In my literacy narrative essay I did a couple of changes. I did everything you
recommended me to do I took off the extra spaces from my title to my 1st paragraph. Hopefully I fixed my run on sentence correctly I also kind of rephrased it a little. I also added a little bit more towards the end of the paper. There are also minor corrections that I did that slipped my mind while writing my paper, you also spotted them so I corrected them.