Professional Documents
Culture Documents
Portrait
definition
AO1
Personal mind
map
yes
yes
Myra Green
c&c
AO1
yes
Myra Green
practical
response
yes
AO2/3
Include Photoshop edits
Studio Lighting
practical
Description of Rembrandt
lighting, butterfly lighting, side
and edge lighting
yes
Fantastic and
through showing
conceptual research
Create using
coggle to neaten
up
Brilliant analysis with
good links to
contextual
information
regarding black
culture and racism
Watch your
punctuation and
sentence length
capital letters after
full stops! 10% of
marks go to spelling
and grammar
These are sufficient,
however I feel you
could be more
inventive with your
framing think about
more details to show
hair, smile lines,
neck
Very effectively
presented and
explained
AO2/3
AO1
no
Go back to your
writing and adjust
this to respond to my
comments within the
text. You need to be
careful with your
sentence structures.
yes
yes
Project
evaluation
yes