Jessica Laze

2/4/14
2B

Third Person, Im really good at Essay Reflection

What was the most challenging part about completing this assignment?
I believe the most challenging part about completing this assignments was
revising the paper and putting it in third person and even that wasnt very difficult.

What is the difference between a narrative essay and an informational essay? How
might they be the same?
In a narrative essay it is a story or personal experience and an informational essay is
filled with facts and evidence. They are the same because they follow the literature
rules and they can cover the same topic but from different views. Such as dealing
with cancer in a narrative can be a personal experience while there is an
informational essay filled with facts about cancer.

How did you use the revision process to improve the quality of your informational
essay?
I used the revision process to improve my informational essay by taking the
feedback I had received and worked with that to improve the quality of the essay
and edit it.

How did the format of the 5 paragraph, keyhole essay support the objective of the
informational essay?
The format helped the objective of the essay because the objective was the
paragraph being formal and using MLA formatting which is formal helps get that
point across.
Jessica Laze
2/4/14
2B

Did presenting the essay to your classmates in the third person point of view make
the process easier or harder? Explain.
Presenting in third person to the class made it both difficult and easy. It was
difficult at some points because I was very tempted to speak in first person. It made
it easier because I felt a little more comfortable speaking about what I am really
good at.

Why is it important to be comfortable with sharing your accomplishments?
It is important to be comfortable to share your accomplishments because in the
future it will be necessary to show your achievements in order to get into a good
college or university, get a good job position, raises, etc. If you dont share those
accomplishments other people may speak about theirs and therefore beat you in
whatever it is.


Discuss the importance of MLA formatting, including what you learned?
MLA formatting is more professional, the most important considerations in using
this style include paper structure, stylistic issues, and citing research, which
includes in-text citations and a works cited list at the end of the paper. In the future
it is better to use such formatting in formal writings.