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Withstand Adversity Finding the Value of Family
The bomb blew off right in her home Her mother and father were gone as quickly as she
ew through the air where her soon-to-be new mother-figureManam would Pick her up and care
r In the all the chaos happening around her, Laila IS able to find a family that roots her life
nd gives her reason to persevere Laila, one of the protagonists In
roves
241) When Rasheed was beating Manam, Laila acted on Instinct "'l
I wasn't raised In a household where people did things like that,'" she later told
Manam She here IS referring how she was broughtup WithBabl, who valued and respected
women and their potential to do great things Babi saw the value of the women in his life, this
morality rubbed off on Laila and allowed her to stand up for the beatings of Rasheed
Looking beyond Just her actions, Laila also demonstrates her true self In her ulterior
In what seemed to be an Il o s
mless submission "Later, In the dark, Manam told the girl [of
Rasheed's intentionto marry herl For a long time, the girl said nothing 'He wants an answer by
this morning,' Manam said 'He can have it now ' the girl said 'My answer IS ye
vJVas no hesitation when Rasheed asks her which gives the Impression that Laila has given up
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However, one later finds that she is
pregnant WillAnza who ts Tanq's daughter Latia's goals
ultimately were to protect her own,
regardless of what marrying Rasheed could entail Because
she had this sense of family-protection,
Laila was able to accept and withstand a miserable life
With Rasheed The case IS the
same for when she has a child WithRasheed She wanted so
badly to abort the baby and came very
close to it However, she knew that having this child
would please Rasheed which would tn
turn calm his often raging and impatienttemper Her war
was against Rasheed The baby was blameles (Hossetni 284). Latia had the abilityto see
past her own desires and know that her family and now-fnendlyManam would be better off if
she had thts child, the sense of protectionfor her family made her think a certatn way and thusly
prevents her from crumbltng under the pressure of life tn Kabul Thts therefore dtspiays*r
how
she uses familial values to form a resilience to the hardships she faces
There IS truth in Laila's character that makes her relatable to anyone factng difficulties in
life. She clearty exemplifies how there ts stability in familial relationships. When ltfe throws htm
off, one can be steadfast when standing Withanother
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resistentto the hardships she experiens.Wife-beatrg
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up in. *The girthnged at hm She grabbed
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with both hands and tried to drag
himdown... She did sueed in downg Rasheeds progess
bward Mariam' (Hosseini 241 When Rasheed
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up. owever, one later finds that she iyregnant wiilAziza who is Tari<s daughter,Law
ultimate
o protect her own, regardless of what marrying Rasheed could entail. Because
she had this sense of family-protection,Laila was able to accept and withstanda miserable life
with Rasheed. The case is the same for when she has a child with Rasheed. She wanted so
badly to abort the baby and came very close to it However, she knew that having this child would
please Rasheed which would in turn calm his often raging and impatienttemper."Her war was
against Rasheed. The tby was blameless,- (Hosseini 284), La/a had the abityto see past her
own desires and kntN that her famgy and now-friendly Mariam would be better off if she had this
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With both hands and tried to drag him dowr She did succeed In slowing Rasheed's progress
toward Mariam"(Hosseini 241 When Rasheed was beatingMariam,Laila acted on instinct She
later told Mariam, "'I couldn't let him... I wasn't raised In a household where people did things like
that.'" She
how she was brought up with Babi, who valued women and ther
an all to seamless submissiom "Later, in the darK Mariam told the girt (of