Name: Hannah Syed Force

Ao1
Analysis.
How well have you
understood the work
of other
photographers

A02
Progression from 1st
to 2nd response.
How have the photos
been refined

A03
Quality of the
photographs. How
has the subject been
recorded

Unit1.5 Force

Task

Teacher Comment

3 artist analysis (9 photos)

You have the images but where is the analysis you

must complete this section in full using the word
frames that have been provided. Think about the
composition, technical considerations and the
wider issues surrounding the taking of the
photograph.

Nadav kander (3 Photos)

Well done a much better section you are showing

good understanding of the images and the
background to the project. You might think about
separating your analysis into separate column
under each picture this makes it easier to read
and mark

Francois Delfosse

Analysis needed?

Berd and HillBecher (3

Photos)

N/A

Force of nature

The images that you have taken in the pool are

good I especially like the image of the green plant
growing out from the blue sided pool. However
where is your second response in this section
there should be two response minimum

Applied force

Well done you have created a strong body of work

here your use of depth of field especially in the
chalk section is especially strong.

Imposing Architecture

The images that you have taken are good but

there is not enough variety you need to make sure
you are shooting a minimum of 24 shots per
response. These images need to be put into
contact sheets and then a final set of edits placed
underneath them.

3 Strands

Much better contact sheets edits and some

explanation about what and why you have taken
the images you have done. The mixture of
imposing architecture and photomontage works
really well.

Application of technique

You often demonstrate a strong technique across

your different sections you have a strong
photographic eye which becomes more evident as
the sections progress.

Composition

As mentioned above you have a strong

photographic eye and this is evident in your
compositions through the different sections

Location and subject matter

Your choices of locations are good, the central

London images are great and the Barbican is
especially strong.

3 final images

Where are your final set of images

Grade: C WAG:C+

Target:A

Final Comment
Your photographic work is excellent but at present your lack of writtern work through out the project is really
bringing the grade down please o back over the project and put in analysis and description of process.