Diane Roth Change Matrix - I sign this matrix as all concerns from last review have been addressed

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Start to fill out table of contents

Magnet Status has regulations for what?

Added table of contents for chapter one

Added that the regulations are for healthcare facilities
Added extra clarification/corrections as per tracking changes
Clarification added to need for study
Clarified how study will help leaders, nurses, and patient outcomes
Added information on what chapter one includes, I may need to add to this?
Added information about the focus of the study
Added information from previous study on stress
Restructured sentences.
Reworded sentence to make sense.
Paraphrased instead
Added information regarding the prior sentence.
Added what the themes are going to give to this study
Added a quote.
Linked study to Magnet status
Cited
Discussed what a quantitative design would not do, should I go into more detail?
Added information on sample
See above additions
Thematic coding
Nvivo will be used to analyze the information
Added a paragraph to address this
The findings, do I need to add more to this discussion?
Need work on this section
Need work on this section

Inventory List

Why is there need for the study

Sentence needed for what study will do
Preview of what reader will expect in chapter one
Be more precise
Examples sourced?
Connect two sentences
This sentence seems off
Use citations rather than quotes (save quotes)
Needs sentence linking prior sentence
What are themes analyzed for?
Need quote
What is link to study
Cite studies
Why was quantitative study not chosen?
Are there other characteristics of the sample that might matter here
What kind of sample is this?
What kind of data analysis is this?
Will Nvivo be used to analyze data?
How will this research design help you to achieve the goal of your study?
How will this be presented in chapter 4
Theories should be discussed here
Define terms from problem statement
Will answers be truthful or data accurate?
Will the researchers biases be effectively elimated?
Have you identified YOUR biases?
Is it still not clear how you will handle your biases in the study?
The
is generalizability
Stateterm
the used
poss. here
Limitations
of the research design and note how limitations are
overcome with methodology checks
Would anything be affected if numbers of your study dropped out
Money
andhas
resources
delimate
problemone
to area
in this
Summary
key points
from chapter
with no
newsection
info. End with a sugue into
chapter 2

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Reviewers Requested Change

Changes Made

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