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Topic:
Technology as Tools for Education - (position: we need to use technology in schools today)
Introduction:
Paragraph 1
Paragraph 2
Thesis statement: Technology provides students with various ways to present their knowledge
Detail 1: there are numerous ways to present your work
o visual, audio, text, combination
o Prezi, websites, PowerPoint, Animoto
o computer based or mobile based apps
Detail 2: the tools are user-friendly
o the tools are so easy to use that children can make presentations
o tools like Puppet Pals, Garage Band
o "Researchers in Massachusetts have created a basic computer coding app that they say
is the first designed specifically for children as young as 5. Kids who haven't yet learned
to read can use the app to craft their own interactive stories and games." Taken from:
Meet ScratchJr, the App that Teaches 5-Year-Olds How to Code: A new app teaches kids
as young as age 5 to code their own stories. by RODRIQUE NGOWI
Detail 3: provide users a way to stimulate their audience
o "According to the National Center for Biotechnology Information, at the U.S. National
Library of Medicine, the average attention span of a human being has dropped from 12
seconds in 2000 to 8 seconds in 2013. This is one second less than the attention span of
a goldfish. Thats right, goldfish have an attention span of 9 seconds 1 second more
than you and I." Taken from: Thanks Social Media Our Average Attention Span Is Now
Shorter Than Goldfish [SLIDESHARE], By Michael Brenner, Published on May 30, 2014
o Technology allows us to the opportunity to display information and our learning through
various mediums in order to keep your audience's attention.
Paragraph 3
Thesis statement: Students must become familiar with technology for future employment
Detail 1: Many jobs today require technology to complete a task
o teachers need technology to do report cards, teach lessons and communicate
o meter readers use technology to issue tickets
o police use technology to solve crimes
computers in their cars
infrared cameras
computers to recreate accidents
"Significant changes in the workplace are the result of new and advanced
technology. For the past generation, technological inventions and
improvements seem to be introduced every week. The trend is guaranteed to
continue. Technology's impact on the 21st century workplace will result in rapid
changes." Taken from: How Is Technology Impacting the Changes in the 21st
Century Workplace?, by Ruth Mayhew, Demand Media, Dec. 28, 2015
Begin with strong statement to tell your reader that your opening statement is true: Students
need to use technology in schools today
o Ask a question
o Make a strong statement
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Use a quote
Finish with a strong statement that promotes your thesis statement. Say that you are right.
Implementation Plan
1. Students evaluate the outline
a. Using color coding, indicate:
i. Topic sentences
ii. Supporting details
iii. Further supporting details
iv. Examples
2. Introduction
a. create a thesis statement
b. create sentences telling the reader what you are going to talk about
c. create a 'lead-in' sentence to the first paragraph
3. Paragraph 1, 2 & 3
a. create a thesis statement - make it interesting
i. Example: It is as easy as pushing a few virtual buttons to find out who won the
War of 1812, or who wrote Catcher in the Rye, or how to fix a 1998 Ford Taurus
window leak.
b. write a sentence for Detail 1. Make sure it connects to your thesis statement
c. now, connect the supporting details for 1 by creating sentences that go along with it
d. put examples in as they connect to the point/detail before it
e. This process is repeated for all details and supporting details
f. ** Make sure they integrate each element in their own words. Make them do it one
step at a time.
4. Conclusion