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Rise of Stalin
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What was the state of Russia prior to Stalin


coming to power?
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Peasant farmers complained about the economic


gulf between themselves and the landowners,
who kept most of the crop money. The peasants
regarded anyone who did not work as a parasite,
and they threatened a violent peasants revolt
unless the landowners handed the land over to
them. The czar of Russia, Nicholas II, a member
of the ruling Romanov family, autocratically ruled
the nation. He rejected the peasants demands
and threatened violence of his own if their
protests persisted. Many students, Stalin
included, supported the peasants, while the
priests supported the czar. (Source #1, pgs. 1819)
The vast Russian Empire is thrown into turmoil in
March 1917 after Tsar Nicholas II abdicates and
the Imperial Government is replaced by a
Provisional Government led by moderate socialist
Aleksandr Fyodorovich Kerensky.(Source #3)
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Stalin took many steps to improve Russias broken state all the while gaining power.
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The state of Russia was struggling prior to Stalin becoming the leader due to the previous rulers bad leadership skills.
Stalin became leader by becoming friends with Lenin and out maneuvering his rivals.

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peasant farmers did not like how the landowners


kept most of the crop money
they held a violent revolt against the landowners
unless they were given land
the tzar of Russia, Nicholas II, rejected the
peasants demands and threatened his own
violence if the peasants did not stop protesting

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The peasant farmers did not like how the


landowners kept most of of the crop money.
The held a violent revolt landowners, only
subsiding when given land.

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The czar of Russia, Nicholas


II, a member of the ruling
Romanov family,
autocratically ruled the nation.
He rejected the peasants
demands and threatened
violence of his own if their
protests persisted.
Nicholas II rejected the
peasants demands and
threatened violence if their
protests persisted.

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The peasant farmers did not like how the landowners kept most of of the crop money so they held
violent revolts. The leader at the time, Nicholas II, rejected the peasants demands and threatened
violence if their protests persisted (James Barter, 18-19). The Russian Revolution came to an end
after the abdication of Nicholas II.

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Tsar Nicholas IIs was forced to abdicate by the Russian parliament because Russia was living under
poverty.
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By 15 March 1917, Tsar Nicholas II abdicated


from the Russian throne, World War I had been
raging for three years and the Russian people
were tired and demoralized. The Bolsheviks
finally came to power on 7 November 1917 but it
was neither a smooth transition nor a smooth
ride once they were in power, for when Russia
withdrew from World War I in 1918, the
Bolsheviks had to fight a bitter civil war with the
White Army who were Tsarist sympathizers. (PG
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Tsar Nicholas IIs throne was later undertaken.


World War I continued on for three years and the
Russians became tired and depressed.

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World War I began after Nicholas II was abdicated and it continued on for three years which caused the
Russians to become even more tired and depressed. Russia withdrew from World War I (Shelly Klein,
44-45) in 1918.

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Stalin moving up
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The meeting with Lenin in Finland was Stalins


first of many strategic stepping-stones to
assuming absolute authority over the Soviet
Union. Stalin arrived filled with high expectations
for making his mark on the party. The meeting
would introduce Stalin to the major figures in the
party he would work with a variety of tasks as he
rose from a minor participant to a major party
force and finally to the supreme leader of the
Soviet Union. (pg. 24)
In 1912, Lenin, then in exile in Switzerland,
appointed Joseph Stalin to serve on the first
Central Committee of the Bolshevik Party. Three
years later, in November 1917, the Bolsheviks
seized power in Russia. The Soviet Union was
founded in 1922, with Lenin as its first leader.
During these years, Stalin had continued to move
up the party ladder, and in 1922 he became
secretary general of the Central Committee of the
Communist Party, a role that enabled him to
appoint his allies to government jobs and grow a
base of political support

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How did Stalin move up through ranks of the communist party?

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meeting with Lenin was Stalins first step


meeting would introduce Stalin to other major figures in party
and begin to move up
In 1912, Lenin appointed Stalin to work for the first Central
Committee of the Bolshevik Party
three years later (in November 1917), the Bolsheviks gained
power over Russia
Soviet Union later founded in 1922, with Lenin as its first
leader
Stalin continued to move up throughout the years
in 1922, became secretary general of the Central Committee
of the Communist Party where he started his political support

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The meeting with Lenin introduced Stalin to other


major figures in the party and caused Stalin to
move up. In 1912, Lenin appointed Stalin to work
for the first Central Committee of the Bolshevik
Party. Three years later (in November of 1917), the
Bolsheviks gained power over Russia. The Soviet
Union was later founded in 1922, with Lenin as its
first leader. Stalin continued to move up throughout
the years and in 1922 became secretary general of
the Central Committee of the Communist Party
where he started gaining political support.

