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Unit 3- Discussion- topic 1

Hello Amanda, Your topic is interesting. One thing I have observed, you dont have
a request to move forward your proposal on your first paragraph but you give the
details and facts to your topic. In my opinion, you did a great job and good luck.
Sincerely,
Cielo

Hello Stephany. You have an interesting topic but I have observed that you lack of
request to move forward your proposal. All in all, you did a good job because its
simple and informative. Good luck and I am looking forward to read more of your
topic.
Sincerely,
Cielo

Topic 2 discussion
Hello Amanda, very informative on how you point out the details on Thomas video.
Everything else of your thoughts was clearly stated. Good job.
Hello Jason. I think you point out the important details of Thomas video which is
how can email be use formally and using simple words for more clarity. We really
learn much from this video. Good job.

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