Rodriguez 1

Cynthia Rodriguez
Professor Jackie
English 113A
November 9, 2015
Outline: Women and men be treated the same
1. Introduction
a) Women and men both deserve the same equal respect and rights.
b) Thesis Statement: Women do not receive the same equal opportunities as
men.
2. Body Paragraph Topic #1: Women are often discriminated because of their
beliefs.
a) The way a girl is raised with a particular religion has a lot to do with the
way they carry their beliefs in which they are.
b) Girls whom are raised with certain beliefs limit themselves to believe they
have certain roles that women must follow. (History Learning Site)
c) Transition sentence: Although women do not receive the same
opportunities as a man, women are often discriminated because of their
beliefs and religion plays a major role on why they are affected so much.
3. Body Paragraph Topic #2: Gender should be a word to define a human
being
a) Women and men are both being treated differently because society
logically puts a title to gender and separates their differences such as having
the men play the role of the tough ones and show women off to be weak.
(History Learning Site)
b) Women are expected to not work and stay at home and raise the children
while men are the ones working and raising the household financially.
c) Transition sentence: Although people may assume that both genders share
their rights the same they dont, because society judges gender to have roles
they must follow and it also affects men.
4) Body Paragraph Topic #3: Women arent treated with respect
a) Society claims a girl to the phrase bitch

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b) The true definition of this phrase clarifies a female dog nothing close to a
human being, but most people say that the reason it is targeted towards
women is because women have to value, they are weak, and have no voice.
c) Although women arent treated with respect why should they be compared
to an animal because theyre voice isnt often heard.
5) Body Paragraph Topic #5: Society look at women as a joke
a) Society makes fun of women by allowing commercials and media in
general to make women look like the weak ones and cant be the heroes
b) When men are joking around with each other they will use the term like a
girl for everything as a way of clowning on each other saying that they are
weak or cannot get something done right.
c) Transition sentence: Society looks at women as a joke but rather than that
why are they also being represented as an insult when somebody compares
you to one.
6. Conclusion:
a) Women should be treated the same and should also be treated with
respect compared to men.
b) Offer a solution: Please help the stop to gender differences, we are all
human and we deserve to be treated equally the same and with respect.
Dont allow society to take this too far. Would you like it if somebody were to
disrespect your mom and called her a bitch.

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Work Cited:

"Women's Rights Movement." Dictionary of American History. 2003,

"Women's Rights." West's Encyclopedia of American Law. 2005,
"Womens Liberation." International Encyclopedia of the Social
Sciences. 2008, and "womens Liberation." The Oxford Pocket
Dictionary of Current English. 2009. "Women's Rights Movement."
<i>Encyclopedia.com</i>. HighBeam Research, 01 Jan. 2003. Web. 10

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http://www.historylearningsite.co.uk/sociology/theories-insociology/feminism/