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The meeting with Lenin in Finland (James Barter, 24) introduced Stalin to other major figures in the
party and caused Stalin to move up. In 1912, Lenin chose Stalin to work for the first Central Committee
of the Bolshevik Party. In 1917, the Bolsheviks gained control over Russia. The Soviet Union was later
founded in 1922, with Lenin as its first ruler. Stalin continued to move up throughout the years and in
1922, Stalin became secretary general of the Central Committee of the Communist Party where he
started gaining political support.

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Stalin acquired somewhat small positions like Inspector General of the Red Army and Cabinet Minister
for Nationalities.
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Stalin was given a series of relatively minor


positions such as acting Inspector General of the
Red Army and Cabinet Minister for Nationalities
Stalin made it his duty to back Lenin in everything
he said and did Rather than push himself
forward, Stalin preferred to remain in the
background and thus was quite happy heading up
the Orgburo (Organizational Bureau) whose main
concern was friends and political allies as he
could,nearly always choosing men who came
from humble backgrounds and who had little or
no education because these men were more
easily manipulated. (Source #6)

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Stalin was given somewhat small positions (like Inspector


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Nationalities)
Stalin made it so that he supported everything Lenin did and
say
Rather than pushing further, Stalin stayed in the background
especially happy when heading up the Organizational Bureau
where he dealt with friends and political allies
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Stalin acquired somewhat small positions like


Inspector General of the Red Army and Cabinet
Minister for Nationalities. Stalin made it so that he
supported everything Lenin did and said. Rather
than pushing further, Stalin stayed in the
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Rather than push[ing] himself


forward, Stalin preferred to remain
in the background and thus was
quite happy heading up the
Orgburo (Organizational Bureau)
whose main concern was friends
and political allies as he
could,nearly always choosing men
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Rather than push[ing]... forward,
Stalin preferred to remain in the
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Stalin made it so that he supported everything Lenin did and said. Rather than push[ing]... forward,
Stalin preferred to remain in the background (Shelly Klein, 45), he undertook a job at the Organizational
Bureau where he dealt with friends and political allies.

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Stalin becoming dictator

How did Stalin solidify power and ultimately become dictator?

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Stalin goes all out when given the newly created


post of general secretary of the central committee,
he controls party appointments and develops his
power base
he consolidates his influence further by spying on
his colleagues (tactic became hallmark of his
dictatorship
throughout the years Stalin moves up party ladder
can appoint allies and grow a base of political
support

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Stalin takes charge of the whole party


administration when he is given the newly created
post of general secretary of the Central
Committee, a position that gives him control over
party appointments and allows him to develop his
power base. He will consolidate his influence
further by spying on his colleagues, a tactic that
will become a hallmark of his dictatorship.
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During these years, Stalin had continued to move
up the party ladder, and in 1922 he became
secretary general of the Central Committee of the
Communist Party, a role that enabled him to
appoint his allies to government jobs and grow a
base of political support.
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Stalin assumes control when given the position of


general secretary of the Central Committee. His
occupation allowed him to control party
appointments, appoint allies, and gain more
political support. He strengthens his support even
more by spying on his allies. As the years go by
Stalin moves up the party ladder.

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During these years, Stalin


had continued to move[d] up
the party ladder, and in 1922
he became secretary general
of the Central Committee of
the Communist Party, a role
that enabled him to appoint
his allies to government jobs
and grow a base of political
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Stalin assumed control when given the position of general secretary of the Central Committee. His
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strengthened his support even more by spying on his allies. As the years went by, Stalin... move[d] up
the party ladder (Joseph Stalin).

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Lenin died on January 21, 1924.

