Name: Eloise

Task: Movement

Response:

T+/T-

Ao1
- Mind map
- Analysis of Natsumi Hayashi (YowaYowa)
- Analysis of Francesca Woodman
- Analysis of Michael Bosanko
- Analysis of 3 selected photographers

Your use of vocabulary and description is good but

you need to complete Woodman and Bosanko ASAP.
Continue to analysis for 3 selected images, using the
analysis sheet to help you, make use of the key
words. Also you need to analyse the work of a 3rd
artist for the 3 artist analysis.

T-

Ao2
Explanation of techniques. Annotations of WWW and EBI.
Progress from 1st to 2nd response.
- Levitation
- Zoom blur
- Movement of a figure
- Light painting

You have made a good start on all the tasks but the
fact that you have not completed the requested
amount of images lets you down. You need a first
and second response as well as 3 final images to
show how you refine your work. Please re-do your
light painting contact sheet.

Always refer to show my homework and homework

instructions discussed in class. Ask me to clarify
anything if there is any issue. Similarly, you need to
refer to the Fortismere Weebly page or ask me so
that you can explain the techniques used better in
future.
Ao3
Quality of the photographs taken:
- Application of technique
- Composition
- Other success criteria (e.g. Amount of photos)

You have begun to record your subject better.

Continue to think about locations that work well and
are simple. Avoid busy backgrounds, take clean and
focused images.

T-

Ao4
Final response:
- Present 6 selected photographs
- Evaluation of WWW, EBI. Why did you choose your 6
selected photo

I know that you have had issues with finding a

camera, so you will have time to revisit this project
and add to it. However this needs to be in your own
time. You have taken some good photos andf show
great potential.

T-

Grade: D+

Target: C

Final Comment: Keep up-to-date with the Landscape project and follow the above feedback to fill in the gaps at home.
Some good work here, and good presentation.

Ao1

Develop their ideas through investigations informed by

contextual and other sources, demonstrating
analytical and cultural understanding

Ao2

Refine their ideas through experimenting and

selecting appropriate resources, media, materials, techniques and
processes

Ao3

Record ideas, observations and insights relevant to

their intentions in visual and/or other forms

Ao4

Present a personal, informed and meaningful response

Demonstrating analytical and critical understanding,
realising intentions and, where appropriate,
making connections between visual, written, oral or
other elements.