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Berlin talked about in his text and then compare it with the one they
currently apply.
Because the text is used amongst scholars to challenge and instruct
aspiring scholars, it has a very formal style of diction. The following is one
paragraph example I chose from the text. One of the most obvious features
of the employment picture today is the decreasing number of jobs in
manufacturing and the increasing number in the service sector. The vast
majority of the latter fall into the two unstable employment tiers and offer
few
attractions
for
most
workers.
There
are,
however,
conspicuous
lets look at this sentence closely, and then we will see these prepositions:
in.asasoverforofin and thats why this sentence is long,
shapeless and unreadable.
In conclusion, this is a classical professional and academic article. We
can definitely call it official style. According to readability test, Flesch-Kincaid
Reading Ease is low and Average Grade Level is high. With my analysis of
several sentences in details, the sentences are long and complex. Most
strategies that belong to official style can be found here, such as passive
voice, complex sentences, slow sentence opening, euphemistic etc. The
author shows his credibility successfully. Because he is able to use such
complex academic language, readers are more likely to give credibility to his
ideas and claims. The text is probably speaking to insiders because of
complex and uneasy sentences that English professors and scholars in the
discipline of rhetoric can understand better than the average reader. English
major students start to understand, but arent quite there yet. Their
educated level does not achieve the level which give them ability to
understand the discipline of rhetoric. They need their instructors help to lead
them into the professional field of English study. Therefore, compared to
other majors undergraduate students, they may understand better, but not
as good as their instructors or scholars.
academic article, why did the author use we and I in his writing? (You
might not see them because I didnt put them in my essay. You can find it in
the whole text according to my reference page.) What did he mean we?
Was he talking to those people who are in the English study field or to the
general public? We and I make text like conversation. Therefore, even
though the text is official style, it is not a very restricted official style. I think
what is still needed to be known is why Berlin did this, and what the effect of
it is. We all could think about it.
Reference
James A. Berlin. Rhetorics, Poetics, and Cultures Refiguring College English
Studies published. West Lafayette, Indiana: Parlor Press, 2003. Print.