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"Stalin remains as general secretary when Lenin


died on 21 January 1924." (Source #3)
By the time Lenin died, Stalin was the undisputed
master of the Soviet Union. Stalin consolidated
his power by murdering or secretly discrediting
his rivals so that there was no one who could
challenge his authority. Stalin proceeded to
dismantle the NEP and eliminate his opposition.
He ordered a series of purges from the late 1920s
through the 1930s that resulted in the deaths of
as many as a million Soviet citizens (some ten
million were arrested). Opponents of the regime
were often sent to labor camps (known as gulags)
in remote areas such as Siberia. The survival
chance rates in gulags were very low. (Source
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By the time Lenin died, Stalin was the undisputed


master of the Soviet Union
Stalin consolidate his power by killing or ruining
the reputation of his rivals so no one could
challenge his authority
Stalin continues to take apart Lenins economic
policy to get rid of resistance

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By the time Lenin died, Stalin was considered the


leader of the Soviet Union. Stalin solidified his
power by killing and ruining the reputations of his
rivals so no one could challenge his authority.
Stalin then continues to take apart Lenins
economic policy to get rid of any form of
resistance.

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Stalin consolidated his power


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there was no one who could
challenge his authority.
... no one... could challenge his
authority

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By the time Lenin died, Stalin was considered leader of the Soviet Union. Stalin solidified his power by killing

and ruining the reputations of his rivals so ... no one... could challenge his authority (Toms Lanford,
31). Stalin then continues to take apart Lenins economic policy to get rid of any form of resistance.

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Stalin contributed a lot to Russia.

Stalin improving Russia


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How did Stalin improve Russia?

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Stalin made many improvements to Russias economy and agriculture. He did this by keeping control over the
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Soon after assuming power, Stalin replaced


Lenin's New Economic Policy (NEP) of the 1920s,
which allowed for some privatization, with
Communist Party guided Five-Year Plans in 1928
and he implemented collective farming at roughly
the same time, which resulted in millions dying of
hunger in the 1930s. Nevertheless, the Soviet
Union made significant progress from its former
status as a predominantly peasant society to the
status of a major world power by the end of the
1930s. (Source #5)
On the 3rd of July Stalin makes a radio address
to the nation. "Comrades, citizens, brothers, and
sisters, fighters of our army and navy," he says,
"We must immediately put our whole production to
war footing. In all occupied territories partisan
units must be formed.Soon after assuming
power, Stalin replaced Lenin's New Economic
Policy (NEP) of the 1920s, which allowed for
some privatization, with Communist Party guided
Five-Year Plans in 1928 ...the Soviet Union made
significant progress from its former status as a
predominantly peasant society to the status of a
major world power by the end of the 1930s.
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The state takes control of the economy,
introducing a program of rapid industrialisation
and agrarian consolidation and setting unrealistic
goals for development. (Source #3)

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soon after assuming power, Stalin replaces


Lenins economic policy with a five-year plan
he also implemented collective farming
Soviet Union made significant progress from its
former status as a predominantly peasant
society to the status of a major world power (by
the end of the 1930s)

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After obtaining power, Stalin swaps Lenins


economic plan with his own five-year plan and
puts collective farming into effect. By the end of
the 1930s, the Soviet Union advances from its
previous status as a mainly peasant society to
the status of major world power.

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Soon after assuming power,


Stalin replaced Lenin's New
Economic Policy (NEP) of the
1920s, with Communist Party
guided Five-Year Plans in 1928
and he implemented collective
farming at roughly the same
time,
He implemented collective
farming

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After obtaining power, Stalin swapped Lenins economic plan with his own five-year plan and
implemented collective farming (Joseph Stalin). By the end of the 1930s, the Soviet Union had
advanced from its previous status as a mainly peasant society to the status of a major world power.

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Stalin did many things to improve Russia.

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Starting in the late 1920s, Joseph Stalin


launched a series of five-year plans intended to
transform the Soviet Union from a peasant
society into an industrial superpower. His
development plan was centered on government
control of the economy and included the forced
collectivization of Soviet agriculture, in which the
government took control of farms. Millions of
farmers refused to cooperate with Stalins orders
and were shot or exiled as punishment. The
forced collectivization also led to widespread
famine across the Soviet Union that killed
millions. (Source #7)
Stalin forced rapid industrialization and the
collectivization of agricultural land, resulting in
millions dying from famine while others were sent
to camps. (Source #8)
The state takes control of the economy,
introducing a program of rapid industrialisation
and agrarian consolidation and setting unrealistic
goals for development. ( Source #3)

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Stalin planned on improving agriculture by forced


collectivization of Soviet agriculture, where the
government took control of farms
millions of farmers refused to listen to Stalins
orders and were shot/exiled as punishment or
sent to camps
forced collectivization led to widespread famine
across the Soviet Union killing millions
state takes control of economy, introducing
program of rapid industrialization and
consolidation and setting unrealistic goals for
development

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Stalin planned on improving farming by forced


collectivization of Soviet agriculture, where the
government took control of the farms. Millions of
farms did not listen to Stalins orders and were
shot, exiled, or sent to camps as punishment.

