Professional Documents
Culture Documents
Approaching Section B
Candidates must write about three texts
substantially.
There is no need to explicitly compare these
texts.
Things go awry when students choose the
wrong question for their texts.
The same philosophy applies in Section B:
answer the question and you will access the
objectives.
Students do well when they focus closely upon the terms of the task.
Commentary
There is very good coverage of three texts here, with plenty
of textual detail marshalled in support of the views offered.
The student works really well with the key task terms,
distinguishing between mad and bad and dangerous and
focuses the response sharply around a discussion of these
areas. The expression is very good, with a lively voice
emerging at times and we get the impression that this
candidate knows the texts well. There is a confidence and
fluency to the writing and an evaluative quality to the work,
with views being weighed up and judgements offered.
We might have wished for a more thorough conclusion, but
whats here is very good indeed and clearly warrants a mark
in band 6.
Encouraging self-assessment
Tips continued
6. Learn multi-purpose quotations
7. Avoid irrelevant context
8. Practise developing points
9. Dont forget structure for AO2
. 10. Choose the right section B task.