ESSAY RUBRIC :

Basic Core (Competence)

Thesis is clearly present and
relevant to the topic, but it
could still be more in depth
and thorough. (1)
Addresses to only few parts
of the question, but remains
superficial instead of in
depth. (Ex. Only states
similarities but no
differences or doesn't
discuss the topic within the
given time period) (2)
States appropriate historical
evidences, but just partially
relates to the question. The
historical evidence is very
topical and does not add to a
deeper meaning. (2)
Only one direct comparison
between two societies is
direct. The others may be
indirect and not relate or
support the thesis as well. (1)
A total of three similarities
and differences in the essay
are present regarding the
question. (1)

Expanded Core (Excellence)

Student achieves all 7 points from
the Basic Core section. Expanded
cores points are only available if
the student gets all of the
components from the Basic Core.
*To achieve points in this section,
student must exceed beyond the
basic core points of 7
Thesis is very specific and
clear in relevance of the
topic. Makes an out of the
box connection and doesn't
vaguely generalize. Needs to
tell what the essay is
comparing and contrasting,
including the use of dates if
possible, and briefly state
the main topics that will be
gone over in the body
paragraphs
Provides additional
examples and historical
evidence to support the
thesis. (Ex. Doesn't simply
state a similarity between
American and Russian
technology, but rather adds
more detail as to how and
why it is a significant

similarity)
Analyzes significant causes
and effects of certain
similarities and differences.
(Ex. How these similarities
and differences affected the
outcome of the Cold War)
Subtotal: 7

Subtotal: 3
Total: 9