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His development plan was


centered on government control
of the economy and included the
forced collectivization of Soviet
agriculture, in which the
government took control of [the]
farms.
the government took control of
[the] farms.

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Stalin planned on improving farming by forced collectivization of Soviet agriculture while the
government took control of [the] farms (Joseph Stalin). Millions of farms did not listen to Stalins orders
and were shot, exiled, or sent to camps as punishment.

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How did Stalin maintain control over the people?

Stalin maintaining control of people


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Additionally, Stalin built a cult of personality


around himself in the Soviet Union. Cities were
renamed in his honor. Soviet history books were
rewritten to give him a more prominent role in
the revolution and mythologize other aspects of
his life. He was the subject of flattering artwork,
literature music, and his name became part of
the Soviet national anthem. His government also
controlled the Soviet media.

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Stalin built a cult of personality around himself in


the Soviet Union
cities were renamed in his honor
soviet history books were rewritten to give him a
more prominent role in revolution and mythologize
other aspects of his life
Stalin was subject of flattering artwork and
literature music
his name became part of the Soviet national
anthem
government also controlled the Soviet media
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CITATION::

Stalin created a denomination surrounding


himself. Cities were named after him. Soviet
history books were rewritten to give him a
more powerful role in revolution. He was the
subject of laudatory artwork and literature
music. Even his name became a part of the
Soviet national anthem.

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thesaurus and write them here

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youd like to use as your quotation
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the end. Make sure that it doesnt exceed
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He was the subject of flattering


artwork, literature music, and
his name became part of the
Soviet national anthem.
his name became [a] part of
the Soviet national anthem.

D Paraphrasing with quotation incorporation:

Combine Both A and B2 together with the synonyms of C. You should have 3 + sentences here. Make sure that your quotation is incorporated into your own

sentence.

Stalin made himself the countrys main focus. Cities were named after him. Soviet history books were
rewritten to give him a more powerful role in revolution. He was the subject of laudatory artwork and
literature music. Even his name became [a] part of the Soviet national anthem (The Soviet Union
under Stalin).

PG 10
F Transition Sentence

By making himself the center of attention, Stalin had greater control over the people.
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Stalin ruled by terror and with a totalitarian grip


in order to eliminate anyone who might oppose
him. He expanded the powers of the secret
police, encouraged citizens to spy on one
another and had millions of people killed or sent
to the Gulag system of forced labor camps.
During the second half of the 1930s, Stalin
instituted the Great Purge, a series of
campaigns designed to rid the Communist
Party, the military and other parts of Soviet
society from those he considered a threat.
(Source #7)
Joseph Stalin did not mellow with age: He
prosecuted a reign of terror, purges, executions,
exiles to labor camps and persecution in the
postwar USSR, suppressing all dissent and
anything that smacked of foreignespecially
Westerninfluence. (Source #5)

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Stalin ruled by terror (eliminated anyone who might


oppose him)
expanded the powers of secret police
encouraged citizens to spy on each other
had millions killed or sent to Gulag camps
(during second half of 1930s) instituted Great Purge series of campaigns designed to rid the Communist
Party, military, and other parts of Soviet society from
those he considered a threat
did not mellow with age
prosecuted reign of terror, purges, executions, exiles to
labor camps and persecution in the postwar USSR,
suppressing all dissent and anything that smacked of
foreign - especially Western - influence

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He expanded the powers of the


secret police, encouraged
citizens to spy on one another
and had millions of people killed
or sent to the Gulag system of
forced labor camps.
He expanded the powers of the
secret police

Stalin ruled by terror and got rid of anyone who


resisted. He expanded the powers of secret police
and encouraged the citizens to snoop on each
other. During the second half of the 1930s, he had
millions killed or sent to Gulag camps which
started the Great Purge.
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sentence.

