Literature Review Paragraph Revision Strategies:

Introduction:
- Remove unnecessary, repetitive sentences. (highlighted in First Draft)
- Accuracy of information
- Accurately reveals scholars arguments.
- Add sentences about what scholars say about the characteristics of Holmes.
- Revise the thesis: more details so the reader know what to expect.
Development Paragraph:
- Adding more synthesis, rather than summary.
- Clearly indicates the point of the paragraph in the topic sentence.
- Provide sufficient background information for the scholars and their texts.
- Concise structure scholarly texts must work together on a single topic.
Conclusion:
- Add a summary statement about the thesis of the essay
- Make broader statement
Others:
- Revise grammar literacy present.
- Correct MLA format citation
- Accurately understand the texts
- Remove unnecessary/ repetitive sentences

PRIORITIZE:
1. Structure- every paragraph has its point.
2. Add synthesis what scholars say about the characteristic of Holmes
3. Remove repetitive sentences
4. Grammar