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How did Adolf Hitler gain support


of the people?
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hitler wanted to bring


germany together and make the
empire better
he held a parade in the city
of nuremberg
hitler told the germans that
their economy will be successful
and they will have peace
the germans believed
everything he had told them
because it sounded positive and
convincing

back at the time, his dream was


to reunite the germanic people
into a mighty empire once again .
each year after beginning his rise
to power,hitler staged a rally in
the proud old city of
nuremberg,hitler promised the
germans what they wanted and
needed to hear

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: Eleanor Ayers pg#12

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Hitler wanted to bring germany


together, and make the empire a better
place for them. He held a parade in the
proud city of nuremberg.hitler gained
support by telling the germans that their
economy was going to improve, .hitler
promised the german things they
wanted and needed to hear .the
germans believed everything he said
because it sounded positive and
convincing.

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hitler staged a rally


in the proud old city
of nuremberg hitler
promised the
germans what they
wanted and needed
to hear

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Hitler wanted to bring germany together, and make the empire a better place for
them. He held a parade in the proud city of nuremberg. hitler told them what they
wanted and needed to hearabout the economy becoming successful , of course the
germans believed everything he said because it sounded positive and convincing.
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:Eleanor,Ayers pg#12

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Germanys economy was in a mess


when Hitler was elected Chancellor
in January 1933. Hitler and Nazi
propaganda had played on the
populations fear of no hope.
Unemployment peaked at 6 million
during the final days of the Weimar
Republic near enough 33% of the
nations working population. Now
Hitler decreed that all should work
in Nazi Germany and he constantly
played on the economic miracle
Nazi Germany achieved This
"economic miracle" was based on

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when hitler was elected


thats when bad things were
happening to germany
people were losing their jobs
and going into debt
people lost all hope for the
economy
women was not allowed to
work
hitler wanted everybody to
work in the nazi
unemployment disappeared
in 1939.

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Now Hitler decreed


that all should work
in Nazi Germany and
he constantly played

unemployment all but disappearing


by 1939.A number of policies were
introduced which caused the
unemployment figures to
drop.Women were no longer
included in the statistics so any
women who remained out of work
under the Nazis rule did not exist
as far as the statistics were
concerned

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when hitler was elected thats when bad


things were happening to germany,
people were losing their jobs and going
into debt.people lost all hope for the
economy, women was not allowed to
work.hitler wanted everybody to work in
the nazi,unemployment disappeared in
1939.

on the economic
miracle Nazi
Germany achieved

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when hitler was elected,thats when bad things were happening to germany,
people were losing their jobs and going into debt,that is when hitler decreed that all
should work in nazi germany and he constantly played on the economic miracle people
lost all hope for the economy, women was not allowed to work.hitler wanted everybody to
work in the nazi,unemployment disappeared in 1939.
sentence.

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How did Adolf Hitler solidify power

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By 1932, Hitler had enough support


to run for president of Germany,
though he lost the election to Paul
von Hindenburg. However, on
January 30,1933, Hindenburg
appointed Hitler as chancellor of
Germany. Within a year and a half,
Hindenburg had died and Hitler was
able to take over both the position of
president and chancellor and
combine them into one position of
supreme leader, the Fhrer. After
legally gaining power in Germany,
Hitler quickly began solidifying his
position by putting those that
disagreed with him into
concentration camps. He created
massive amounts of propaganda
that strengthened German pride by
blaming all their problems on
communists and the jews

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when hindenburg died hitler


took his place of president
he took both positions of
president and chancellor
he combine them into a big
leader
hitler solidify his power for
people that was against him was
put into a concentration camp
he blamed everything on the
jews
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when hindenburg died hitler took over


his place as president ,hitler was able to
take over both the position of president and
chancellor and combine them into one position
of supreme leader ,hitler solidify his power

for people that were against him was


put into a concentration camp,he
blamed the jews for everything.

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within a year and a


half, Hindenburg had
died and hitler was
able to take over
both the position of
president and
chancellor and
combine them into
one position of
supreme leader, the
Fhrer.

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About History
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when hindenburg died hitler took over his place as president ,hitler was able to take

over both position of being a president and chancellor and combine them into one position of supreme
leader ,hitler solidify his power for people that were against him was put into a

concentration camp,he blamed the jews for everything.


CITATION:: Jennifer Rosenberg, About History

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Hitler + coming to power


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Humiliated, early in 1919 they were


forced to sign the Treaty of
Versailles, which officially brought
the conflict to a close and imposed

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they were force to sign off the


treaty of versailles
the country had to close some of
their best industries to the victors
they had to pay huge reparations and lost all
their power

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very harsh penalties on Germany.


The country had to cede some of its
best industrial territories to the
victors, pay huge reparations
(moneys to compensate for the
damages suffered by its
opponents), and overall lost much
power and prestige.