Stalin ruled by terror and got rid of anyone who resisted. He expanded the powers of secret police (Joseph
Stalin) and encouraged the citizens to snoop on each other. During the second half of the 1930s, he had millions
killed or sent to Gulag camps which started the Great Purge.

ASS 3 Q 1

PG 11

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Ass idea + , + Ass idea + dictator) PLUG IT IN!

Para 3 Ass Sentence: (make sure to use an adv. transitional phrase from ASS1 Idea) (write it here)
Stalins involvement in WW11 made a big impact on Russia.

Who did Josef Stalin ally himself with at


the beginning and end of WWII? Why?
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Stalins allies

Q1 Sentence: (write it here)


Stalins allies were Britain and America.

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B1

the fat; put in ellipses where you crossed out


information. If you have multiple sources for this
box, place the citation directly after the passage - i.e.
(Ayer, 28)

On August 23, 1939, Hitler and Soviet leader


Joseph Stalin signed a surprising treaty of
nonaggression; an invasion of Poland seemed
likely. Great Britain and France, uniting as the
core Allied powers, promised retribution.
(Source #11)
On September 17, the Soviet Union invaded
eastern Poland, revealing that the Soviets and
Germans had agreed to partition the country
in their pact. (Source #11)
One advantage of Germany waging war
against the Soviet Union had been a new
cooperation between Allied and Soviet forces.
However, the relationship became strained.
Stalin intended to keep control of Sovietoccupied Poland and was interested in other
German-held territories as well. The Allies
wished to stop the spread of Communism, yet
needed the strength of the Soviet Red Army.
On November 1943, Churchill, Roosevelt, and
Stalin met in Cairo, Egypt. It was decided that
Eisenhower would take Allied forces into
France while The Soviet Red Army would
simultaneously attack the German Eastern
Front. (Source #11)
The progress of the Soviet armies on the
Eastern Front made it imperative for the Allies
to come to terms with Stalin about the fate of
the eastern Europe. (Source #11)
CITATION:

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On August 23, 1939, Hitler and Soviet leader Joseph


Stalin signed a surprising treaty of nonaggression; an
invasion of Poland seemed likely
Great Britain and France, uniting as the core Allied
powers, promised retribution
On September 17, the Soviet Union invaded eastern
Poland, revealing that the Soviets and Germans had
agreed to partition the country in their pact
one advantage of germany waging war against the
Soviet Union had been a new cooperation between
Allied and Soviet forces
relationship later became strained, Stalin intended to
keep control of Soviet-occupied Poland and was
interested in other German-held territories as well

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thesaurus and write them here

in EV Box,, underline the phrase that


youd like to use as your quotation
selection. Write it here with the citation at
the end. Make sure that it doesnt exceed
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One advantage of Germany


waging war against the Soviet
Union had been a new
cooperation between Allied and
Soviet forces.

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Hitler and Stalin signed a shocking treaty of nonaggression.


Great Britain and France united as allies promised retribution.
The Soviet took over eastern Poland on September 17
showing that the Soviets and Germans had decided to partition
the country in their pact. One asset of Germany's war against
the Soviet Union was the new assistance between the Allied
and Soviet forces. The alliance later became tense because
Stalin not only wanted to keep control of Soviet-occupied
Poland but also wanted German-held territories.

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sentence.

The Soviet took over eastern Poland showing that the Soviets and Germans had decided to partition the country in their pact.
One asset of Germany's war against the Soviet Union (Stalin and the West) was the new assistance between the Allied
and Soviet forces. The alliance later became tense because Stalin not only wanted to keep control of Soviet-occupied
Poland but also wanted German-held territories.

PG 13
F Transition Sentence

Stalins decisions affected Russia as a whole.

