Comparison essay 20160422

Name: Kyueun Choi

Student number: 201321653

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Topic: To repeat the university entrance exam, studying alone and studying in academy

. Introduction (Paragraph 1)
A.

Hook: Have you ever experienced preparing exam again to repeat the university entrance
exam? In Korea, there is a joke Studying one more year is necessary and college on the third
try is a choice to enter the university. The number of people who repeat the university
entrance exam is constantly increasing these days in Korea.

B.

Connecting information: Before preparing the exam, to get a better scores than last time,
many test-takers are concerned about the best way to study. There are typically two study
ways to preparing the university entrance exam. One way is studying alone that only studying
by yourself. Another way is studying in academy that studying with many people. These two
methods have pros and cons each other. Between these methods, they have different types
of time management, academic management and human relations..

C.

Thesis statement: We can compare two studying types focusing on the situation where
students study alone or study in Academy.

. Body
A. Paragraph 2 (first point of comparison): Time management
1. Studying alone
a. You can choose a lecture that you want to attend
b. You can control a recess
2. Studying in Academy
a. You can take whole courses
b. A regular life - Studying in Academy can intercept the flight of laziness.

B. Paragraph 3 (second point of comparison) : Academic management

1. Studying alone

a. You can ask Question that you want to know mainly on the Internet class board.
b. You have to find and discover information about everything and also prepare for yourself.
2. Studying in Academy
a. Every time you have question, you can simply ask your teacher.
b. In Academy, Teachers and consultants put you onto information about college-preparation with
systematically advice.

C. Paragraph 4 (third point of comparison): Human relations

1. Studying alone
a. You can easily yield to friends temptation who are already in university that play around with
them.
b. You dont have to quarrel with other people because of Studying alone.
2. Studying in Academy
a. you have many friends who are studying together and can rely on.
b. Because of community life, there might happen some quarrels occasionally.

. Conclusion (Paragraph 5)
A.

Restated thesis: As you see, there are overall three differences between studying alone
and studying in an Academy. Between these studying ways, they have different kinds of time
management, academic management and human relations. These two means have
advantages and disadvantages each other. In time managements, studying alone can control
your whole plan and studying in an Academy can get a regular life.

B.

Suggestion, opinions, or prediction: However, if you find your best methods that work
in perfect harmony to study, you can get a great scores that you want to achieve.