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huge reparations and lost all their power

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they were forced to


sign the treaty of
versailles ,germany
had to cede some of
its best industries to
the victors ,overall
they lost much power
and prestige

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sentence. the germans were forced to sign the treaty of versailles.germany had to sell some of its best industries to
the victors;they had to pay huge reparations and lost all their power..

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When did things begin to go terribly wrong for Hitler?

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Beset by a dwindling supply of


manpower and ever-increasing
Allied aerial and ground attacks, the
once mighty German military
machine slowly began to unravel.
The war of conquest Hitler had
launched in 1939 had now evolved
into a struggle to save Nazi
Germany itself from annihilation.
Above all, the Germans feared the
colossal Russian army steadily
inching its way toward Germany
from the east. After the fall of
Stalingrad, German troops in
Russia had managed to regroup
and go on the defensive but were
continually losing ground. It was
based on a sort of victory fever and
The expansion of objectives was a
significant factor in Germany's
failure at Stalingrad.n
underestimation of Soviet reserves.
In summer 1943, Hitler decided to
gamble for victory one last time in
Russia, and stave off disaster for
Nazi Germany.

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germany machine was slowly


unraveling
when hitler launched in 1939 it
became a struggle to save nazi
germany
they feared the russian army
was coming closer to germany
hitler decided to gamble for
victory last time with the russians

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Allied aerial and


ground attacks, the
once mighty German
military machine slowly
began to unravel. The
war of conquest Hitler
had launched in 1939
had now evolved into a
struggle to save Nazi

germany machine was slowly


unraveling,when hitler launched in 1939 it
became a struggle to save nazi germany
.they feared the russian army was coming
closer to germany,hitler decided to gamble for german military
victory last time with the russians.
machine slowly began

to unravel ,hitler had


launched in 1939, and
evolved into a strugglle
to save the nazis

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Philip Gavin, PG # 84

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germany machine was slowly unraveling,when hitler launched in 1939 it became a struggle to save nazi
germany .they feared the russian army was coming closer to germany,german military machine slowly
began to unravel ,hitler had launched in 1939, and evolved into a struggle to save the nazis.hitler decided to
gamble for victory last time with the russians.
Philip Gavin, PG # 84

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How did DICTATORS NAME


maintain control over the
people/manipulate the people to
maintain control?

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The Nazi party controlled


everything: the news media, arms,
police, the armed forces, the
judiciary system, communications,
travel, all levels of education from
kindergarten to universities, all
cultural and religious institutions.
Political indoctrination started at a
very early age, and continued by
means of the Hitler Youth with the
ultimate goal of mind control.
Children were exhorted in school to
denounce even their own parents
for derogatory remarks about Hitler
or Nazi ideology.

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the nazis
controlled everything
children were
expected in school to disown
their own parents for
derogatory remarks about
hitler
the nazi
controlled the military and all
communication systems
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the nazis controlled everything, children


were expected in school to disown their own
parents for derogatory remarks, about hitler
the nazi controlled the military and all
communication systems.

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Hitler Youth with the


ultimate goal of mind
control. Children were
exhorted in school to
denounce even their
own parents for
derogatory remarks
about Hitler or Nazi
ideology.

hitler youth goal of


mind was to control

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Gavin PG # 36

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hitler's goal was to mind control the youth .the nazis controlled everything, children were expected in
school to denounce their own parents.,For derogatory remarks about hitler. The nazis controlled the
military and all communication systems.

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a growing number of his senior


military commanders had lost
faith in him ,and these practicalminded,battle hardened leaders
had come to believe they were
the last hope to save the german
people from death and
destruction on a nearly
unimaginable scale.

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military commanders started to


lose faith in their economy
the leaders believed that they
were the last hope to save germany
people
they were near death and
destruction

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military commanders started to lose faith in


their economy the leaders believed that they
were the last hope to save germany people
they were near death and destruction.

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practicalminded,battle
hardened leaders
had come to believe
they were the last
hope to save the
german people from
death and destruction
on a nearly
unimaginable scale.
leaders believe the
where the last hope
to save germany
peoples

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military commanders started to lose faith in their economy, the leaders believed that they were
the last hope; to save germany people.they were near death and destruction ,and had no way of gaining
that faith back.
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What was the state of Germany


prior to Hitler coming to power?
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there were several


characteristics which germany
which germany possessed after
ww1 which made them
vulnerable to being
manipulated to someone like
adolf hitler as in most nations,
the economic factors of the time
play a significant role in
determining how a society will
behave, Germany tried to cover
up after war by way of social
spending, germany began
building creating transportation
projects, modernization of
power plants and gas works.