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Stalin is named 'Time' magazine's person of


the year for 1939 for switching the balance of
power in Europe by signing the nonaggression
pact with Hitler, a decision that is described as
"world-shattering". "Without the Russian pact,"
the magazine says, "German generals would
certainly have been loath to go into military
action. With it, World War II began." (Source
#3)
Stalins relationship with his wartime Allies
Britain and America was dominated by two
issues which were to cause almost endless
conflict. One was the question of the second
front by which Stalin meant the invasion of
France via D Day and the next was the
thorny subject of the post-war boundaries of
the Soviet Union, and the extent to which the
Soviets could influence or control the border
states nearby. (Source #12)

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Stalin named Time magazines person of the year for


1939 for switching the balance of power in Europe by
signing the nonaggression pact with Hitler, a decision that
is described as world shattering
without the Russian pact, German generals would certainly
have been loath to go into military action, with it, world war
II began
Stalins relationship with his wartime Allies - Britain and
America - was dominated by two issues which were to
cause almost endless conflict
one was the question of the second front - by which Stalin
meant the invasion of France via D Day
the next was the thorny subject of the post-war boundaries
of the Soviet Union, and the extent to which the border
states nearby

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or if your sentences look similar structurally, REVISE IT.

CITATION:

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Stalin signed the non aggression pact with Hitler in 1939,


switching the balance of power in Europe. Stalins
relationship with his allies (Britain and America) was
influenced by two problems, one was the question of the
second front by which Stalin meant the invasion of France
via D Day, the next was the thorny subject of the post-war
boundaries of the Soviet Union, and the extent to which
the border states nearby.

C Synonyms: find synonyms using a


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in EV Box,, underline the phrase


that youd like to use as your quotation
selection. Write it here with the citation
at the end. Make sure that it doesnt
exceed 10 words. When you are
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out in EV Box. MAKE SURE YOU
MODIFY IT IF NECESSARY TO
ENSURE IT MAKES SENSE - ellipses
when removing words, brackets when
adding words in

Stalins relationship with his


wartime Allies Britain and
America was dominated by two
issues which were to cause
almost endless conflict. One was
the question of the second front
by which Stalin meant the
invasion of France via D Day
and the next was the thorny
subject of the post-war
boundaries of the Soviet Union,
and the extent to which the
Soviets could influence or control
the border states nearby.
the subject of the post-war
boundaries of the Soviet Union

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sentence.

Stalin signed the non aggression pact with Hitler in 1939 which changed the balance of powers in Europe. Stalins
relationship with his allies (Britain and America) was influenced by two problems, one was the invasion of France via D Day,
the next was the subject of the post-war boundaries of the Soviet Union and the distance to which the border states are.

ASS 3 Q 2

PG 14

Q2 Idea: (Trans. sig. word + Prev. Q idea + , + Q2


idea + verb + ass idea) PLUG IT IN!
Stalins control of the community

Q2 EV Sentence: (make sure to use an adv. transitional phrase from Prev Q) (write it here)
How did the nations involvement in WWII Josef Stalin affect the country as a whole?

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B1

the fat; put in ellipses where you crossed out


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place the citation directly after the passage - i.e. (Ayer,
28)

During the postwar reconstruction period, Stalin


tightened domestic controls, justifying the
repression by playing up the threat of war with
the West. Many repatriated Soviet citizens who
had lived abroad during the war, whether as
prisoners of war, forced laborers, or defectors,
were executed or sent to prison camps. The
limited freedoms granted in wartime to the
church and to collective farmers were revoked.
The party tightened its admission standards and
purged many who had become party members
during the war.

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during postwar reconstruction period, Stalin


tightened domestic controls, justifying the
repression by playing up the threat of war with the
West
many repatriated Soviet citizens who had lived
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like to use as your quotation
abroad during the war, whether as prisoners of war, youd
selection. Write it here with the citation
at the end. Make sure that it doesnt
forced laborers, or defectors, were executed or
exceed 10 words. When you are finished
sent to prison camps
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Box. MAKE SURE YOU MODIFY IT IF
limited freedoms granted in wartime to church and
NECESSARY TO ENSURE IT MAKES
SENSE - ellipses when removing words,
collective farmers were revoked
brackets when adding words in
party tightened its admission standards and purged During the postwar
reconstruction period, Stalin
many who had become party members
tightened domestic controls,
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Amid the reconstruction era, Stalin tightened


domestic controls, justifying repression by
threat[ening] war with the West. A lot of Soviet
citizens who had been brought back from the war
and strained workers were either executed or sent
to prison camps. The few freedoms allowed to
church and collective farmers during wartime were
taken away.

justifying the repression by


playing up the threat[ening] of
war with the West.
Stalin tightened domestic
controls... by threat[ening] war
with the West.

