Professional Documents
Culture Documents
Stuff and things Mismatched socks - disconnected, unrelated ideas Erratic thinking
Spins with little support; uneven Like a skeleton with general vocabulary Carefree zephyr, redundant, vague information
Feels like student is trying TOO hard Better flow with meaningful transitions Some star qualities
Good student working prompt (essential elements, holds together, a few rough spots)
Insightful Nothing extraneous Elevated vocabulary Everything holds together Feels good to read aloud
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