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Itisquiteobviousthatthe
rateofcrimesareincreasingdaybydayinallsocietiesintheworld,
butIpersonallydobelievethattherearealotwhichcanbedoneby
boththegovernmentsandtheindividualstoreducethecrimesin
communities.
Alotofimportantmeasures,ontheonehand,canbetakenbythe
governmentsinordertoreduceoreveneradicatedifferenttypesof
crimes.First,governmentscanintroducemorepoliceforces
everywheretomonitorpeoplesactivitiesandstopthemfrom
committingcrimes.Second,thestatecanapplynewtechnologies
suchassurveillancecamerasinthestreets,shoppingcenters,
restaurantsandallpublicplacestoceasecriminals.Third,strict
punishmentsoncriminalscanhavereallypreventiveanddeterrent
effectsonallagegroupsinsociety,sobyusingharshpenaltieslike
emprisonment,physicalorfinancialpunishmentstherateofcrimes
canbedecreased.
Ontheotherhand,individualsinsocietiescanbeofgreathelptocut
downonthenumberofcrimesbeingcommitted.Tomymind,the
overwhelmingmajorityofpeopletendtoparticipateinactivities
assistingthegovernmenttokeepthesocietyasafeplacefortheir
ownfamiliesandtheothersandforallagegroups.Takeasan
example,mostpeoplebyreportingtheproblemstopolicecanplay
anindispensableroleincrimepreventionactivities.Inaddition,when
peoplethemselvescareaboutdecreasingheinouscrimesincities,it
canbesortofapreventiveactiontoharnesswellthesituationin
societybygovernmentaswell.
Toconclude,inorderforasocietytobeasafeplacetolivein,all
societymembersincludingthegovernmentsandpeoplemusttake
necessarymeasurementstokeepitacrimefreeplace.
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bySara
Recentfiguresshowanincreaseinviolentcrimeamong
youngstersundertheageof18.Somepsychologistsclaimthat
thebasicreasonforthisisthatchildrenthesedaysarenot
gettingthesocialandemotionallearningtheyneedfrom
parentsandteachers.
Towhatextentdoyouagreeordisagreewiththisopinion?
Ithasbeenindicatedbythelatestresearchesthattherearean
increasenumberofviolencecrimesthroughouttheyoungindividuals
under18yearsold.Thereasonforthisphenomenonasthe
psychologistsbelieveislackofemotionalandsociallearningbythe
parentsandteachers.Psychologically,therearetwocrucialfactors
thatmakingteachersandparentscarelessabouttheiryoung
childrenandstudentsatetheageof18inlearning.
Parentsandteacherstreatadultsinseriouswaysduringthelearning
processfortwopoints.Firstofall,theyobservethatthesegroupof
childrendonotneedemotionandsoftnessasyoungerchildren,and
theyreallypayattentionjustontheiracademicstudiesandhowto
passsuccessfullyfromtheschool.Eventually,therelationships
betweenparents,teachersandstudentsbecomeextremelyhard
withoutanylove.Secondly,oncethecircumstanceattheschoolor
homeisgettingworseandunderpressureforstudents,theystartto
hateeverybodyaroundthemandactnegativelyandviolently
againstinnocent.Consequently,teachersandparentscausepeople
atageof18tobedangerouscriminalsinthesociety.
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Theothersignificantpointisparentsandteachersareless
informativeofexcellentmethodoflearningandteaching18yearsold
students.Althoughthereareseveralofresourcesthatcouldteach
peopletheintelligentapproachofemotionalandsociallearningfor
adult,theseteachersarestillnotprofessionalatit.InCanadafor
instance,Chapter,whoisthefamouslibrary,sellsthenewestand
easiestbooksofdealingwithsecondaryschoolsstudents,yet
criminalbehaviorshavereachedthepeakatschools,streetsand
publicplaces.Lastly,thisproblemisdifficulttobesolvedwithout
increasingtheawarenessamongteachersandparentsofthe
importanceofreadingaboutemotionalsociallearning.
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InConclusion,todecreasethenumberofcrimeviolenceamong18
yearsoldindividuals,parentsandteachersshouldteachthemin
inspirationalandfriendlymethods.Irealizethatstrictcommunication
andnarroweducationaretheinfluentialfactorsformakingthese
youthcriminals.
