your
visit. Write a letter to your friend, thanking his/her kindness, describing how you lost
accommodation agency to seek a house for your family. Please tell them what type
29.You had a long distance flight and found there were some problems on the plane.
Also the crew was not helpful. Write a letter to the airline to describe the situation,
tell them what happened during the journey and give some suggestions.
2007 年雅思大作文全集
(1)2007.01.06(新题)
their jobs. What are the reasons of such phenomenon and offer some
(2)2007.01.13 (原题)=2005.05.28
related to future career. Others think the true function of the university is
to give access to knowledge for its own sake. What is your opinion?
2005.05.28 题目
find employment, but some people believe the main function of university
should be to access knowledge for its sake. What’s your opinion?
Some people say the government should pay for the health care and
2005.07.09 题目
Some people think the government should pay for health care and
(4)2007.02.03 类似 2006.06.17
2006.06.17 题目
The best way to solve the world’s environmental problems is to increase
(5)2007.02.10 类似 2005.11.26
People think the public library will be replaced by the computer. To what
2005.11.26 题目
not use limited resources and space and should be replaced by computer
(6)2007.03.03 类似 2004.02.21
academic ability, but others believe pupils with different abilities should be
2004.02.21 题目
Some people think intelligent children should learn with others together,
since it will benefit everyone, while other people think intelligent children
should learn separately, and also should get special treatment. Discuss
(7)2007.03.10 (新题)
think the skills of letter writing will soon disappear completely. Do you
(8)2007.03.31 (原题)=2005.2.26
2005.02.26 题目
People can perform everyday task, such as shopping and banking, as well
(9)2007.04.14 类似 2006.09.02
The society would benefit from the ban on forms of advertising because it
2006.09.02 题目
persuade children to buy snacks, toys , and other goods. Parents object
such pressure on children. But some advertisers claim that there is useful
opinion.
(10)2007.04.21 类似 2006.09.02
Customers are faced with increasing amounts of advertising due to the
2006.09.02 题目
persuade children to buy snacks, toys , and other goods. Parents object
such pressure on children. But some advertisers claim that there is useful
opinion.
(11)2007.04.28(原题)=2004.09.18
countries where they cannot be grown or are out of season. Some people
believe that this is a good thing, but others consider this use of air
transport can’t be justified. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
2004.09.18 题目
countries where they cannot be grown or are out of season. Some people
believe that this is a good thing, but others consider this use of air
transport can’t be justified. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
(12)2007.05.12 类似 2006.09.23
2006.09.23 题目
which areas computer is more important and in which areas teachers are
more important?
2004.07.17 题目
(14)2007.06.02 类似 2006.05.20
2006.05.20 题目
Nowadays, some people claim that public museums and art galleries will
not be needed because people can see historical objects and works by
2006.08.05 题目
educate, not to entertain. Discuss both sides and give your own opinion.
2007.02.10 题目
People think the public library will be replaced by the computer. To what
(16)2007.06.16 (新题)
fast foods. This is having a negative effect on both families and societies.
more appropriate?
2004.12.18 题目
(18)2007.07.14 (新题)
Lectures were used in the past as an old way of teaching a large number
(20)2007.08.11
Some people think the food has been changed and improved by
to eat this kind of food. Describe both sides and give your opinion.
(21)2007.08.18
people all over the world for international communication. Do you think
(22)2007.08.25
Nowadays, many people save money for their own care after retirement.
(23)2007.09.01
Some think that the young should take a job as soon as they leave school
(24)2007.09.08
Today, cars cause many problems. What are those problems? Should we
(25)2007.09.20
Some people think government should invest in art, but others think it
should finance health care and education. Discuss and give your opinion.
(26)2007.09.22
Today, the expenditure of higher education is paid by the government,
students or loans which can be paid back after graduation. State the
benefits of the three ways. Which way you think is the best way for the
society?
(27)2007.10.20
disagree?
(28)2007.10.13
(29)2007.10.20
disadvantages?
(30)2007.11.03=2007.09.22
students or loans which can be paid back after graduation. State the
benefits of the three ways. Which way you think is the best way for the
society?
(31)2007.11.17
think there are lots of negative effects for children and should ban the
(32)2007.11.24
Some say it’s not good for the poor countries to receive financial aid from
(33)2007.12.01
plastic bags and throw them away after one-use, thus it will pollute our
environment. What are the reasons for the situation and how it can be
alleviated?
(34)2007.12.08
graduates find better jobs while some others hold that there are wider
benefits for the individual and the society. Discuss both viewpoints and
(35)2007.12.13
Everyday, many species of plants and animals are declining. Offer the
and violence to the public. Discuss the reasons and the effects on the
2008 年雅思大作文全集
(截至 2008.5.10)
(1)2008.01.12
The best way to decrease the crime rate is to extend the period of
state which do you think is the best way for public security.
(2)2008.01.19
Some think the traditional thoughts of old people are out of date. Some
believe they are still of some value. To what extent do you agree or
disagree with the opinions?
(3)2008.02.16
What is the importance for individuals and countries to think about future
(4)2008.02.23 类似 2007.04.28
Nowadays, we often eat food transported from overseas. Do you think the
(5)2008.03.01
you think are most important to be taught in schools and one that is least
important to be taught.
(6)2008.03.13
Nowadays people pay lots of attention to physical health through many
ways. Some regard the attention is just for individual benefit, others say
(7)2008.03.29 类似 2008.03.13
Some think the government should be responsible for ensuring the people
of the country that have healthy lifestyles. Others think we should make
our own living decisions. Discuss both opinions and give your opinion.
(8)2008.04.05 类似 2007.09.08
several years time, and causes the same amount of pollution as cars. So
for tourism), and it is more efficient than restricting the car use. Give your
(10)2008.04.19
aged 15 or younger, what do you think of the current and future effects
(11)2008.05.10
(12)2008.05.31
Some people argue that the fittest and strongest individuals and teams
can achieve the greatest success in sports. But other people think the
success is much related to the mental attitude. Discuss both and give
your opinion.
易考雅思小作文流程图/解释说明性图
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(2)
The government planned to build a supermarket in G Town. In the following map there are
two alternative places for you to choose: place S1 and place S2. According to the
information shown in the diagram, describe the benefits and drawbacks of the two
locations.