CITATION:

D Paraphrasing with quotation incorporation:

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sentence.

Throughout the reconstruction era Stalin tightened domestic controls... by threat[ening] war with the West
(Soviet Union 1945-1985). The few freedoms allowed to church and collective farmers during wartime were taken
away. A lot of Soviet citizens (those who had been brought back from the war and strained workers) were either
executed or sent to prison camps.

PG15
F Transition Sentence

WWII ended in 1945.


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Although the Soviet Union was victorious in


World War II, its economy had been devastated
in the struggle. Roughly a quarter of the country's
capital resources had been destroyed, and
industrial and agricultural output in 1945 fell far
short of prewar levels. To help rebuild the country,
the Soviet government obtained limited credits
from Britain and Sweden but refused economic
assistance proposed by the United States under
the Marshall Plan. Instead, the Soviet Union
compelled Soviet-occupied Eastern Europe to
supply machinery and raw materials. Germany
and former Nazi satellites (including Finland)
made reparations to the Soviet Union. The Soviet
people bore much of the cost of rebuilding
because the reconstruction program emphasized
heavy industry while neglecting agriculture and
consumer goods. By the time of Stalin's death in
1953, steel production was twice its 1940 level,
but the production of many consumer goods and
foodstuffs was lower than it had been in the late
1920s.

CITATION:

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even though the Soviet Union was victorious in World War II, the
economy had been devastated in the struggle
roughly a quarter of the countrys capital resources had been
destroyed, and industrial and agricultural output in 1945 fell far short of
prewar levels
to help rebuild the country, the Soviet government obtained limited
credits from Britain and Sweden but refused economic assistance
proposed by the US under the Marshall Plan
instead, the Soviet Union compelled Soviet-occupied Eastern Europe
to supply machinery and raw materials
Germany and former Nazi satellites (including Finland) made
reparations to Soviet Union
Soviet people bore much of the cost of rebuilding because the
reconstruction program emphasized the heavy industry while
neglecting agriculture and consumer goods
by the time of Stalins death in 1953, steel production was twice its
1940 level, but the production of many consumer goods and foodstuffs
was lower than it had been in the late 1920s

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Despite Soviet Union being successful in World War II, the


economy had been ruined. About a quarter of the countrys
capital resources had been demolished, and output of
industrial and agricultural goods had declined tremendously. To
try and fix the country, the Soviet government acquired
financial assistance from Britain and Sweden but not from the
United States because of the Marshall Plan. As a substitute,
the Soviet Union forced Soviet-controlled Eastern Europe as a
source for machinery and raw materials. Soviet people dealt
with the majority of the expenses of reconstruction because
the program pronounced industry while overlooking agriculture
and consumer goods. By the time Stalin died, steel production
was twice its 1940 level, but the production of many consumer
goods and foodstuffs was lower than it had been in the late
1920s.

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that youd like to use as your quotation
selection. Write it here with the
citation at the end. Make sure that it
doesnt exceed 10 words. When you
are finished copying the quote here,
cross it out in EV Box. MAKE SURE
YOU MODIFY IT IF NECESSARY TO
ENSURE IT MAKES SENSE - ellipses
when removing words, brackets when
adding words in

By the time of Stalin's death


in 1953, steel production
was twice its 1940 level, but
the production of many
consumer goods and
foodstuffs was lower than it
had been in the late 1920s.

By the time of Stalins


death in 1953, steel
production was twice its
1940 level,

Combine Both A and B2 together with the synonyms of C. You should have 3 + sentences here. Make sure that your quotation is incorporated into your own

sentence.

Despite Soviet Union being successful in World War II, the economy had been ruined. About a quarter of the countrys capital resources
had been demolished, and output of industrial and agricultural goods had declined tremendously. To try and fix the country, the Soviet
government acquired financial assistance from Britain and Sweden but not from the United States because of the Marshall Plan. As a
substitute, the Soviet Union forced Soviet-controlled Eastern Europe as a source for machinery and raw materials. The Soviet people had
to deal with the majority of the expenses of reconstruction because the program pronounced industry while overlooking agriculture and
consumer goods. By the time of Stalins death in 1953, steel production was twice its 1940 level, (Soviet Union) yet the amount of the
creation of merchandise had declined.

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