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Youthcrime
by:P!n0y
Thetopicoftheproliferationofjuvenilecriminal
actsanditsreasonshasbeenacontentious
issue,sincetheinceptionofthemodernage.
Althoughparentsandteachersplayacrucialrole,
itmustnottobeforgottenthatthegovernment
shouldalsoplaytheirpart.Thisessaywill
examinebothviews.
Tobegin,sinceparentsaretheinitialrolemodel
forachild,theyholdthevitalaspectininculcating
valueswhichwillguidethechildthroughlife.For
example,ifachildisproperlynurturedduringthe
startofdevelopment,thiswouldleadtoabetter
growth,thusmakingapersonproductiveandmay
notcontemplateanylasciviousactsinthefuture.
Inaddition,schoolsaresaidtobethesecond
institutionfornotjusteducationbutalsosocial
growth.Thecurriculum,inpart,shouldmotivate
theyoungmindstobecomeanassetinthe
society.Byshowinginspirationalmovies,for
instance,canignitetheirendeavortostriveforthe
bettermentofthecommunityand,therefore,can
makeattributionsinthefuture.
However,theauthorityshouldalsoimpartsome
contributionstopreventthisdebacleoftheyouth.
Sincetherearebeneficialprojectspresent,the
governmentmayencouragetocommission
infrastructuresuchasgym,sport'scomplex,
footballfieldanddancestudiosinpromotinga
healthylifestyle.Withthis,muchoptionswouldbe
rendered,thus,preventingvirulentthoughtsto
ariseleadingtocrime.Acaseinpoint,iftheyouth
willspendatimeinthegym,abeneficient
outcomewillbeprovided,therefore,avertingthe
possibiltyofnegativeprocess.
Tosumup,ifirmlybeleivethatinorderto
eradicatethispredicamentoftheyoung,a
synergesticeffortshouldbeformedfromthe
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CausesandSolutions
bySamidha
Inmanycountries,theamountofcrimeisincreasing.
Whatdoyouthinkarethemaincauseofcrime?
Howcanwedealwiththosecauses?
Inmostofthethirdworldcountries,illegalactsareenhancingata
higherpace.Morefreedomforyouthandpovertyarethemain
causesforincreasingcrime.Strictlawsandregulations,proper
education&employmentcouldbethesomeofthepossiblesolutions
forthisproblem.
Firstly,therearenorestrictionsforyoungpeoplenowadays.
Adolescentsarepronetocommitcrimeastheythinkwhattheyare
doingisright.Forinstance,thecasesbeingregisteredforrapeturn
outtobecommittedbyanagegroupof1418years.Secondly,inthe
underdevelopednations,poverty&unemploymentseemstobe
anotherreasonforoffenceslikerobbery&theft.Forthegreedof
money,poorpeopletendtoperformillegalacts.Toexemplify,ifwe
tunetoanynewschannel,wellcomeacrossatleasttwosuchcases
daily.
Now,letusdiscussthepossiblesolutionswhichcouldhelpreduce
thecrimerate.Tobeginwith,anycountryshouldhavestrictlawsand
regulationsagainstcriminals.Ifaproperlegalsystemisrunning,
peoplewouldbefrightenedbeforedoinganykindofunlawfulact.
Thefearofhardpunishmentwouldrestrainthemfromcarryingout
anykindofoffence.Inadditiontothat,industrializationwouldaid
more&morepeopletogetemploymentleadingtoariseinincome&
hencereducedcrime.Education&awarenesstoyoungchildren
shouldbepromotedbythegovernmenttohelpthemunderstandthe
differencebetweenright&wrong.
Arayofhopecanbeseenfromtheabovesolutions,ifincorporated
inasuccessfulmannercoulddiminishtheillegalactstoagreat
extent.Asexplainedabove,everycloudhasasilverlining.To
conclude,inmyopinion,harshlaws&punishmentagainstcriminals
andbettereducation&morejobopportunitiescanbeconsideredas
effectivewaystodealwiththeseproblems.
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CrimePrevention
byLama
(UAE)
Crimeisabigproblemintheworldmanybelievethatnothing
canbedonetopreventit.
