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When you first think of genre Im sure that you think of different categories that
books or movies fit into. Genre is actually much more complicated because the
types of genre range anywhere from a romantic novel to an obituary. An obituary
has several functions but the main communicative function is making a verdict
about the worth of the dead persons contribution (Tight 126).Along with
obituaries, epitaphs and tributes are also communicative functions. Most obituaries
include details of the cause of death, gender imbalance, and interests of the dead.
The details included in a persons obituary help us remember that persons life,
whether it be their struggles or their accomplishments.
As there are several purposes for the writing of an obituary, it mainly serves as a
rite of passage for the dead. The motive behind the obituary is not only to give
notice of someones passing but to provide the last judgment about their
personality (Tight 126). This can be accomplished through the content contained in
the obituary. The content of the obituary, such as the deceaseds name, date of
birth, date and cause of death, and place of residence, act as the core features of
the text. Any information in an obituary regarding the funeral; time, date, or place,
is also part of the core features. These are the most significant parts of an obituary
because the purpose of an obituary is to inform which the features help to do.
at the time of death. Some of these obituaries are even paired with a photo of the
deceased. All of the obituaries start off listing the accomplishments of each person
whether it includes their success in school or their discovery or invention of
something. This is important in these obituaries because I believe the audience they
are intended for would be a group of mechanical engineers. The obituaries express
the lives of the people as engineers so a group of engineers would make sense as
the best audience. Although the engineers would be the best option for an
audience, the actual audience of the obituaries can differ. For instance, right now I
am the audience of the obituaries because they follow the requirements I need.
Although all of my examples in the corpus are models of obituaries, they all have
various features. The collection of memoirs and the obituary of Robert Johnson are
more similar than my last example because of the format and structure of the
obituary. Both begin the obituaries with the persons first, last, and sometimes
middle name. They then go on to describe the persons early life, mainly including
their education. Followed by their education, the obituary continues with that
persons accomplishments and goals achieved throughout their life. They end each
obituary by stating the details of the death such as, place, time, cause and age. The
details of the persons death are also included in my third example of obituaries but
in a different way. Since the author of these obituaries is the doctor of the patients
referred to in them, he begins each obituary talking about their struggles with
whatever illness they may have had when he treated them. These obituaries serve
as more personal than the others because the doctor goes into detail of the
relationship he had with each specific patient. No names or pictures of the deceased
are present in the obituaries, only initials, to help secure privacy. As my first two
examples are two inform the audience of the celebration of everyones life, the last
one serves as more of a way for the doctor to say goodbye to his patients who have
passed by remembering their lives.
I dont have many critiques as far as content because I believe you accomplished
the goal of this paper for the most part. You answered the questions provided and
gave good supportive examples. You should look at the questions Olivia provided
about the conclusion. Talk more about the development and origin of the genre. I
think what you need to focus on is your style and the way you have presented the
information. What you have already is good but it would be good to think of ways to
spice your paper up. Overall this was an awesome first draft.