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germany has been manipulated


so many times by someone like adolf
hitler
germany tried to cover up all
their problems after ww1
by social spending and started
to build transportation projects
modernization gas works and
power plants
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germany has been manipulated so many


times by someone like adolf hitler,germany
tried to cover up all their problems after ww1
by social spending and started to build
transportation projects modernization gas
works and power plants.

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Germany tried to
cover up after war by
way of social
spending, germany
began building
creating
transportation
projects
germany tried to
cover up after war by
way of social
spending

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germany has been manipulated so many times by someone like adolf hitler,germany tried to cover up
all their problems after ww1 by social spending they started to build transportation projects
modernization gas works and power plants, to build the economy .
Eleanor H.Ayers

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Hitler's vague policy included a


planned economy in which the
unemployed were put to work on
government projects, working
hours were shortened to open up
jobs, and labor was forbidden to
organize. The government
oversaw all functions of the
economy. All education and
speech was controlled. Curricula
and textbooks were rewritten to
reflect Nazi ideology, and all
movies, newspapers, radio, and
art were regulated by the vigilant
Ministry of Propaganda, under
Joseph Goebbels. One of the
Ministry's main tasks was to
mobilize German anti- Semitism in
support of Nazi persecution of
German Jews, which would reach
its climax in the Holocaust, begun
in earnest in 1941. The Hitler

Youth was a logical extension of


Hitler's belief that the future of
Nazi Germany was its
children.The Hitler Youth was
seen as being as important to a
child as school was. In the early
years of the Nazi government,
Hitler had made it clear as to
what he expected German
children to be like "The weak
must be chiselled away. I want

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the government wasnt worried


about how the economy was running
education and speech was
controlled by hitler
germany semitism supported the
nazi persecution of jews
the holocaust began in 1941
hitler believed the future of nazis
were the children
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the government wasnt worried about how the


economy was running,education and speech
was controlled by hitler ,germany semitism
supported the nazi persecution of jews the
holocaust began in 1941,hitler believed the
future of nazis were the children.

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SENSE - ellipses when removing words,
brackets when adding words in

"The weak must be


chiselled away. I want
young men and
women who can
suffer pain. A young
German must be as
swift as a greyhound,
as tough as leather,
and as hard as
Krupp's steel.

young men and women who can


suffer pain. A young German
must be as swift as a
greyhound, as tough as leather,
and as hard as Krupp's steel.
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european/interwaryears/section10.
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the government wasnt worried about how the economy was running,everything was controlled by
hitler ,germany semitism supported the nazi persecution of jews the holocaust began in 1941,hitler
believed the future of nazis were the children.
sentence.

ASS 3 Q 1

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Ass idea + , + Ass idea + dictator) PLUG IT IN!

Para 3 Ass Sentence: (make sure to use an adv. transitional phrase from ASS1 Idea) (write it here)

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Q1 Sentence: (write it here)

When did things begin to go


terribly wrong for Hitler?
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Germany

invaded

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the quote here, cross it out in EV Box.
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It was one of his greatest


mistakes. With the German
Russians,

slowed

by

'scorched

the
earth'

policy, the German army found


themselves in the Russian
winter without an adequate
(Actual Sentences) use the bullets from B1 and write them into sentences. Use
supply line. In 1943, they B2
sentence variety - use a * where you want to shove your Q. incorp (Box A). When finished,

started their long retreat.At the


same time, the Western Allies
were pushing hard, and began
to advance,on Germany. In
response,

Hitler

withdrew

almost entirely. It was reported


he was increasingly erratic
and

out-of-touch.

In

1944,

there was an unsuccessful


assassination attempt and, in
response,Hitler stepped up the
atmosphere of,suspicion and
terror.

thesaurus and write them here

Russia

under Operation Barbarossa.

advance

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words or phrasings, or if your sentences look similar structurally, REVISE IT.

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PG 13
F Transition Sentence

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the fat; put in ellipses where you crossed out
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place the citation directly after the passage - i.e.
(Ayer, 28)

On April 29th, he married his


mistress. He and his new wife
spent less than forty hours
together in the bunker. Der
Fuhrer, Adolf Hitler, dictator of
Germany, burrowed away in a
refurbished air-raid shelter,
however, in the afternoon of
April 30th, individuals heard a
gunshot from the study. Hitler
had shot himself, and it was
assumed that his new wife
poisoned herself.

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History.com

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at the end. Make sure that it doesnt
exceed 10 words. When you are
finished copying the quote here, cross it
out in EV Box. MAKE SURE YOU
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ASS 3 Q 2

PG 14

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idea + verb + ass idea) PLUG IT IN!

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B1

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place the citation directly after the passage - i.e. (Ayer,
28)

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youd like to use as your quotation
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words or phrasings, or if your sentences look similar structurally, REVISE IT.

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PG15
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directly after the passage - i.e. (Ayer, 28)

B1

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in EV Box,, underline the phrase


that youd like to use as your quotation
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