Towhatextentdoyouagreeordisagree?
Thecontemporaryworldhaswitnessedanincreaseincrimerates
earlier.Thisisaprevailingandworryingaspectthatmademanyto
believeit'simpossibletopreventit.However,inmyownperspective,
Ithinktherearecertainmethodsthatcouldtacklethesefeloniesand
slashitsgrowth.
It'sessentialtolookupforthefundamentalandtherootcauseofthe
dilemma.Forexample,therelationshipbetweencommittingacrime
andpovertyshouldbeconsideredaspovertyisincreasing,crime
rateisincreasingtoo.Besidesthat,thesocialissueof
unemploymentcanleadtheindividualoranypartytocommita
certaincrime,suchasrobbery,humansmuggling,drugtradeetc.In
addition,theriseininflationnumberhasadirectcorrelationwith
unemploymentandpovertytoo.Asaresult,theprevailingscenario
leadstoinsufficientavailabilityofjobopportunitiesforthenation.
Thesepeoplewilltendtogooffthetangentandbecomelaw
breakersinordertoaffordmoneyfortheirsurvivalorotherreal
purposes.Statisticshaveshownthatdealingwithbribesbetween
peopleisspecificallythemostcommittedillegalactintoday'sworld.
Andeventually,thisisperpetuatedtospreadcorruptionandseize
humanrightsinanunfairway.
Despiteallthehorrificcrimesgoingon,genuinemeasuresshouldbe
takenintoaccountagainstthosefeloniestoreducecrimeratesinthe
region.Localgovernmentsshouldhavedeterminableimpactson
poorpeopletouplifttheirlives.Thiscanbedonebyprovidingmore
jobstoinitiatetheeconomicalindustriestooriginatemorejob
opportunities.Thegovernmentofeachcityshouldalsosubmit
straightlawstothecitizens.Theselawmustinvolvestrict
punishmentsthatobligetheoffendertothinkagainbeforecommitting
anycrime.Moreover,goodmoraleducationandparentalguidance
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improvestheindividual'spersonalperspectiveandpointofviewin
thesociety.
Inconclusion,Ithinkcrimeratescannotbediminishedbutalleviate.
Andbyconsideringsomemeasuresandprecautions,theworld
wouldbecomeabetterplace.
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AlternativestoPrison
byHayderAhmed
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Somepeoplethinkthatthebestwaytoreducecrimeistogive
longerprisonsentences.Others,however,believethereare
betteralternativewaysofreducingcrime.
Discussbothviewsandgiveyouropinion.
Daybyday,therateofcrimesintheworldisincreasingrapidlyand
therearemanywaysbothindividualsandgovernmentshoulddoto
decreasethecrimesinthesociety.Theargumentthatthebest
methodtodecreasethenumberofcrimesisalongtimeprison
punishmentormanyotherwaysarebetterisasubjectthatisboth
supportedandrefutedbymany.Analysingbothsidesofthis
argumentwillbeanalysedbeforeaconclusionisgiven.
Firstly,somepeoplethinkthatthebestmethodtodecreasecrimes
byputtingthecriminalsintheprisonsforalongtime.Forexample,
whenthievesknowthatpenaltywouldbealongperiodsentencesin
theprisons,theymaybeafraidtodocrimesinthecommunity.
Therefore,thecriminalsmightstopdoingcrimesbecauseofthishard
punishment.Thus,thismakesitclearwhysomepeoplebelievethat
givealongtimeprisonpunishmentsisthebesttoreducecrimes.
However,somepeoplethinkthatmanyothermethodscanbeused
todecreasethecrimes.Forinstance,thecapitalpunishmentcanbe
usedtoreducethecrimeshighlybecausethecriminalswouldfear
fromthedeadpenaltyandtheycouldstopdoingcrimes.Inaddition
to,rehabilitationalsocanbeusedtorehabilitatecriminalstomake
themgoodpeopleinthesocietysuchaslearnthemjobskills.From
thisitbecomesquiteevidentthatwhysomepeoplebelievethatother
waysinsteadofalongperiodprisonarebest.
Insummary,bothviewsofthisargumentarediscussed.After
analysingthissubject,Iagreethatothermethodssuchascapital
punishmentarebetterthanalongperiodprison.Thus,itispredicted
thatdrawbacksofalongtimeintheprisonmorethanbenefits.
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ExPrisonersAdvisingTeenagers
AboutCrime
byFahad_a11
PleaseEvaluateandpointoutmistakesinmycrimeessay.
Somepeoplewhohavebeeninprisonbecomegoodcitizens
later,anditisoftenarguedthatthesearethebestpeopletotalk
toteenagersaboutthedangersofcommittingacrime.
Towhatextentdoyouagreeordisagree?
Thereisnodoubtthatcrimerateshavedramaticallyincreasedover
thelastfewyears.Somecriminalsmanagedthemselveswellwhile
theystayedinprison.Oneofthereasonsisthattheyhaveseenthe
problemsandsacrificestheyhavetomake.Somepeoplearguethat
thesearethebestpeopletocreateawarenessaboutcrimesin
teenagers.However,othersstatethatapersonwithacriminal
backgroundwillnotaleavegoodimpressiononpeople'sminds.
Firstly,itisthedutyofgovernmentsandthepeopletoidentifythe
aspectsofcrimesinteenagers.Afterthat,thereshouldbe
workshopsandseminarswhichhighlighttheconsequencesof
committingcrimes.Itisalsotheresponsibilityofparentsand
guardianstohaveaneyeontheirchildren'sactivities.Withlittle
effort,onecanstopmanycriminalactivitiesinthesurroundings.
Secondly,peoplewhowerethepartofimmoraldoingsbecomegood
citizensafterprisonsocouldhelpteenagerineradicatingthissin.
Theyhavepersonallyexperiencedallthesufferingtheyhavetogo
throughaftertheircrime.Theyknowthepossiblereason,whyand
howyoungstersareinvolvedinsuchcrueldoings.Theirworlds
wouldleaveundeniableimpressionsonpeople'smindsandwillhelp
toeliminatecrimefromthesociety.
Toconclude,Istronglybelievethatonceacriminal,notalwaysa
criminal.Ifonehasregretabouthispastandhaschangedhimself,
oneshouldbetreatedlikeanormalhumanbeing.Furthermore,they
couldhelpteenagersfromcrimewhiletellingthemabouttheir
sacrificesoftime,healthandfamily.
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AlternativestoPrison
byLenah
(Yemen)
Somepeoplethinkthatthebestwaytoreducecrimeistogive
longerprisonsentences.Others,however,believethereare
betteralternativewaysofreducingcrime.
Discussbothviewsandgiveyouropinion.
Crimebyallofitstypesisadangerousproblemwhichstart
expandinginsomecountries.Alotofgovernmentstryingtoreduce
its.Somepeoplethinkthatthebestwaytostopthisproblemisput
criminalsintheprisonforlongerperiod.Others,believethatthere
aremoredifferentsolutionscaneffectbetterthanfirstopinion.Inthis
essayIamgoingtodiscussthesetwoopinions.
Therearebenefitsforgivelongerprisonsentences.Firstly,this
judgmentwillbeastrongdeterrentforthecriminal.Furthermore,it
isolatestheoffenderfromsociety.Thereforewillproduceasafety
societyandfreeofcrime.Moreover,whentheprisonerspendslong
timeintheprisonthatwillhelpanopportunelyservicetorehabilitate
him.
However,Somepeoplebelievethatspendinglongertimeinprison
willmixtheprisonerwithothercriminals,sohischaracterwillnot
improveandthisthingincreasestheproblemworse.Onethingwill
solvethatisJudgmentontheprisoner'scivilandsocialworkservice
withanelectronicbraceletaroundhisfoottofollowhim.Thissolution
hasalotofadvantages.Firstofall,thisthingwillimprovethe
behaviorofoffender.Anotheradvantageisthisthingwillhelp
prisonertobemorerespectablewitheverybody.Therefore,prisoner
canmixwithsocietyundergovernmentfollowing.
Inmyopinion,Makingthecriminalactsofthecivilandsocialservice
withanelectronicdevicewillcreateasafetysociety.Thissolutionis
veryusefulthanother.
Finally,governmentshoulddecidedwhichwaysarehavemore
positiveeffectsthanother,forasocietyfreeofcrimesand
dangerous.
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